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Bailed on the old CS gonna start from scratch (hope this Loreish stuff is cool...also sorry its a mess, typed this in like 15 mins during a study break. pretty much done with this I guess.)
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"Our lives for the union and the Reich"
- Part of the Khorenheim Reich military oath


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Name
Dominic Kais Jager


Nicknames
Raider


Age
23.


Gender
Male


Race
German/Italian


Homeworld
Khorenheim Reich.


Rank
Watchman (Sargent)


Role
heavy Infantry


Appearance
He stands at 6'3


Equipment
  • STGm-71
  • 10mm Pistol
  • Standard uniform and armor
  • Combat knife
  • Omni Grenade


Personality
Dominic is considered a "run of the mill" Khorenheim stormtrooper. As with all Khorenheim personal he follows orders well and does so with the least loss of life. While as a whole the people form the Reich care little about the loss of life in service of the union, Dominic considers himself in the military progressive camp as he has no problem with off worlders. While off worlders would still see him as cold and strict he is viewed by his peers to be more open and "friendly". Originally considered to be officer material due to hos loyalty and combat experience, he was denied because of two major "flaws".Recently he developed symptoms of PTSD that manifests its self in nightmares and difficulty falling or staying asleep. While this is not uncommon for soldiers from the Reich, it has made him unstable to lead anything more then a squad. The second being his friendliness with people of Novogorod blood, Dominic personally doesn't care for Novogorod but since he knows at some point they will be forced to work together he sees dealing with them as a necessary evil to understand them so they may function better.He mainly dislikes them due to the sloppiness of their culture and not for the fact they occupied his home world, though to say that doesn't play into it would be a lie.
Off duty Dominic is your average Khorenheim soldier as he spends his time maintaining his weapons, equipment, drilling in Hand to hand combat, rifle training and squad maneuvers. the Khorenhim people may be tough, but even they know soldiers need to blow off steam and feel human. Of the many things Khorenheim command offer the soldier, Dominic enjoys drinking, reading the regimental news paper, reading the distributed pocket books, and the infamous Khorenheim Fight league (The KFL). while the fights can be brutal by off worlder standards, Dominic enjoys simply because it is better then being alone with his thoughts. As a side note Dominic enjoys to company of animals since he was stationed at a military Animal training area.


Traits
  • Heterosexual
  • Loves animals
  • excellent Hand to hand combat
  • Dislikes sweet food
  • enjoys seeing picture of other worlds


