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They can be, as long as they aren't too different xD. Like if it's a Pikachu with weird eyes, we still have to be able to tell it's a Pikachu. And this would have to be something that's not too common. Kind of like how we don't see as many albino animals.

And grats on pulling through, your Charmander sounds like a trooper ^^
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I'm not going to overuse it, but I like the idea of Pokemon being adapted to different environments, like different colors for their environment, not just the shiny colorations being the only alteration. So, like, a brown Pikachu for more wooded areas or something, or a brown or grey Rattata in a city, or a Charmander with real newt colors.
And yes, she is, thank you. Sorta the reason I asked about the color, because I named her Ashecoat, so I sorta imagine her having a largely grey back, if not a dark spot so large only her fingers/claws are untouched.
@Fox of Spades And btw, which five regions are we using? There are six?
Thanks. Yeah. Kinda worried about her, but I have confidence she'll pull through. Oh, and how strict will you be about levels/evolutions? Like, you can, as the GM, limit how effective they'll be, but like, for example, the Pokemon that evolve once, but it's at like level 50, such as Mienshao, or Croagunk. Specifically, I love Noivern, but it evolves from Noibat at 48 I think. I don't expect at all to either have decent moves or have an easy time early game, but, like, narrative versus mechanic, where do you/we stand?
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@tobiax

Ah, that's a neat idea. But for this RP, we'll be using standard Pokemon appearances save for the occasionally different looking one. And as for lvling, we won't have that, so we'll definitely be going for narrative over game mechanics. You guys will be able to have your pokemon evolve, but it won't be something I'll be allowing you guys to do too often. Most likely it'll be there as some sort of reward system, like should you guys do well in certain situations, I'll give you the option to have your Pokemon evolve.

And we'll be starting in Hoenn but OCs can be from any of the five regions :)
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@sassy1085

Thanks for throwing in your sheet ^^

After everyone who expressed interest submits theirs, I'll begin the evaluation phase, give you guys some feedback and some time to tweak things then I'll pick out the final cast.
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@Fox of Spades I made a character. Please let me know if it's alright. I had to guess a bit on exactly what you meant like on information about pokemon, also wasn't 100% sure about what the Extra section was for.

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(I'mma finish this later.)
Appearance:

Name: Hotaka Yamada
Age: 17
Personality:
Hotaka is a somewhat rigid individual, who sees battles as something that should be precise and exact. As such, he trains his Pokemon with precision in mind. He may come off as cold or uncaring to others, but his convictions come from a deep place in his heart. There are times when it seems he is ignoring people, but it's unclear if he's simply lost in thought, or thinks they're not worth his time, or just doesn't care.
Biography:
Hotaka Yamada was raised in Mahogany town, where he saw the harshness of Johto's mountain winters. After much exploration of his home, and other regions around it, he finally set out across the sea for greater adventure.
When he was young, he would wander off, much to the dismay of his father, Ishiro Yamada, and stare at the roiling turmoil that was the Lake of Rage. Over the years, the sight became familiar, then calming, but ultimately boring to the boy. Soon, his father took him on the weekly trip to Blackthorn City for supplies, and Hotaka became fascinated with the formations of the Ice Path and the high rising ridges that lead to the Indigo Plateau, which could only be seen in the failing light of late sunset because of the mists of Mount Silver.
One day, Hotaka heard a great loud sound come from Mount Silver, and started to climb it. The ascent was brutal, and almost cost the young boy his life. The last thing he remembers, before he was again in his home with his father at his side, is the sight of a phosphorescent seafoam green Pokemon with large wings.
Because of this incident, he is always wearing a coat and thick gloves when outside. He never removes his gloves. After what he views as a failure to climb Mount Silver, he became fixated on success, which carried to the training of the Noibat he met in a cave on his second attempt, which ended when an avalanche closed off the path ahead.

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Extra:
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I'll leave this here ^^

Rai Lancaster



Age: 17
Personality:

An adventurer at heart, Rai is constantly on the move. Staying in one place for too long bores her, and she's a bit of an impulsive thrill seeker, one of the reasons her mom tends to fret whenever she's on the road. Daring, and not one to back down from fights or challenges, there's never really a shortage of excitement around her since she often gets herself into silly spats and arguments.

Rai is not what one would call a patient person. She's got a temper and this often leads to poor decisions or hurtful words. Often, these poor choices come back to kick her butt, but the girl tries to learn from them and takes things as they come. She might have a tendency to snap when upset, but Rai rarely ever holds a grudge. Temper aside, her dad sometimes likens her to a blaze because when she sets her mind on something, Rai burns bright and fights hard. She's a tough nut to crack, often hiding her fears and insecurities behind angry outburst or bright grins. Rai doesn't have everything figured out, but her heart is usually in the right place.

