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my character's semblance makes him a sitting duck. whats wrong with two foxes on the same team. the foxes that fight together...um...i'm out of puns, sorry. :3
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there's nothing wrong with two foxes on a team. also, I might have figured out something from the latest episode of rwby. also, who else is super hyped for the RWBY game?
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Me, btw my semblance causes issues. It makes it hard for her to see as well, and she has to be careful not to ruin her ranged team mates ability to fight
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i am wish i had a computer to play it but i can still watch it on youtube im sure tons of folks will stream it. i just started watching the new volume. i'm up to chapter 3 cant wait for 4 and 5.
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@Rex

Some don't even have a semblance yet so maybe another with a more negative side effect will pop up.

Silver is now also foxy hehehehehehehe

On a side note...
@OneWayOut

I was thinking of adding a bit more to my profile if that is alright? Want to add a few more things in that Nova herself will not know, remember or will have false memories of.
Plus already added a little bit to form three of her weapon which isn't too noticeable. And wanted to add something in her other section that will tie into the history thing she doesn't know.


Everyone is allowed to edit their characters as they see fit. Withing reason that is. :)
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I would rather have the permission >.> I know I don't need to but I like to so yeah XD
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@OneWayOut When did you say you were going to start the ic?
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@OneWayOut When did you say you were going to start the ic?


Tomorrow at the latest.
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Is the last spot on RAVN reserved? I don't really mind starting a new team if that's the case!
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Is the last spot on RAVN reserved? I don't really mind starting a new team if that's the case!


It was but... the person's writing quality (based on what I saw in the sheet) was not what I was looking for at a mid-high casual level even after I explained what edits should be made and they 'revised' it.

I really look for some good thought and effort put into the character sheets, which is why I offer suggestions whenever I can. A CS is all I have to look at the quality of writing someone has, and if the sheet is poor then... I can only assume the writing reflects as such. And this goes for everyone. Even if I know them and have rped with them before.

If you would still like a different letter, let me know. Obviously things are not locked until the rp starts. :)
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Ok ok... I think the history is better.... I am trying trust me just so out of practice v.v
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Ok ok... I think the history is better.... I am trying trust me just so out of practice v.v


I noticed you made an edit. :) Thank you for listening to picky old me haha. The history is alright, go on and add her to the characters tab. Remember to please remove all hiders. Some of us can't click them :)
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Awesome! And its ok your being picky so that its good. As I said its been a while so I was a bit out of practice at my CS making. Thanks for putting up with me
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@OneWayOut Hey guys! So sorry for the delay. I hope you didn't mind too much. Welp, here it is!

Character Sheet




Name:
Venus Aster

Age:
17

Gender:
Female

Race:
Human

Appearance:
Standing and weighing in at about 115 lbs and 64 inches (5'4"), Venus is naturally a very petite, young girl. Her slim and slender body allows her to move quickly on and off the battlefield.

Weapon Name:
Aurora's Melody

Weapon Appearance/Function:
Venus Aster's weapon is quite unconventional, to say the least. Her primary weapon. Aurora's Melody, is a flute that she uses as an outlet for her summoning capabilities.

Type:
Aurora's Melody is a very versatile weapon; In most circumstances, Venus is able to react to her opponent's tactics rather effectively. It can not only be used as a melee weapon to fight along side her teammates, but also to conjure certain creatures to fight for her cause.

Weapon Derivation:
Aurora's Melody is based on a simple woodwind instrument, a flute.

Holstered/Sheathed Appearance:
When "sheathed", Venus' weapon is stored into a small, cylindrical capsule, about the size of her hand. The capsule includes a button on the top which Venus can push to reveal her flute. By simply pressing a certain key on the flute, Aurora's Melody will once again retract into it's capsule form. This form also creates a clip that allows the white-haired musician to easily keep it on her being.

Form 1:
The retracted form of Aurora's Melody that Venus Aster usually carries it around as.