History
Born on Khorenheim Dominic was brought up in a very average Khorenheim way. Like most schools on his planet they prioritized military necessity. While it was volunteer to enlist, you were expected to either Enlist in either the planets or the unions forces, while that was expected it was a mark of honor to be accepted in the R&D department. In middle school along with things like math and science Dominic was trained in basic survival skills such as basic medical treatments, classes to instill loyalty and obedience, marching, barracks life, maintaining weapons,using weapons and basic fitness. In middle school Dominic joined his schools taskforce (basically students participated in mock battles, the Khorenheim equivalent to a schools soccer team). In high school Dominic continued learning advanced rifle training, tactics,hand to hand combat, marching in full combat pack, history and survival tests. Dominic's middle and high school years were tough, leaving many physical and a few mental scars. For the two years after high school Dominic was accepted into a Khorenheim stormtrooper academy. While most Khorenheim care called storm or shock troopers, among them are the elite, the true Stormtroopers men and women that were the spear of the Reich's forces.. Hand picked for their loyalty, obedience and skill. For two years Dominic went though tough psychological and physical conditioning. Storm troopers were considered paragons of the Khorenheim way. Soldiers who would unflinching follow any order given to them, given the best training and equipment offered by Reich. They were the first in and the last out, though more recently they were the counter insurgent experts, often called in for the most dangerous missions.
When his two years were done Dominic ,when it came time to enlist, enlisted in coveted Shock trooper corps. during his time as a recruit Dominic had to prove himself in combat. The academy had only given him a spot in the corps, he would have to fight to ensure he was worthy. During his first two years he was placed on counter insurgency detail with the 3rd shock regiment, for his first combat mission Dominic's squad ordered to raid a suspected safe house for nationalists from Novogorod. While the fighting was fierce as the insurgents put of a good fight, killing several of Dominic's squad, ultimately Dominic's squad wiped out all within the safe house. For a year Dominic did this, raiding safe houses and ending terror attacks before they started. Dominic's last mission though was beyond anything he had previously dealt with. Dominic's regiment was sent to put down a minor revolt on a back water planet, The people wanted independence from the union while the Local government were loyal to the union. The 3rd was sent to put down the revolt quickly and brutally, under the command of a Inquisitor the regiment did what it was ordered to do. The regiment earned its bloody nickname "the bloody 3rd" Even among the Khorenheim the actions are controversial.Dominic, now promoted to watchman, was ordered to kill any to offered resistance. During the initial Landings of the third the regiment in capital the regiment broke the attack and captured hundreds of insurgents. Under normal circumstances they would be brought back for information and treated as POW's, The inquisitor ordered the 3rd to execute each and everyone of them. There were men, women, and a few children if any of the 3rd felt morally wrong they said nothing as they gunned them down. Originally this was to break the insurgents back, but all it did was strengthen the cause. What was supposed to a end to a minor revolt sparked a year long outright rebellion.
The 3rd along with loyalist regiments paid the price of the inquisitors stupidity. The cry for vengeance by the people was every where, more and more people flocked to the rebellion as news of the massacre spread. Soon the loyalists were outnumbered as the insurgents grew, Slowly the Loyalist began to lose thee war. During the battle the 3rd became the inquisitor's personal force, Sent out into the thickest fighting and ordered to "teach these scum what it meant to cross the union." slaughtering of towns and villages became common place for the 3rd. Orders were to kill any who surrender unless otherwise ordered, Dominic on several occasions had to drag people out of their homes to be "distributed punishment for turning their back on the primarch." As the killings increased so did the losses of the union. The insurgents now out numbering the union forces started making gains. quickly the war turned in favor of the insurgents, loyalist regiments were over run by wave after wave of insurgent forces. when it became clear the inquisitors command base was soon to be attacked he ordered the 3rd to hold position and buy him time to escape. They followed the order to the letter. As the inquisitor escaped to safety the 3rd was surrounded. For six days they fought making the insurgents pay for every inch of ground. on the sixth day, forced to fall back to the command building the surviving troops of the 3rd prepared to make their last stand. out of ammo, medical supplies and using captured enemy weapons the remaining troops held the building waiting for the final attack. Before the insurgents could make their final push a miracle happened, reinforcement arrived under the command of inquisitor Drogan. he had been dispatched to salvage the revolt, and to evaluate the previous inquisitor. After the 3rd was relieved they were ordered to report to the capital for a break. for two months they were stationed in the capital, they received reinforcements and kept from the front. The 3rd received a total of 93% casualties during the fighting
After two months the war ended, the 3rd was reformed and stationed as a training regiment. Dominic then began to show signs of PTSD as he, along with many of the 3rd would wake up screaming. When news of the recon regiment was passed through the 3rd Dominic signed up immediately. He had grown restless doing nothing but teach, he was a soldier and he knew he had to volunteer.
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Neaxy Tidea



“How was she created? I'm not sure if you realize this, but it was in God's image. How can anybody dare to speak ill of something which bears such a noble imprint?”
Christine de Pizan, The Book of the City of Ladies






Name
Neaxy Tidea


Nicknames
Nea(Nee-uh)


Age
23


Gender
Female


Race
Faunus


Kingdom
The Gallogoth Commonwealth


Appearance
Nea has a complexion that's seemingly perfect for a time like this. You'd imagine with all the dirt and all-around grossness she'd have tons of Acne and such, but there's nothing besides a few freckles here and there. She has big blue eyes, because of this she wears blue clothing. She has long grey hair that she usually leaves down, occasionally throwing a large bead or two into the mix.

Nea, being a Faunus, has the traits of a lupine nature. Her ears are the most conspicuous of this however. Her tail is almost always covered by her clothing, she's kind of sensitive about it.


