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And a bb-gun will not get confiscated at the airport.


Have you been to one recently?

@Prudence

This takes place very shortly before Phantom Menace. The Sith have been extinct for nearly a thousand years, and the Republic hasn't had an official army for I don't know how long. A pretty small part of his backstory, but one that needs fixing to mesh with the current period.

I also believe that Mandalorian armor is too good to start with. A ship is too much to have in the beginning too, and he's absurdly well armed. We're trying to start at the bottom here, but your character is already fully equipped, where's he going to go from there?
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@Gisk: Not with a bb-gun! Don't want to test it out really xD But I once got in a police control with one...went real smooth! Luckily I didn't had my flintlock pistols with me at that time because I doubt that it would have gone smoothly then! Here in Germany it is okey to own a bb-gun with the age of 18 but flintlock pistols are a grey zone!

And shortly? Well I had planned the setting around 200-300 years before Phantom Menace! The Jedi's are still in the progress to gain their former strength! You won't see them quiet often and the federation is still fighting things out between theirselfs before trying to get rid of the republic!

Mandalorian are still nearly extinct but I guess the death watch is still around..Dunno never really payed attention to that lore part!

Anyways
@Prudence; pretty much what Gisk said! I like growing throughout a rp...if you want to spice things up by adding an extra party to interfere with ours....if can give you such roles in some parts of the rp but as he is right now, he is too powerful!

Mandalorian armour alone is one of the best things in the star wars lore! The helmet has a chemical filter, smoke filter, intigrated smell sensors, intigrated sound sensors, intelligent self dimming glasses, targeting and tracking systems for up to 15 targets, a back camera, a Comlink and to top it off....A cooling system!

I personally think they could have added an intigrated disco ball as well but mehhh!

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To put that Mando helmet in perspective: Storm Trooper standard issue only filters smoke. And those are supposed to be some boss soldiers.

The one Prudence pictures would definitely be heavy armor, too. Full plates with a textile undersuit. The one Boba wears in the OT is Medium. Mostly textile, with strategically placed plating.
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So if I understand:
Reducing the rifle to a pistol would be acceptable/encouraged,
Light armor is no big
grappling launcher is no big,
communicator is no big,
Knife is no big,
Airspeeder could be problematic unless he built it from junk himself, but at least he isn't asking for his own ship to start.
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Knighthawk! You are already accepted xD

I am okey with you having a tad more to start since the character himself has all reasons to explain why he got it! An Airspeeder is a good thing to have. The guild encourages the hunter to normally 'rent' gliders from the civilian so.... *cough* yeah! The rifle is also okey! Just don't swing it around in places like Coruscant or other core worlds! Your character is from the outer rims, normally there they wouldn't give a flying duck! Other systems gladly look the other way if given caps but jedi infected do-goodey-planets ....Well They want to take your precious blaster rifle away!.....and then normally complain that you are having problems with the bounty up ahead! My advice? Use some dummy-thermal-detonators and stick it onto them! The jail is worth the look on their face!
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Apologies. I misunderstood your setting. I'll edit today
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I tagged your tag! So tag that!

Oh yeah? Well I'm tagging your tag...of my tag!

So bananas.
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Sorry about that guys. I misread the OP and thought this was set during the Old Republic. This is a character I use on a Star Wars only RP site, and our current Timeline is set in the Old Republic. I edited and reposted here because it mostly fits. I've edited the equipment, and changed the picture for the armor to take away pretty much all the plates, but keep the helmet that gives it the signature look. Can nerf the helmet (IE no filters, rebreather, etc) If I have to. Anyways, here you go:

Name: Prudii Kyramud
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance:
Affiliation: Independent Mercenary
Background:

Early Life

Prudii was born on Mandalore to father Kronos Kyramud and mother Droma Kyramud. His father worked part time for MandalMotors while home, but worked primarily as a bounty hunter. His mother, too, worked at MandalMotors, and was a supervisor over starship design. The Kyramuds lived in compound like house that was rather large roughly 50 klicks south of Keldabe. The homestead was fortified to withstand an attack for a short period of time, and featured bunkers and reinforced walls, custom designed by Kronos himself incase one of his jobs ever followed him home. Prudii's father was killed while hunting a bounty. Prudii, who had been training under his parents to become a warrior as well, was devastated by the loss of his father. At age 13 he passed his Verd'goten and was christened as a true Mandalorian. Shortly later when Prudii was 14, Droma Kyramud died of a respiratory infection from an accident with starship coolant at MandalMotors. This left Prudii emotionally scarred and alone on Mandalore. Running from the pain, and wanting to escape his traumatic past he left Mandalore with armor that had been fitted for him after passing his trials.

Time on Nal Hutta
Achute Bukee, uba ye wanya kouwahh, an kouiohe. «Hello Boy, you look weak, and cold.»

The words had been spoken to him by a Hutt that Prudii had been thrown in front of so many years ago. He had run away from Mandalore like a batt out of hell, and to the Outer Rim he had been flung. Like a bad piece of meat each world had spat him out, and to another world he had landed. One of those worlds he found himself on was 'Hutta, and on the plate of the Desajilics. Prudii had been dressed in rag tag armor. The least amount of plates possible to constitute as 'armor', a cheap blaster rifle, a an accurate shot had made him a cheap gun for hire, but the Hutts had seen something more than just a cheap gun.