Form 2:
The most common form that Aurora's Melody goes into; the basic flute state. In this state, Venus Aster is able to activate her Semblance and conjure creatures to fight along side her. Each melody that Venus plays on the flute activates a different creature, meaning that specific beasts are bound to specific melodies. However, the stronger the beast, the longer the melody that Venus must play.

Form 3:
Aurora's Melody only takes this form when the Huntress In-Training feels that the time is right. Inside of the flute lies a hidden blade that Venus can take out by easily dismantling the flute into two pieces. After taking it apart, one half of the flute ejects a blade, about the size of her forearm, that Venus can use to fight with on the front lines.

Personality:
A real Kuudere. Venus Aster's personality mainly consists of . . . Well, nothing. Venus is anything but an open book; Constantly keeping to herself and not speaking to people too often. She is almost always calm and collected, which can sometimes be an upside with her teammates. However, as most Kuudere's are, her true personality is hidden behind the mask that is known as pain.

History:
"Alright honey, go head and open up your next gift!" My mother said to me as I violently ripped the beautifully wrapped box apart into nothing but shreds. "A flute, wow! I-I love it Mom! Thank you!" I said as I wrapped my arms around her waist. Soon enough, warm tears began to roll down my face. "Aw, Venus! There's no need to cry. I know that you've really been wanting one. I couldn't resist getting it for you on your birthday! But guess what, Venus? I've still got one more surprise for you! My mother got up from the couch, and opened up a simple jar. From the jar, she took out two airplane tickets; With my puffy eyes and all, I couldn't really make out what it said, except for one word: VALE. I once again felt my tears build up in my eyes, and then my let out a light chuckle as if she knew I would react this way. "That's right, honey. We're going to the Kingdom of Vale for the one and only Vytal festival you've been dying to see!"

That was it. This is when it all started.

"Don't worry about packing all that much. I've already done most of our packing because we're leaving today!" My mother, Zara, said in a burst of dynamic expression. I wasn't completely sure about my feelings at this point - Was I to be nervous or excited? Maybe a bit of both. However, my tears still wouldn't stop falling, so my mother brought me in for one, last hug. "I love you so much, Venus. This is all because you're the best daughter anyone could ever ask for. You've really braved all of the things we've been through with your father abandoning us and all. You mean everything to me, you know that?" She said to me as she stroked my hair. I didn't know what to say, except to be extremely grateful. My mom once again let out a light giggle as she let me go from her grasp. Alright Venus, we leave in a few hours, so if you need to pack anything else, I suggest you do it now!"

We eventually got to the airport after a long car ride that felt like forever due to my excitement. While I was in the car, I couldn't stop thinking about watching all of those Huntsman and Huntresses In-Training duke it out in the tournament. Oh, how cool it would be to become one of them - But those thoughts were for another day. Soon enough, my mom and I finished all of our boarding-related things and got onto the plane. Smooth sailing from here I suppose. "Venus, aren't you excited?! We're going to have so much fun!" My mother said to me as we sat down in our seats. "I really am Mom. I can't thank you enough for this, but I'm honestly really exhausted right now. I'm just gonna take a quiiicckkk nap." I yawned loudly as she laughed at my silliness. "Go ahead honey, you're gonna need all the rest you can get before the festival!" I nodded to her then stared outside of my window. We hadn't lifted off yet, but I was too damn sleepy to actually stay up for that. In a matter of minutes, I was already slobbering on my shoulder.

Screaming. Crying. That's all I could hear, yet I was still in my dream state.

I felt a firm hand grasp my shoulder and shake me into reality. Before I even opened my eyes, I knew something was very wrong. I then heard a whistle of air come out from above me. I opened my eyes to see that air masks had just shot out from the overhead compartments. "M-Mom! What's going on?!" I yelled over to her. "Don't worry honey, everything wi-" Then a huge jolt launched me forward into the seat in front of me, and I fell unconscious.

