@Kingfisher hey mate, could you perhaps choose a slightly different colour for your text? Trying to read black on dark grey is nearly impossible. :\

@NuttsnBolts bahahahahha perfect! I was going for more of a Tango and Cash reference, but maybe it made more sense to me at 4 am. Brilliant either way, Arnie can't be bested.

@Kingfisher hey mate, could you perhaps choose a slightly different colour for your text? Trying to read black on dark grey is nearly impossible. :\

Sure thing!

Can I get fries with that?

Can I get fries with that?

Nah mate, you get chips. ;)

With gravy, and cheese!

@HexaflexagonHow I imagine it'll go down:

@AtrophyNot like this?

@Blue Demon YOU MEAN LIKE THIS?!

@shivershiver I didn't realise this was going to be a Smut roleplay. ;D

Actually @Blue Demon when I was reading your post again, I noticed some discrepancies that I think I should bring up. You know to clear up any confusion and the like.

Firstly you mentioned that Gaze was

It was interrupted by the little girl who was huddled in her helmet and jacket. Ace couldn't even recall if she had seen the girl's eyes.

And if I recall in her sheet correctly, Gaze only brings her hood up in combat situations to promote combat awareness and the like. Unless I'm totally mistaken. @NuttsnBolts please inform me if I'm wrong.

Secondly, your post sounds like Ace is currently on the train and that the train is moving.

The train hummed under her feet

and that

And now there was less than ten minutes left until their final destination.

Both which aren't the case. The team if she is close enough to hear everybody are currently standing outside of the train. Basically you can imagine them to be in some sort of big train yard where lots of workers and robots are milling about unloading and loading trains before they leave. The train itself is well a public vehicle and the front end is used to transport regular old folks and the like as they crisscross the world. Kybuashi just rented out two cars at the very back where they store all the cargo, one from the box and another for the Team to use. The ten minute call was for ten minutes before the train starts moving again not ten minutes before they get to their destination. They are currently in Strasbourg which is in the Alsace region in France on the border between Germany and France. (It's a very beautiful city and in professional opion everybody should at least visit it once.) They need to get to Tokyo, so they got about 13 or so hours to go on the RSE since it's fast for a train (it can reach top speed of about 630-650ish KM/hr) but it still takes time to cross huge swaths of land.

Sorry if I'm being nitpicky or seem hypercritical. But I always feel you should address confusion head on, to prevent more of it from occurring in the future.

Thanks again;
Hex

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To everybody else!
And with @shivershiver's post, the first round seems to be completed. Yay! Expect another post to push things along some time later today.

@Blue Demon@Hexaflexagon

Yeah, it's listed in my Augmentations section, and even partially mentioned in the visuals.

... people will firstly notice the helmet like head piece that she sometimes equips herself with.

When not in use the helmet will retract back into a small node on the back of her neck (Example).

I mentioned that she was having trouble seeing the sky and the rain fell on her cheek, so she isn't using the mask. You should be able to see her eyes.

@Hexaflexagon@NuttsnBoltsYeah...Um...

I offer no excuses.

@Blue Demon
No, problem we all mess up from time to time. But if nobody points it out, you will not learn from it and that is no good!

@Hexaflexagonno harm done in pointing out error. (Though it kind of sucks that I was the only one who did so and so spectacularly. If you can't fail big; go home. Lol) I was going to fix it... But I decided to put it off.

When it's fixed I'll remove the higher so brilliantly hiding my shame.

@Atrophy@NuttsnBolts@Kingfisher@Didgeridont@Blue Demon@Traitor@shivershiver
Without further delay the next post is up! Sorry about the wait, life deiced to throw one of it's not fun curve balls at me! If you are currently wondering the layout of the deathtrap you are going to be fighting in looks something like this [a]-[b]-[c]-[d]. [b] = the train car with the box in it, [c] = the passenger car that all the Divers are in, [a] = a cargo car and one of the cars that the enemy has entered through, [d] is a passenger car filled with regular old lasses and gents who will probably be indiscriminately killed if some of you don't help Crash out. There are 12 enemy Enforces in each Car armed with various assault rifles, submarine guns and shotguns all with cybernetic enchantments like dermal body armor and cyberlimbs, a sizable amount but for Divers of your skill it shouldn't be that much of a problem. And there are currently no Spooks that you have to deal with so that is nice.

Well I think it would be the smartest option for Gorgon to move away from the civilians. We wouldn't want to find out of they blend, right? I'm kind of curious though =3

@Traitor
Well I mean think of it from a practical point of view as well. I'd imagine if Gorgon started blending her way through a crowded train car filled with civilians as well as enemy enforcers the bloody chunks would start adding up party quickly and those could very will clog up the gears and other mechanical parts of the Medusa. It would be like trying to use your blender to blend through tar. All sticky and slow like. xD