I feel like an amateur violinmaker in the presence of Antonio Stradivari. Welcome to our poky little Rp, hope you stay a while.
To be fair, I was around back before the server change and came here then from an rp on an app that had already been running daily for about a year... I've never been in an rp other than that one, so it's not really impressive in context, heh.
Hey there fellow newcomer. Can I stab you to take your slot aswell?
To be fair, I was around back before the server change and came here then from an rp on an app that had already been running daily for about a year... I've never been in an rp other than that one, so it's not really impressive in context, heh.
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Is that a challenge? ლ人◕ ω ◕ლ人＼
No... now if you would kindly look in the other direction so i can stab you in the left kidney...
Speaking of, re-reading through the posts here (I've been lurking since like 3 hours after the first ooc post went up. Just searched "madoka magica" or something and saw the title that day) has made me more confident that my first choice of wish might get accepted... Here's hoping for antitheses.
@DarkwolfX37 are you trying to reverse someone's wish?
I do not approve.
Someone'll have to you a lesson~
Or do you wish to join me in the conquest of blood?
Never would I do that. I just find the wishes in question to have a nice contrast. I learned every lesson I need to learn from Raspberryl. I shall break into your house and beat you up so we can become friends, if I must.
Excellent, another Madoka fan. My devious plans of either getting more Rps going in that particular series (1x1 or otherwise) and peddling my fanfiction continue all according to keikau. :D
Excellent, another Madoka fan. My devious plans of either getting more Rps going in that particular series (1x1 or otherwise) and peddling my fanfiction continue all according to keikau. :D
Mary Beth: Wow. Wow. Not only well written, consistent and in a strange way completely believable, but the writing style has sparked my creative mindset in a way that only my favorite stories could before. Wonderful character for a wonderful writer.
Touma Yuniko: Alongside the deep seated need of mine for this character to destroy that illusion of hers, she seems a good contrasting match for Mary.
Vitoria Alva: Ye gods. Unfortunately very believable, and promises to be a wonderful story driver.
Beth Wilde: I don't mean any offense whatsoever, but the grammar bothers me. An unfortunate issue I have makes it difficult to finish reading about her, but from what I can gather, she sounds similar to Kyoko in terms of wishes. It'll be interesting to see what happens with her.
Monika Sakovich: A well-written shy archetype? Great, she's sure to be a good part of the dynamic between the MGs. Sounds adorable too, which is a plus.
Minerva Meyer: Very, very believable. If I didn't know any better, (and I don't, mind you) I'd say you actually are a precocious twelve year old girl, but talented in writing rather than medicine. A grasp of the mind is there that I wish I could match.
Kei Wentz: I can't actually follow what the hell the first paragraph is talking about. Introversion sees to that pretty well. Wow though, the writing style overall is beautiful. Perhaps that's the wrong word, but I can't think of a better at the moment.
Ludmilla Alunyna: Original. Very much so. I can't notice an archetype from the first time reading it, which is always a good thing.
Carina Lykke: Rare to see an eldest sibling that wants to simply be like the others instead of reveling in the responsibility. At least, rare from what I experience as stories. Can't wait to see how she interacts with everyone else.
Julia Steinhart: A mix of archetypes, but very promising. Well done archetypes are nonetheless well done characters, and she seems to be one.
Frederica Bernhardt: Please, please write lore for games or stories. Simple, concise, but brilliant in usage of focus. More on the writing style than the character, but regardless.
Kazimiera (Kazia) Sienkiewicz: I can't seem to think of anything to say other than "well done." And so... Well done.
@DarkwolfX37 I would have my character in there (or at least it WAS), but something came up and I'm needing to rework it.
Speaking of...
Cleo~
I noticed, and will give an opinion once it's there. I'm now in a writing mindset from that so I apologize if my speech patterns/writing style changes notably.
Edit: I have now improved on my preferential character of the three I have written to attempt due to this. Hopefully it won't have any problems with rolls or anything I'm missing that others will point out as problems.
Carina Lykke: Rare to see an eldest sibling that wants to simply be like the others instead of reveling in the responsibility. At least, rare from what I experience as stories. Can't wait to see how she interacts with everyone else.
Yeah. Some people just don't want the responsibility or don't feel up to the pressure. This is definitely the case with her.
You're not approved yet, so you'll need to erase that post. You also put your character sheet up in the character section without being given the go ahead to do so. We'll need to discuss anything further over PMs, so that we can get your sheet squared away and you into the RP.