I woke up with sharp pains all throughout my body as if someone had just whacked me with a hammer all over my body. My surroundings seemed to be a large forest, with tall trees bearing right over me. It was nighttime, so there wasn't much light, except for a fire that was emitted from the plane crash. I tried to unbuckled my seat belt and though it was a struggle, I eventually managed to do it. I fell from my seat and onto the floor. "M-Mom! Please help me." I looked up at the my mother's seat, yet there was no one in it. I once again evaluated my surroundings, but this time, the deaths of these people really kicked in. "N-No. . . This isn't re-" I was suddenly cut off by a loud groan. It sounded like my mother! I tried standing up, but fell right back to the floor. "Come on Venus, now is not the time for this." After several tries, I was eventually able to prevail and walk at a slow wobble. I closed my eyes as I walked down the isle, as I didn't want to see the bodies. "V-Venus! I-Is that you. . ?" I heard a nearby voice call, which was obviously my mother. "Mom, where are you?!" I shouted. A hand then grabbed leg, and I yelped. Then, I looked down to see my mom, Zara, laying on the floor. "Mom!" I shouted as I tried to kneel down on the floor. This was too much. I then began to break down and heavy amounts of tears poured down my face. "Shh, don't cry, Venus. Listen to me, it's not safe here. You have to get out of here. Everything will be alright, baby. Just remember, that I always lov-"

The next thing I knew, my mother was dragged across the floor by a large paw and then killed. They were Grimm.

The adrenaline then shot throughout my body, and I made a run for it. I didn't stop running. I didn't stop crying. I didn't stop fighting for my life.

A few hours had passed, and I was still running through the forest. It was beginning to become daylight, and I felt my body begin to give out. 'This is it.' I thought. 'My final breathes.' I then fell hard against the dirt floor. My vision was hazy by this time, but I saw a silhouette approach me. I couldn't tell who it was but I could make out a few things.

Their white hair, black glasses, and green clothes.

Emblem:


Color:
Floral White

Combat Style:
Venus Asters' combat style consists of her staying on the furthest edges of the battle, where she can safely summon her creatures to aid her teammates. However, when she feels that she has conjured a solid amount of beasts or if her opponents have been weakened, Venus dashes to the head of the battle with her blade to deal the killing blows.

Strengths and Weaknesses:
+ Her agile and acrobatic like movement make it easy for her to dodge and quickly move across the battlefield.
+ The Huntress In-Training tends to be quite cooperative and compatible with her teammates.
+ Venus' battle style let's her stand on the outskirts of battle, which let's her conserve a lot of energy - She doesn't overexert herself and get tired out in battle.

- Venus' combat style can be easily countered if she is targeted first by the enemy or unable to get to a safe distance to summon her beasts.
- Her personality can sometimes leads to a lack of communication, which could jeopardize missions or battles.
- Venus Aster does not have much physical strength, which puts her at disadvantages when using her blade.

Semblance:
Venus Aster's semblance is the most important factor in the fighting style. Her semblance grants her the ability to summon mythical creatures, each with their own abilities and uses, to aid her on the field. By playing certain melodies on her flute, her emblem appears on the floor - which, in turn, develops into the creature bound to the melody.
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yay team ravn is finally complete! the only thing that would make it better if ariel's weapon turned into a hachet. :3
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@JustAriel You already know she's accepted. Move her to the characters tab and remove the hiders.

Also... I love love loooooove the weapon idea! Why didn't I think of that? Like, you could totally kick serious ass while making pretty music and everyone can be dancing, unless its the guys that are getting their asses kicked and then its just awesome cause.... ifidw djiegrvnirgirjgfopeqk rovkorfe!

Me: *trying to explain without fangirling*
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@onewayout that new siggy tho! :3
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Wow! I love the new signature!
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Wow! I love the new signature!


Thank youu!
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It's so mesmerizing O.O

I got out of my movie and I was like. I'll check what is ne....omg it's so pretty! xD
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