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Mhmm, yea I'm not expecting for most, if not all to be acceptable because I just want to see how far I can take it or see what would be acceptable, insight, if you will. As a 'Demon General' character, wasn't sure where to draw the line or whatever. Also, the last bit of the bio, it's merely an implication and/or possible rumor/plot line to be explored. Like you know how people love to create controversy or try to remove a rival/thorn in ones side to gain power and one could use the rumor to try to move past/take down Sheba. Or a possibly a change in affiliation or whatever in the 2000 years he has been sealed and/or a potential plot to grab power. Merely something to put in the GMs hands to do whatever you guys want.

Also, I know I put no weapon techniques but I put a lot of techniques in there to see which ones were acceptable and which weren't before I put some in.
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Mhmm, yea I'm not expecting for most, if not all to be acceptable because I just want to see how far I can take it or see what would be acceptable, insight, if you will. As a 'Demon General' character, wasn't sure where to draw the line or whatever. Also, the last bit of the bio, it's merely an implication and/or possible rumor/plot line to be explored. Like you know how people love to create controversy or try to remove a rival/thorn in ones side to gain power and one could use the rumor to try to move past/take down Sheba. Or a possibly a change in affiliation or whatever in the 2000 years he has been sealed and/or a potential plot to grab power. Merely something to put in the GMs hands to do whatever you guys want.


I actually don't see any problems. She's got a lot going for her ability-wise, but the nature of level-one abilities and weapons means she's not inherently overpowered. Giving your character some intriguing connections to the backstory is actually a very good idea! We were definitely planning to have some big sections of this RP being character-driven, and the way you've set it up, you already have a potential subplot going for you. All in all, Blair's good. I'm for her acceptance.
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I actually don't see any problems. She's got a lot going for her ability-wise, but the nature of level-one abilities and weapons means she's not inherently overpowered. Giving your character some intriguing connections to the backstory is actually a very good idea! We were definitely planning to have some big sections of this RP being character-driven, and the way you've set it up, you already have a potential subplot going for you. All in all, Blair's good. I'm for her acceptance.


Thanks. Yea I left the level ones because despite being a Demon general, I saw the whole 'all must start at level 1' and wasn't sure how to do up the techniques. Left it up for the GMs (especially Sho) to decide what needs to be changed and what doesn't. Once that happens, will probably need a few basic weapon attacks.
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@I-Am-X Agreed with Lug. Your character looks quite good and interesting. Can't wait to see how she does on the battlefield.
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She looks fine to me too. Some weapon-specific techniques would do you some good though.
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Hmm. Viewing Blaire gave me some more ideas. I may run some techniques to add by you guys some time soon. Might have an idea for another Style too, but i probably wanna hold off on that and purchase it with points.

Damn me for posting so quick!

EDIT: Yeah I just realized I posted Mary a bit too quick. I'm gonna make some small (and some not so small) edits, if that's okay with you all.
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Hate to double post, but I'm making some changes to Mary and I would like to ask, would this be better as a 'devil trigger' or a style?

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Vileblood, LV 1 - This style gives Mary defense. Tapping into her tainted demonic blood transforms her into a horned beast that cannot use weapons. Luckily, her new form is much sturdier than her frail human body, allowing her to block attacks.

"Devil Trigger" type thing:
Temporarily, Mary can assume a more demon like form, Becoming both as fast as her Huntress Style and as powerful as her Beasthood style, with added defenses and regeneration too. Still, she will only use this as a last resort, a reminder that she is no longer fully human.

Also lemme run this technique by you.
Huntress
Flip-off - Mary flips into the air and kicks FLB into the opponent, before quickly dashing towards them and ripping it out.

And, if Vileblood is a Style than she'd need some techniques, so...
Vileblood
Chomp! - Mary grabs the opponent and takes a large bite out of them, restoring a small amount of health.
Demon's Omen - An explosive roar that deals no damage, but knocks small opponents back.
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DT is a general super form kind of thing, how to put it, it does indeed make your styles stronger because generally you just became stronger, so more accurately, your Huntress style becomes faster, and Beasthood style becomes stronger during DT, it's already assumed you can switch between the two styles on the fly, so you don't really need to have both styles gain the traits of the other, because you can use both fairly freely.

As for Vileblood... Actually, why not make that your Devil Trigger? You take a somewhat demonic form, heightened defenses and such, but can still use your weapon. That said, seeing as your character is still largely human, your form actually won't change very much, you'll still look quite human, maybe with glowing eyes and growing some scales or fur depending on the attribute of your demonic powers.

Otherwise Flip-Off looks fine, and so does Demon's Omen and Chomp!
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She looks fine to me too. Some weapon-specific techniques would do you some good though.


So she works as a Mundus General? Since that was what I was going for.
Wasn't sure if I did it correctly or not.

Aye, was planning to add some in, just wanted to see what you thought of the rest of it before I added some in there.

I'm surprised the acceptance was unanimous, was expecting worse. LOL
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So she works as a Mundus General? Since that was what I was going for.
Wasn't sure if I did it correctly or not.

