I think the story and actions still fit. Rayo has no common sense and it explains the rapid actions.
I should probably get working on a post now...
I was counting the passive ability of "Thaumaturgy: Holy-Demonic: He can use both Holy and Demonic magics. Because of this, spells are a lot less useful on him, though they can still do minor damage." as an ability. I'm well aware that his abilities have limits, what I'm saying in regards to his shield is that it reads as though it can stop literally anything, such as a sniper rifle that can shoot through planets for example. I doubt this power level is approved for the start. Two abilities being similar in nature do not exclude them from being two abilities. Being able to heal myself and heal others are only slightly different, but clearly different.
@KazeXDZ First off, you can only have 3 Techniques/Spells or 1 Gift. You have 6.
- Holy-Demonic: This is passive ability and more suited as a Gift.
- Healing Hands: This one is fine as it is.
- Shield: I'll give you daily usage of Shield 1 per 10 levels (starting with 1) or you'll be unable to block attacks from enemies more than 5 levels above you. Pick one.
- Demon's Fireball: You'll probably be really hard pressed to find playing cards. You could just make it a normal fireball that doesn't require cards or other such things to use and just spam it in fights without care for resources.
- Demon's Fist: This one is okay, nothing to add.
- Devil's Hand: Nothing to complain about here either.