At some point in your post it reads "walking alongside him down the hallways of their kingdoms castle" which seems pretty harmless, except that it is moving my character. Not a huge deal, but in future try to get approval for that sort of thing. I find nothing else of issue in the rest of it and will get to responding hopefully before the end of the night. That said Sariel will not have moved from outside Lethonel's door.

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@The_written_John

I am defeated. I should probably fix that... oops.

I get that my characters can be a bit light hearted... so I'll try to see what I can do with Rida to make her a bit less light hearted... welp I can always make her a total wimp and cry and stuff

what you guys think i should with her?

As for Cythlla she may be taking down a village if you guys are fine with that, but I'm considering doing a farm instead to have her start small

I might have taken the liberty of creating a group of scholars under the King-- sort of the king's personal researchers. Of course, this is a mere proposition, and can still be changed. Also, yeah, Lethonel doesn't have powers... yet... I hope.

Anyway, I made the post whilst I was reeling from my final papers, so pardon me for any errors.

Should I assume that cythlla is at the meeting with nya (its name is too complicated to remember how to spell)
Or just else where? If she is elsewhere then is she already working for him anyways?@Leslie Hall