Name: Aethir Onfeigh
Species: Sith Pureblood
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Faction: Sith Empire
Rank: Sith Apprentice
Class: Sith Inquisitor (Assasin)
Master: Lord Exculir (deceased)




Voice: Average Tenor, Bad speech by imperial Standards


Dark side sensitivity


Gets very angry when he's reminded he's worse than somebody. Is very easy to be flattered.


Interest in sith history and archeology
(Double-bladed) Lightsaber Combat:
Trakata (Knows the basics)
Ataru
Makashi


Stealth
Basic Sith Lightning
Force Augumentation
Dark Ward
Wither (weak)
Force push
Force Pull
Deathfield


Aethir Onfeigh was the youngest son of Lord Onfeigh and the youngest member of the Onfeigh family. His early years of life were spent alone in his families estate always being assessed, always being watched by the imperial guards posted around his home. Immense pressure was put on him growing up. He was never the most polite, never the most skilled, never the most successful. And it was UNFAIR! This pressure was only made worse by the fact that his elder brother Kilgaris always was top in his class, being praised for power and excellence and had also joined the sith academy, well on his way to becoming a powerful sith when he was older... Over time this pressure evolved into intense hate for the imperials and especially his brother. Unable to take it much longer he enrolled into the sith academy himself hoping to become as good as his brother. Although he got in and did ok he was still always in the shadow of his brother and the better, more powerful sith students. As his brother had focussed mainly on Trakata and using the dark side as his main weapon Aethir went in to do the same learning the basics of Trakata. Over time however he discovered his strength in the force wasn't strong enough and Trakata to not flow well enough for him. Deciding to stop he decided to focus on the blade, devoting his life to become an assassin. Shrouded in darkness. However he had failed in his first stab at success and the life of an assassin isn't exactly smiled upon. This made him feel insignificant compared to his peers, he did not like this. His life was filled with disappointment and stress...

Moving on a couple of he became an apprentice of the Lord Exculir, a reasonably well known sith with a medium sized powerbase looking for an assassin to do his bidding. He had finally achieved something in his eyes that was great. Something worth life. The first time he had been an equal to his brother. He went back to his childhood home to share the news! Alas when he arrived all he discovered was the fact that his brother had become a Titled Apprentice and his achievements were barely remembered for a minute. This was the day he vowed to destroy his brother eventually and prove his worth to the sith.

Serving his master faithfully for 2 and a half years the day came when his masters true apprentice struck him down and left Aethir master-less. He now goes to the Kaggath to seek a new master, maybe even Darth Nyssis


His main goal in life is to show his superiority, destroy his brother and make a name for himself.


To get used to advanced roleplays.


Brother: Kilgaris Onfeigh
Reputation: Darth Nysiss
Enemies: Other sith apprentices


If possible to destroy Darth Nysiss (Mwahahahaha)

@Minimum Soooomeeeeooooneeee needs to read the sheet creation stuff again and go in the IRC with @Ellri

@Minimum: There's several issues with the CS. The first thing is the powers as Aftermath, unlike most Starwars rps, have a fixed list of abilities acceptable for use in this RP located in the OP. Since you missed it, I'll link it here: link!. His appearance needs work as I doubt he would be in his armor 24-7, which means he's got an appearance that includes a height, built, hair color, eye color, etc. The mention of

Interest in sith history and archeology

is oddly placed or better wording might be: Has knowledge in Sith history and archeology. If this is your first Advance rp, I suggest you put a lot more details in your CS because this is basically a outline of the character you're showing to the GMs, including how you're going to likely play him, his role in the story, what direction you want to, etc as this makes things a lot easier for us. Now... for the GM duty parts. *picks up Sledge hammer of Thor proportions and spear like chisel* Time to get to work.

@Sep: If I'm not back, know I was buried by the new interest and send a rescue party in a few days!

Though seriously, I enjoy all my players and happy people are interested. I tease because I care.

@Fallenreaper

We put his sheet into Jen'ari

And he's in the IRC now.

@minimumAfter brief review, interaction with your work attitude and display of wanting to only do the bare essentials, we as GMs feel Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath is not likely suited for you. Namely because to join, your sheet needs to meet a minimum set of requirements across all categories as well as come across as a whole character. The work you’ve put forth appears slapped together from disparate parts and without the intention of creating a character to add flavor into the rp’s story. When asked to add to sections, the reaction comes off as uninterested and half-measures in reaction toward what a GM asks you to alter and add to. This isn’t an acceptable attitude. A sheet that does not show sufficient quality will not be approved as it will cause issues in the IC, which we do not have any interest in having to deal with.

Without the commitment described above, you simply won’t get into the vast majority of advanced RPs. While the advanced section is (thankfully) no longer as infested by elitists as it was a few years ago, people still have requirements for sheets and IC posts.