Biography:

  • The daughter of a wildlife photographer and teacher, Rai was born and raised in Goldenrod city, but has traveled across most of Kanto and Johto with her father. Whenever left at home with her mom, she'd often wander off and make a fuss, so while her younger brother (a total mommy's boy) often stayed back home, she mostly lived on the road with her dad. And while Rai treasured every moment of it, it didn't stop her from feeling homesick from time to time. She's not going to admit that though.

  • Going on trips with her father only spurred her need for adventure. By the time Rai turned 13, she constantly pestered her parents to let her leave on her own journey, they told her to wait a few years, much to her dismay.

  • Sometime after Rai turned 15, her father returned from one of his travels with an injured Cyndaquil. She helped him nurse it back to health and named the Pokemon Flame. The Cyndaquil took a liking to her and Rai obtained her first Pokemon. Shortly after, she left on her own adventure. She's been on the road for a little more than two years now.


Pokemon Team:



Inventory:
1 Pokedex
5 Pokeballs
1 Antidote
2 Mint Berries
1 flashlight
A half-eaten chocolate bar




@SleepingSilence

The extra bit is for trivia ^^! Just put whatever you want. Like if your character has a peanut allergy, you can write it down there. And you did the info about Pokemon part correctly. I'll give you guys feedback through PM soon-ish. (Maybe by tomorrow or so)

Oh, I checked your character's items though and I'm going to have to ask you don't bring too many restores and heals. This part is a note to everyone, unlike in video games where a full heal will heal your Pokemon back to full health, in the RP it will not make an injured Pokemon magically a-okay again, it'll just help them feel better and help quicken the recovery process.

As for things like escape rope, they're not going to be of use in the RP ^^
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I CANNOT believe that this took so long. Anyway, here is my character. I was wondering if her familial connection (if we can even call it that) and her job related to Team Rocket is okay.

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Oh man everyone's got young 'uns.

Here's mine.

Prepare for adult swearing.


Name: Edgar Felix Wright
Age: 34
Personality: Rugged and gritty, Edgar is a determined bloke. Often loyal to the right people, he is no stranger to suffering and loss, and as a result he is also rather stoic. However amongst the younger folk, he displays a certain soft side, seeing the young as full of hope and ambition for the future. He will actively try to take care of the young in his group if he comes across them. And not just people too; Edgar displays a remarkable amount of knowledge about caring for Pokemon, and will go out of his way to help those in need.

However, to most others, Edgar will come across as stony and cold. His history as a police officer has made him efficient, observant and often critical of others' decisions. He doesn't let his past get in the way of his current life though. Survival and all.

Biography: Edgar was once a police officer within one of his hometown's many precincts. Hailing from Saffron City, he rose from the rank of rookie to senior detective through his two decades of service. While the city of gold shone with an allure most described as enticing, Edgar saw through the shine for what the city really was: a cesspool of crime. With Team Rocket's presence in the city, crime ran rampant, and his team were many times forced to respond to reports of Pokemon abuse, kidnapping or even worse.

Edgar's team built up slowly through the years, and his five-Pokemon team are the backbone of his office, often outperforming the other detectives and officers, including Edgar himself. They are his pride and joy, and he enjoys taking care of them and in return they take care of him too.

Pokemon Team:

  • Grove is a female Serperior that used to be just a little Snivy assigned to Edgar when he was just a rookie cop in the force. Through the years of service (and Pokemon training and catching), Grove stayed loyal to her trainer and is his main partner on cases. Along with the other members of Edgar's team, Grove is an integral part of how he handles suspects during work. Her serpentine body allows her to bind runaways with ease while allowing Edgar to catch up after chases.

    Grove, being a Serperior, often regards other Pokemon as inferior, but Edgar has given his all to make her change her way of acting. It does show too; his kinder side often shines through Grove as well. Despite her inherent uppity nature, she is still very loyal not only to her trainer but to the other Pokemon in her team and those she considers friends. She often goes out of her way to protect them too, much like her trainer.
  • The other Pokemon assigned to Edgar in the force, Mag is a Magneton, plain and simple. Where Grove is flexible, fluid and fast, Mag makes up for that in his (hers? its?) techniques. His electric moves make for good taser alternatives, and Screech is a very good riot control move. When not in combat, Mag prefers to spend his time out of his ball, floating around Edgar and playing with his other Pokemon. He particularly enjoys giving familiar people a very small zap to scare them after sneaking up on them.

    Mag is a little unique in that he sports a little white cross decal on one of his three Magnemite orbs.
  • Rigby is a male Hitmonchan that was given to Edgar as a gift from one of his older colleagues during his retirement. Edgar mainly treats Rigby as a sparring partner, though his fist strength is nothing to be laughed at. When not sparring, Rigby is also an integral part of Edgar's police team, acting like an extra officer during chases or investigations.

    When not on the job, Rigby usually spends his time shadow boxing or meditating, alone or with a friend or two. He has a little band-aid on his right fist and wears a white bandana around his left upper arm.
  • Beat is a male Poliwrath that Edgar inherited from his predecessor on the force. Originally just a wee Poliwag, his predecessor had him trained to a Poliwhirl before he retired, and Edgar took the reins of his training after. With water, ice and his strength, Beat is Edgar's main source of crowd control.