Equipment
  • A dagger held in a sheath under her thigh.
  • A collection of defensive and healing spells from the "book" of Blessing.
  • A flask filled with water that she blesses on the go, to deal with unholy creatures.


Magic
Nea uses the book of blessing mostly, focusing mostly on the defensive side with healing and shields. The few offensive spells that she knows include blessing things and doing overall deal damage to the "unholy"

Prayer of Healing: Nea drops to her knees and mutters "prayer of healing", around her a spring of energy pops up, filling everyone in the radius of the spring with energy and closing up minor wounds.

Holy Word: Purify: Nea points her hand out at her target, speaking clearly she says "Purify." The target is then healed of weak corruption or poisons. She can use this on water to make it holy water.

Holy Word: Rebuke: Nea throws up a shield of light, blocking spells coming her way. Only used in most emergencies, she feels drained after using this particular spell. It can take a lot of damage, but any powerful mage will easily be able to destroy it.


Personality
Purity to Nea is the fact that she cannot be "corrupted" by users of the book of Chaos. She feels strongly that the Book of Chaos should not only be a taboo, but should also be outlawed. Nea unsurprisingly was born to a priest who shared everything she knew with her, along with creating her scrolls that hold spells. This priest gave her most of her prejudice towards Chaos users.

Nea has some issues with weaponry, she prefers to stick to magic, but with her lack of offensive spells, she has to carry around a dagger. It's a puny little thing, but she feels safer with it. Safety is one of Nea's biggest issues, which is why her spells all have something to do with shielding or keeping people healthy.

Around people she's comfortable with, Nea's anxiety and paranoia seem to melt away. She can be very sweet with them, complimenting them or trying to make them feel good. Alternatively, if they become "corrupted", she shuns them all together. Acts like she doesn't even know them!

Nea isn't pure as far as it goes with mental health. She has paranoia and anxiety, but due to it being a more medieval time on Deaus, it's not diagnosed. Doctors aren't too familiar with anything mental, as far as they're concerned the only diagnosis they give for someone with a mental illness is "crazy".

Nea is very depended on others. Autonomous, she is worthless. She needs a group to survive, that's just how it is for her. She's mostly seen as the companion by others, she's just there to help out. Doing much on her own is difficult.


Traits
  • Paranoia
  • Anxiety
  • Highly Prejudiced
  • Can wield a dagger, rather poorly but just enough to protect herself.
  • Agile in clothing other than her dress
  • Intelligent, a lot of her time as a child was spent schooling.


History
Nea didn't have too much of a crazy life. She grew up in the Gallagoth Commonwealth, which surprisingly hasn't largely impacted her prejudices. Despite the entire area being multi-cultural and filling up with mages of all different kinds she still cannot stand users of the Book of Chaos.

To this day, whenever she's thinking about the Book of Chaos, all she can see is Sayax, her father, the priest. Sayax was not a good role model, at all. Sayax went and copulated with a Faunus just for the hell of it and nine months later Nea was placed on his church doorstep. Unpredictably, he was bitter with this child. Sayax just didn't want her, so he decided to use her for his own gain. Sayax never let Nea form her own opinion, she was indoctrinated to the point of no return. It seems that she can not change, and will forever unreasonably hate these Chaos users.

Nea went through a bit of a rebellious phase throughout her teenage years. She didn't attend church with Sayax, she stopped reading all the bigoted books, she was just done with her father pushing her around so much. Eventually, she gave in to Sayax who had been bribing her to come back. The schooling relating to her prejudices were a large reason she had paranoia, and the anxiety came from all the bad things that Chaos users had allegedly done.

As an adult, Nea moved out of Sayax's home, and further away from him as well. On the other side of the Commonwealth, even. She just did not want anything to do with him, even though she had already "absorbed" his beliefs, she still didn't agree with him. Sayax wanted the genocide of Chaos users, while Nea just wanted Chaos to be unused by all.
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@Will My current issues with Nea is:

1) What exactly do you mean by "book" of blessing? Does she not actually use that Lore?