If you still want to commit to Aftermath, you can still try and have a chance to be accepted but it will require you to show significant effort. Compare your sheet to that of other aftermath players (not necessarily the GMs). Yours will need to have at least as much text, detail and balance as them.

As an additional Note to the Players: Ellri will be gone from this Friday and for the next 11 days.

For those who have a CS still being made, or in the editing stage, we're hoping to get them ship shape before he leaves so when you edit please reply back about the edits in the pm we gave you. In addition, any issues, ideas, or other aspects in regard with the RP should be PMed to either/both Echo and myself. I promise you,@Sundered Echo doesn't bite... I muzzled him well. ^-^

The rescuers responses will also be up by this Sat at latest.

And thus we depart.

And thus we depart.

See you Ellri and have fun on your Vacation. Now... *rubs hands together* Time to torment the Players.

*Crazed laughter can be heard in the distance*

Oh, that? That was my sanity.
It left me after I read the scene where XID FRICKING DIES

@Fallenreaper Not okay Fallen! NOT OK

*Cries* I need sooooooooooo many cuddles now

*Crazed laughter can be heard in the distance*

Oh, that? That was my sanity.
It left me after I read the scene where XID FRICKING DIES

@Fallenreaper Not okay Fallen! NOT OK

*Cries* I need sooooooooooo many cuddles now

I love you Ves. <3

@Fallenreaper

I love you too </3

*Pokes @Rtron with a stick.*

*Pokes @Rtron with a stick.*

Kinky. <3

@TheMoatedGrange & @Sohtem: Sound off and has either of you made progress on your CSes? Last listed edits were four days and as far as I know, neither of the active GMs were notified to any changes. You have about 3-4 days more to reply, either in the OoC or PM with a progress mention, else @Sundered Echo and myself will be putting your CSes on the back shelf for a week.

@Mifuyne: PM us the new link when you get a chance.

@Deamonbane: Requested Echo give your CS one last look, and if he doesn't find anything it should be good to go. This, with any hope, should be your last revision. I'm sorry for the lengthy wait as well.

@Rtron: Ellri, as a reminder, stated you can fast forward with Sish having retrieved his new arm. When he gets back, there will be a flashback post when he posts for Miasa and collab going into depth with that scene. I've already suggested grabbing an available and testing it out, even ask for volunteers would be nice.

@Vesuvius00: You're up for the collab btw hun.

@Dblade26: Alright bud, since you're better and feel up to posting contact here's the game plan since Khan's held up with Easter vacation:

I have an idea after recalling your desire to explore and try out Khan's combative ability. In addition, any Jedi (or Sith who want to catch a prisoner outside his cell, hehee) who want and can figure out how, can likely join in the fight if needed. They merely need to come up with a plausible reason for encountering it which honestly isn't hard since you all can get out of the cells easily and already about 2-3 of your party is missing. :p Main idea is to separate and put Lea into 'storage' for a time, freeing you up to rp with the others. I'm going to do a brief mini collab with you that will both allow you to set Lea aside (Ellri gave me permission to puppet her a bit) and sick troopers on Khan which he can lead away.

Contact me through Skype or PM when you want to start this.

Hey, so, if I am going to make my first post in the IC since my absence, can I just do that? Should I have someone just clear it?

Hey, so, if I am going to make my first post in the IC since my absence, can I just do that? Should I have someone just clear it?

Just feel free to hop in and get involved. The only reason you would need to check is if someone mentioned their PC was in a collab with another and you needed to check with them first over getting involved. Personally, with the fact we're going to mash together, I think single posts or mini collabs (small sections of collabs like 2-4 replies between two individuals) might be easier. Namely as any little post with a few minutes passes time and gets us closer to syncing with the rescuers. In addition, I'm going to reply around tonight my time zone which is in about 6 hours with a Jayda reply no matter what and possibly something for the Rescuers too.

Well, I did one. I'll see you tomorrow (from my point of view)^^

Well, I did one. I'll see you tomorrow (from my point of view)^^

THE JEDI ARE EVILLLL!!!!

<Snipped quote by Tzarima>

THE JEDI ARE EVILLLL!!!!

SSSHHHHH!!! That's a secret plotz! Ye're not suppose't know dat!

@Deamonbane We have decided to accept your character - feel free to move your CS over to the CS thread. Apologies on the slow processing.

One very minor thing I will point out though, is that Juyo (Form 7), is not taught to the inexperienced, even within the ranks of the Sith. Thus, the Sith apprentice (Padawan equivalent) he fought in his history will likely have been using basic principles of it with another primary form (probably either 1 or 4, as they are good springboards to 7) at most. No direct wording changes needed, simply making sure its clear, as much for other people as you...