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@Vordak I've had my eye on this place for a while. I just haven't had the chance to participate in anything yet.
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@EverettEverything looks fine except for the part about gaining speed with no increase in g-forces and momentum. It should be known that this tourney will function under looser laws of physics, but they cannot outright be broken. Primarily because that causes many issues in combat settings. A lot of those speed conditions could be met if she simply ran/flew in a vacuum.

One other thing is reasonable and unreasonable open endedness. Its fine to be vague, but there needs to be clearly defined limits, or at least examples of limits. Leaving some of your abilities so open ended opens the door for what I call 'hat tricks.'

@Enki Everything looks good except for the move that auto-statuses everything. First, what statuses are they? Second, what status is this 'doom' feeling, if any? Lastly, and I'll put this in the rules, that all attacks must cover distance. I.E. No teleporting attacks two inches from someones face, and similar things. I'm assuming that you'll need to actually hit your opponent to give them those status effects.

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@Starfall I shall never bow to an imitator to the throne!

so, do you plan to join the event?
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@Gun Pray tell us, why then have your knees struck the floor with such speed that they have calcified into a single solid bone. My profile is being prepared as we speak and when it is done I shall join.
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@DLLThis character is entirely overdeveloped for this RP. That character is easily powered character ground, simply based on her massive amount of abilities, weapons, and passive abilities. That doesn't begin to get into how powerful she is, and what those abilities actually do.

I saw the ability that 'limits' her, but it never states what it limits, and you don't seem to point that out in any way either.
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@StarfallPray tell, why do your eyes deceive you? A princess without the ability to see what's in front of her is hardly a princess. :)
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@Gun How cruel the hand of fate to strip a man of courage and of comedy in one lifetime.
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Sometimes I wonder if people read the rules at all.

Le sigh.
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@Ki the Graceful I could use some more rules of toilet paper.
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@starfall The hilarious part is it wasn't meant to be funny.

Tryhard, Yoda senses, hmm.
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@Gun I hope you're handsome under that hat desperado or else you just might qualify as DLL's next husband.
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@Starfall Well, first off you have to use at least two squares of it for a proper wipe. Always make sure that you have a firm yet yielding grip on the paper, so your lead finger doesn't slip into your-... Oh. Ohhh. I get it now.

Clever girl.
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@starfall Oh, you were his last husband? Figures.
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Quell the bickering. Battle shall sort out who is worthy of speaking and who is not; until then, it is only the arrogant who jeer.

(read in thick Scottish accent)
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@Gun Cee is not overdeveloped; she's experienced :P

Though some would argue she's overdeveloped in the chest region. Hardly her fault, though.

Anyways. Entropic Order limits essentially everything save her basic physical specifications, as it chokes off the amount of raw energy she can draw from to power her various capabilities. Less energy to draw on can't change what her body is made of, but it means she gets less of everything that requires ether input to function, which is most everything she's got. Less Stream, less Field, less Godforge, less Lament. No DaiRaiOh at all below a certain level, a number of her bank of 'Forged techniques/weapons cut off below a certain level of output as well. A heavy Entropic Order penalty cuts into her capabilities by an aggravatingly intense amount.

Heh, not that it matters, I suppose! Though with Starfall involved, you'll prolly find yourself wishing for a higher caliber in the none-too-distant future here regardless. SIC 'EM, HONEYBEAR.

...but only after you give me back my Teddy Q_Q
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@Vordak
There is no bickering. Certainly no jeering. I and star are madly in love. This is just a front.
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@Vordak But what of jeering the arrogant?
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@Vordak
There is no bickering. Certainly no jeering. I and star are madly in love. This is just a front.


Wouldn't it be romantic for two lovers to die together then? I can arrange that, y'know.
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@Vordak But what of jeering the arrogant?


Jeer them with a sword up the arse, no less. Otherwise they will remain arrogant.
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@DLLThe difference between a warrior and a boy is that a warrior doesn't need a weapon to kill. I doubt my wishes will change.

Also, mind putting those limitations on the sheet itself? Makes it easier to keep neatly documented.

Edit: Also, having 'less' of something isn't equal to making it fair. I have no clue what 'less' means here. The only thing I saw about her physicality is the whole 'unbreakable' body/bones schtick. Dozens of tons of force? Yeah thats a bit much.
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