2) Some additional explanation about her personality would be nice, how is she "pure" in the loosest sense of the word?

3) Someone whose spent their entire lives with a priest and studying magic would most likely not know how to use a sword in any meaningful way.

Something not as glaring is her book of blessing lore, we already have someone who can use book of blessing. While I'm not asking you outright to change it, may I ask was aspect of Book of Blessing does she specialize in/is most proficient in?
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I am no longer interested in participating in this RP but I wish you all the best of luck.
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Some points to make I guess is to say that if you're going to drop out, please do notify me. I won't be angry if you say you want to drop out. That said I am willing to let a week pass IC between posts if necessary.

Also, anyone want to take up the spot of co-GM? ^^
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It's been awhile since I help run an RP but if your willing and no else wants the job I'm will pitch in and help you run this.
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CS is done I'm too busy to work on it anymore, I feel like a jerk for taking so long with it as well...
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CS is done I'm too busy to work on it anymore, I feel like a jerk for taking so long with it as well...


That's okay, mind if you repost for review?
Do you have enough time to participate in the RP tho?

It's been awhile since I help run an RP but if your willing and no else wants the job I'm will pitch in and help you run this.


Thanks, I'll keep your name on the list.
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Senpai pls notice this fine lady who is definitely not moon moon:

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we will find out in about three days
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@Will My current issues with Nea is:

1) What exactly do you mean by "book" of blessing? Does she not actually use that Lore?

2) Some additional explanation about her personality would be nice, how is she "pure" in the loosest sense of the word?

3) Someone whose spent their entire lives with a priest and studying magic would most likely not know how to use a sword in any meaningful way.

Something not as glaring is her book of blessing lore, we already have someone who can use book of blessing. While I'm not asking you outright to change it, may I ask was aspect of Book of Blessing does she specialize in/is most proficient in?


1). Well the quotes were for the fact that you specified that they weren't really books, just sections out of a much larger book. Although I can remove the quotes if you feel they aren't accurate.

2) I thought I had portrayed that accurately enough, but I'll add some more to it/make it easier to see what I meant.

3) That makes sense, I'm not gonna blame that on anything but my lack of knowledge of swordfighting haha. I know it can't be that easy, but y'know.

Thank you!

EDIT: I can't seem to find who uses the book of blessing other than potentially Nea? I'll still specify as that's quite important, but it'd be nice to know who else does.
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@KeyguypersonSempai hath noticed.

Looks good outside of some formatting stuff and the derpyness with the traits at the first bullet point.

I assume she's the princess of a minor vassal with her brother as its ruler? Correct me if I'm wrong, its getting late here >_>
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@WillNo problem!

The other person who uses Book of Blessing is Lucio Dante, the vampire knight commander who is a master at it minus the healing spells.
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Okay, then I think it'd be appropriate for her to be pretty good/a master at the healing while she's not as proficient at the more offensive side. Which was what I was going to go with originally.
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@WillI think that it would make sense for her to be something of a Book of Blessing adept as even as a prodigy it would be unlikely someone as old as her would be a master if you get mai drift.
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Yup ^~^, that's why pretty good was first lol. A master seemed like a stretch to me as well.
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That's okay, mind if you repost for review?
Do you have enough time to participate in the RP tho?

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Thanks, I'll keep your name on the list.


If you mean repost it in ooc its on the same page. slightly above your post.
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If you need a new co-gm I'd be happy to help out as well, hell pretty invested into this RP already.
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@caliban22Alright, taking a look at it:

- The formatting makes my eyes cry tears of pain and agony and rainbows, but that's negligable.

- You do you realize that the PRN's occupation of Kohrnem was well over a hundred years ago right? There would be no PRN or PRN nationalists on Kohrnem.

- The CS guide has changed a bit from the one you use it seems; there is no more "Race" (that was me being a smart ass), please use the ranking system currently in use by the US military for ranks, and a minor point: storm troopers are shock troopers historically and realistically speaking, you can get away with elite infantry but there is very little use of the term "heavy infantry" in modern times to my knowledge.
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