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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Raijinslayer
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@Mr Allen J So here's my revamped Alex, with some new abilities to mix in witth his new focus.

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My time zone is like GMT but when it's the weekends I stay up pretty late to game anyway myself.

Also in terms of the earlier discussion about gender, there is also one agender character, but I guess biologically female xD (which really doesn't matter but still). I admit I went with mostly female though.
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@RaijinSlayer I'd add as a weakness to Alex that his drones need the required materials to create things stored inside of them. Since they're small, they can perhaps go back to the queen to refill. That would make sense logically. Perhaps to balance him you could drop or nerf another weakness, as adding a material restriction would probably under-power him some.

EDIT: To clarify, he's definitely well-balanced. I'm just thinking about how the drones would work logically.
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@MaxxOkay, I went with your idea, because it did help with the logic of his ability a bit and helps to better visualize the process in ones head. Currently working on my second character, though might finsih this weekend instead of tonight, it's getting late on my end.
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@Raijinslayer Accepted.

Also, we're going to get off the boats soon, and get introduced to our wonderful room mate drama.
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@Mr Allen JNice, post will be coming either later tonight or tomorrow, got plans tonight(that sadly don't include seeing the Force Awakens), so probably won't have much time to post until it gets late.
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Whoot whoot room mates... That'll certainly be interesting.

I'll be able to post later tonight, but won't be around much tomorrow (because of the Force Awakens :P)
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Saw The Force Awakens last night. You should go see it. Won't tell you anything else.

Also, @Scoundrel, I've been reading your posts, and you might want to tone the fancy words down a bit. There's a difference between expressing your character's personality and throwing a thesaurus at your readers.
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@MaxxYeah about that ... it's slowly becoming a habit. Well anyway, I'll make sure to not overdo it.
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@MaxxYeah about that ... it's slowly becoming a habit. Well anyway, I'll make sure to not overdo it.


Yeah, it happens to most people. I used to do it a lot, but I realized that using big words doesn't make one's writing better. It's something to watch out for. In my writing, I occasionally actually go back and remove large SAT words from my prose to make it more understandable.
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I occasionally do that a bit as well

Im looking forward to the force awakens though, hopefully it'll be good :)
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@Maxx I agree it may not make things better but it does expand your vocabulary. As for me, I tried to use that approach for the sole purpose of avoiding redundancies. A common pet-peeve of mine, actually and it's becoming one of the main reasons why I often encounter writer's block. I do admit that at some point when you use these words, it will sound exactly the same compared to when you just simplify the prose, only adding little emphasis to the matter. It's just that I dislike my old way of writing and I've been trying to change it by using a different approach. Probably this might not be the correct one but it can help improving the process.

EDIT: I've already received spoilers from TFA thanks to my co-workers. Regardless, I'm still going to watch it.
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So I'm researching my third character (he has a form of ESP), and I found out that the world record for the Rubik's Cube is 5.25 seconds. Don't believe me? Watch this.
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I have a friend who is crazy mad into Rubik's Cubes (he has like 10 at least) and he's made me watch that before. It's super amazing.
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@Maxx, @He Who Walks Behind, @FernStone

My post response'll be up later tonight. Can't do it right now 'cause I'm goin' to see STER WERRS and everyone knows that takes higher priority. No spoilerinos, pls.

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Before you bitches say anything, I approved Urban's sheet on skype.
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Before you bitches say anything, I approved Urban's sheet on skype.


And Allen's my bitch
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I was waiting for the "you know I've known Allen for awhile and knows what he looks for and.........."
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... It'd be a real bitch if someone made another character right now.
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I was waiting for the "you know I've known Allen for awhile and knows what he looks for and.........."


I've known Allen for a while and I know what he looks for...

Penis relate powers/Hentai Monsters

Dont even try to deny it.
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