Jee neu cuee ai wa becmi keepuna du uba. Jeejee caiot bapheu uba, jeejee caiot bapheu uba, jeejee caiot woy uba wa killee, hatkocanh uba doth chalanh du da? «I see more than a simple blaster in you. We can hone you, we can sharpen you, we can make you a killer, would you be interested in that?»

The Hutt had spoken in Huttese, and at that time Prudii hadn't understood a word of it. However there had been a poorly painted green protocol droid standing beside him that had earlier inquired about Prudii's native tongue, specifically mando'a or basic. Prudii had told him basic, and thus the droid had transferred all of the pertinent words from the Hutt into basic for him.

"I... I am.. yes..."

Those had been the words that sealed his fate for the next three plus years. It had been half a year before the Hutts had been able to use Prudii for anything profitable. Those months had been spent in training, converting the young thin boy into something more dangerous. Exercising him, training him, and outfitting him improved weapons and armor. Now here he was three years later, still in the service of the Hutts.

Prudii hopped on the first transport off world, which took him deep into the Outer Rim. There he bounced around, riding transport from world to world taking on small jobs. He made a bit of a name for himself as a hired gun with a lackluster moral compass. While bouncing around Prudii found himself on Nal Hutta. Shortly after arriving Prudii was hired by Majordomo Nor'baal for a series of debt collections and bounties. The Hutt was pleased with his results, and hired him on regular for a number of years for varying jobs between a bodyguard to a debt collector to a bounty hunter. While in Nor'baal's employment Prudii was trained by the Hutt's security specialists. Weapons were bought for him, and new armor pieces procured when he outgrew his previous pieces, imported from Mandalore.

Move to Chandrila
After years in the service of Nor'baal the Hutt paid for and secured him a spot on a transport ship bound for Chandrila, the capital of the Republic, where Prudii would grow in skill and begin taking on higher jobs. Upon staying on Chandrila for a short period Prudii became rather self sufficient.

Prudii in his personality is a very walled veiled person. He usually carries a sarcastic aggressive attitude with him wherever he goes. This sarcasm and aggression that lies on the outside of his personality though, is just a defense mechanism. He developed the personality that he displays to the rest of the world. A cold, callused individual with little care for anyone or anything. He keeps most things pent up, which causes him to have a smoldering hate and short temper most of the time. Having been dealt massive emotional blows as a child Prudii is rather tender and sensitive on the inside. He's constantly trying to find something to fill the void his parents left. Prudii suffers from clinically diagnosed mild-moderate depression. Due to his gruff exterior he has difficulty getting close to people, and when he does his short temper and self destructive tendencies often push them away. This feeds his depression, which plagues him when he isn't working. A psychiatrist he has recently been visiting on Chandrila has advised him to develop more relationships with people, a task very daunting to Prudii.

Prudii has developed a rather bad drinking habit, and could be classified as an alcoholic. The drinking problem, like many of his other personality flaws, stems directly from the loss of his parents. He has difficulty getting close to anyone in his life, due to the aforementioned issues, which just goes to feed this alcoholism.

Prudii is a rather quiet person, and rarely is talkative or outgoing. he is professional on jobs, and a very serious person.
Equipment: PRIMARY WEAPON(S)
Stock EE-3 EE-3

SECONDARY WEAPON(S)
Flash Bang Grenades (2) | Thermal Detonators (1)

ARMOR(S)

Abilities: Expert long range / sniper. Okay with close range weaponry. He's a horrible pilot and horrible at social skills as well. He's stronger than most humans, but not agile at all.
Credits: 8,000 Credits
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I.....i don't see any changes!
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@Gravislayer
Toned the gear down, took out the portion about the Sith (at least I thought I did) subbed out the image for the armor. Also removed the Ship
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You still own a hilarious amount of credits and you own full functionali Mandalorian armour! I still don't see how your character fits in our group! He is still a Jango Fett! Minus the Slavers I!
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@Gravislayer

My bad man :)

I'll drop the credits down significantly. What would you like me to do about the armor? In the current reference pic the only real piece of armor he has is the helmet. The rest is just fabric.
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Just read the wiki article about Mandalorian armour and you will understand~ I know I love the style as well but Mandalorian armour is the one of the best there is! I mean the lonely planet of Mandalore nearly brought the republic to extinction, it was because of their training and equipment!

The Storm Troopers are known to be boss like later on...but they seem like toy soldiers compared to Mandalorians!
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@GravislayerTrue. Though in New Canon none of that exists anymore. Anyways, in the picture it has ditched everything but shoulders and helmet, is that alright? It doesn't have any other kinda plates, and therefore doesn't really offer any protection.
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Can we just say that this is a fake madalorian armour? Believe me. ....the Helmet would be op enough.....
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@GravislayerSure! Could be durasteel and just simply a smoke filter or something. not the super OP chemical filter, rebreather, etc.
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I am fine with that!

Gisk can have his final words on him and then we will accept him!

....So anyone wanna join who is not the typical small mouthed merc? XD We have no technician, Pilot, demolisher or pure stealth guy....So btw!
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I am fine with that!

Gisk can have his final words on him and then we will accept him!

....So anyone wanna join who is not the typical small mouthed merc? XD We have no technician, Pilot, demolisher or pure stealth guy....So btw!


... Ideas... Ideas are happening so hard right now. BRB!
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