    Beat is one of the unruly members of Edgar's team, being cocky and headstrong towards threats that are bigger than him. For all that it's worth, his punches are just as painful as Rigby's, and the two share a friendly rivalry during their sparring sessions. Beat's forearms are wrapped with handwraps.
  • Runt is the newest member of Edgar's team, having been a recent capture during one of his mountain hiking trips while on vacation. Just like his name, Runt is a male Tyrunt, big compared to some of the other Pokemon on his team but still just a child otherwise. His strength though is unmatched amongst his whole team, and Edgar often uses him as a heavy mover to shove obstacles out of the way.

    Runt spends a lot of his time out of his ball, playing with the rest of Edgar's Pokemon and chasing his own tail. He is reguarly unaware of his own size, and often shows his affection by leaning up against people. That often results in the person falling over from Runt's weight and him crushing them slightly until Edgar notices.


Inventory:

  • 1 x hiking backpack
  • 1 x police badge
  • 5 x hyper potion
  • 3 x revive
  • 1 x service revolver
  • 1 x pair of handcuffs
  • 3 x zip ties
  • 2 x super potions
  • 1 x bottled water


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@Fox of Spades here we are, a lovely character for everyone to enjoy XD



EDITED TO FIX THE STUFF XD
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@Fox of Spades Okay, good to know and I'll be sure to edit that then. (I changed it, let me know if that's better. Made it one per pokemon, thought that was fair.) The reason he was loaded up on heals, was mainly because my trainer was used to healing wild pokemon he saw, that's also why he carried bandages with him. And restores cure all status effects. Thought it make sense from a character standpoint. And alright, I'll have to think of something for the extra then. ;P I might add a little more in my pokemon's bio since others are putting more effort in them.

@tobiax I know that this is in progress. Just letting you know, this RP doesn't appear do be using movesets.
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just posting this here (i gave it to fox of spades in a pm before)


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@DJAtomikaCoincidence- I named my very first Snivy Edgar.
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@LowKey123 Was highly considering putting a sub machine gun in my inventory. xP
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actually in my initial inventory i put it in and crossed it out XD though i edited it so many times i kind of forgot to put in in there XD

oh well XD

Ps, your trainer sounds like he would get along with Willow a bit. She actually might get along with him the best, because she kind of adapted certain pokemon-like behaviors from living in the woods on her own for so long XD (She literally will scratch her face with her foot if she's sitting down and in a comfortable position XD) Though he'd better not smile around her because she will think he's threatening her and probably tackle him XD

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@DraconequisIts funny, I was going to say that actually. :3
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<3 I see we've got interesting characters all around. I'll try to throw in some feedback later tonight, but I won't make any promises. I've got a couple of papers I need to get out of the way first, so I might wait for the rest to throw up their sheets too. Anyway, keep up the good work, guys! And I hope you all have a great day~
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Okay, first round of feedback, here it goes~

@sassy1085

It's a bit too short. Sticking to the basics is a-okay, but there's not much to work with in terms of personality and biography. If you could expand on it and maybe spruce it up a little, that'd be awesome :)!

@SleepingSilence

Loving the contrast xD @him having an intimidating aura but actually being insecure. Everything looks good to me ^^ just make sure he doesn't shy away too much from interaction, since we will need that to progress the RP and stuff~

@Leoven

I don't have a problem with the connection, and everything looks a-okay! What is this mysterious package though :0?

@DJAtomika

A cop, wonderful xD. Things are going to get serious, so having someone with experience along would be grand. He's got an interesting team too, I don't see anything that needs to be changed.

@Draconequis

It looks good to me ^^ but I might have to ask you to put her mons in Pokeballs. Otherwise, they'd be out at all times and with several characters and Pokemon around, the presence of too many at once might make scenes a tad chaotic.

@LowKey123

10-year-old Pokemon Master D8<

OUT WITH YOU. jk jk, she looks okay to me ^^ and I don't see anything that needs changing.




Okayyyyy, If anyone is still working on their sheet, I'll wait a bit before picking out the final cast :). @Arista,@Jpp188,@OneWayOut,@13 Critics, tell me if you guys are still interested and we'll chill for a bit as we wait. And @tobiax Don't forget to re-ping me if you update you sheet. I'll get to the PMs in a bit, but so far so good, guys!
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all edited XD changed a few things in her bio, XD.

is it alright if i make some of them able to escape and enter their own pokeballs? Mainly this would be her Kabutops, who is kind of a weirdie. (oh, and her Zoroark hates leaving Willow alone.. so she never enters the ball. XD)

Also, i wanted to know. Are the pokemon going to be able to speak to each other? Of course the humans would not understand this speech. Or are the pokemon just going to communicate with growls and grunts and our own Rp powers of persuasion?

*plotting fingers* dis gunna be good.
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