Aye, was planning to add some in, just wanted to see what you thought of the rest of it before I added some in there.

I'm surprised the acceptance was unanimous, was expecting worse. LOL


Mundus while locked away in the demon world... Is locked away in just the demon world, meaning he still has pretty free reign over all of the demon world, he's just currently locked out from the rest of the world. It's really weird.

You can still go work for Queen Sheba as a part timer though. Demons have been allowed to do as they wish mostly.

And this RP wasn't made super seriously, so acceptance bars aren't very high. We're mostly here for fun.
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DT is a general super form kind of thing, how to put it, it does indeed make your styles stronger because generally you just became stronger, so more accurately, your Huntress style becomes faster, and Beasthood style becomes stronger during DT, it's already assumed you can switch between the two styles on the fly, so you don't really need to have both styles gain the traits of the other, because you can use both fairly freely.

As for Vileblood... Actually, why not make that your Devil Trigger? You take a somewhat demonic form, heightened defenses and such, but can still use your weapon. That said, seeing as your character is still largely human, your form actually won't change very much, you'll still look quite human, maybe with glowing eyes and growing some scales or fur depending on the attribute of your demonic powers.

Otherwise Flip-Off looks fine, and so does Demon's Omen and Chomp!


Yeah yeah that's what I meant, either have her demon-type form as a style, or a DT. Okay, the changes to Mary are complete. This should be the final draft.
Hopefully.
You can review her again back at where I posted her in the OOC. Thanks.
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Mundus while locked away in the demon world... Is locked away in just the demon world, meaning he still has pretty free reign over all of the demon world, he's just currently locked out from the rest of the world. It's really weird.

You can still go work for Queen Sheba as a part timer though. Demons have been allowed to do as they wish mostly.

And this RP wasn't made super seriously, so acceptance bars aren't very high. We're mostly here for fun.


Oh? So he was locked in just the demon world, eh? Since I'm not familar with Mundus, I wasn't sure how he operated or how he ruled over the demons, and wasn't sure if he was the type that would tolerate people working under him to work for/ or potentially change allegiances.

Not super-serious, eh? Whew, explains it.
LOL
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Yeah yeah that's what I meant, either have her demon-type form as a style, or a DT. Okay, the changes to Mary are complete. This should be the final draft.
Hopefully.
You can review her again back at where I posted her in the OOC. Thanks.


Looks fine, just one last thing, and it's making a specific field/dot point for Devil Trigger to make it clearer, once that's done it should be ready to update.

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Oh? So he was locked in just the demon world, eh? Since I'm not familar with Mundus, I wasn't sure how he operated or how he ruled over the demons, and wasn't sure if he was the type that would tolerate people working under him to work for/ or potentially change allegiances.

Not super-serious, eh? Whew, explains it.
LOL


Mundus should be fine as long as your first allegiance is to him. Generally right now he's looking to ways to get out of the demon world and into the human realm, so that's something to do if you have great loyalty to him.
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Looks fine, just one last thing, and it's making a specific field/dot point for Devil Trigger to make it clearer, once that's done it should be ready to update.

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Mundus should be fine as long as your first allegiance is to him. Generally right now he's looking to ways to get out of the demon world and into the human realm, so that's something to do if you have great loyalty to him.


Yea, her first allegiance is to him with her working with the Queen coming when being sealed. Then again, considering this is a demon general character, I'm not sure of what to put her age so I just put a ???. Or how long she been working with the queen, considering you said he's only been locked in the demon world.

As for the last bit, she's obedient but not exactly loyal, as in she'll only do whats expected/asked of her and nothing more depending on the person that is. Though, she could always aim to aid him get out to improve her chances of promotion or whatever. Lol

Oh, added in some attacks.

Zalmonah:
  • Pierce [Lv. 1]: A simple piercing thrust with her spear
  • Ragdoll [Lv. 1]: Strikes with spear and throws opponent into air, ripping up their insides
  • Batter Up! [Lv. 1]: An attack where she simply uses the spear as a bat, with the focus being on the barbs of the spear sticking onto the foe and causing external wounds.


Sodom and/or Gomorroah:
  • Double Slash [Lv. 1]: Basic slash with both of the short swords
  • Leaping Slash [Lv. 1]: A forward leaping slash that has her going airborne, used as a setup. Can be done with either blade
  • Moon Fall [Lv. 1]: Slashes them up and down in an arc. Single blade attack
  • Down Wind Slash [Lv. 1]: A downward aerial slash, can be done with either or both blades.
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Just put an over <insert number>, or something for age.

Also those attacks look good, so they're free to go in.
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I hate myself for this but...

I forgot to add a Theme Song field for the character sheet.

That ought to be fixed now though.
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Oh we get to do theme songs?!? I love theme songs!!! It's so fun to try and find one just right for the character!

...though i feel id be doing Mary a disservice if i didnt set her theme to that one song that plays in Hunter's Dream after that one boss. Ill do some lookinh around.
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if this is still open ill be interested.
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I'll prolly need to work on my combat a lot
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