To be fair, quite a few are collabs, if memory serves.

Well, I was gonna see if this was just made but, you guys got some miles.

Is that better? @Monochromatic Rainbow @skyrte

Much better.
Do any of my other CoGMs have anything to say? Nothing comes to mind for me. If they give the all clear then you're good to go.

I will be posting later today ^_^

These are some of the longest posts I've seen on a casual rp, heck make that ever on any rp

And you must read all of them.

ALL of them!

xD

@Lunar

Just wait until you get to Advanced section collab posts.

I wrote a 10k word post once with two friends. Shit was amazing.

What exactly is a collab post?

@Lunar

Two or more people working on a single post, usually on a google doc or something. They're best for fight scenes, character interaction, etc, where having a bunch of individual posts would just be awkward.

Oh, ok I get it

I changed my cs a little bit, hope you don't mind... She really likes the color of silver blue °~°

My attempt at a chain sword

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@Skyrte Please give me a little bit to really look the CS over and talk to you about it, thanks. >__<

Well, I was gonna see if this was just made but, you guys got some miles.

Yes, we have miles.

I changed my cs a little bit, hope you don't mind... She really likes the color of silver blue °~°

After some discussion, here's some other stuff.
Perhaps change the two Inferno-Pistols to something less powerful? Bolt Pistols maybe? Inferno Pistols are sort of like this, think of it like End-Game legendary gear, and we're still in Chapter 1 of the RP. Gear Progression is something that I encourage, and starting with the best stuff isn't that fair to the others, nor is it that amusing when you can just speedrun through a column of tanks and kill all of them because you're dual wielding two anti-tank weapons in pistol form.

The nickname isn't exactly necessary, but if you do have one that isn't a bastardization of the characters full name, how did the character get the nickname?

You could also beef up the Notable Deeds. It's your chance to show off what sort of character your character is. Which is primarily why we don't have a personality section. I think that was the reason.

It seems the number of SOBs are increasing in this RP, yet the amount of psykers remain the same!

...

... not that I mind being the most OP character so far ^_^

@Lunar, fix the inferno pistols into something more Tier-one-y, and add some more to the Notable Deed section, and I think you'll be fine! :D

If you wanna cheat the tiers of item progression a little bit, you could always ask my char for some warp-infused goodies! Guaranteed to work better, with only a minor chance of daemonic possession, warp corruption and being marked for extermination by teh loyalists ^^

(BTW, welcome! sorry for not saying that earlier! I kind'a forgot!)

@Rithy Things that give a chance to be possessed are my favorite things! 8D

@Rithy Things that give a chance to be possessed are my favorite things! 8D

And they are the least favorite things of the Inquisition! :D

... wait, we are the Inquisition!

It's hard for me to think of any notable deeds

It's hard for me to think of any notable deeds

I think it's quite easy actually. Just think of what qualities it is you think defines Ansiel :D

Is she very strong? Maybe create a story about how she turned a bent iron bar into a makeshift sledge and decimated an ork outpost!

Is she particularly sturdy? Maybe a backstory about how she survived an explosion! Or survived the wrath of an angry warboss!

Is she a sherlock-holmes girl? Make a story about how she played a pivotal role in rooting out a heretical nest!

Is she particularly naughty? Maybe a story about how she lured an enemy through her charm into slipping up vital information :D (or just an event that got her in trouble!)

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And they are the least favorite things of the Inquisition! :D

... wait, we are the Inquisition!

"The Inquisition, let's begin, the Inquisition, look out sin!"

Ok @Skyrte I think I fixed it
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Name: Ansiel Fas

Nickname: House of cards (this nickname is ironic. She gained it because the other marines said if she was a house of cards you still couldn't knock her down and also because of her armor's color scheme)

Age: 24

Class: Adepta Sororitas

Equipment:

-Plasma gun she gained from her battle with the necron that she later painted Black with a blood red trim.

-Two modified bolters with increased magazine and fire rate. They were given to her as a gift from her old commander as he was dying that she later painted black with a blood read trim.

-A custom frost blade that is named Agony and is completely redesigned using sister of battle decorations for the handle. When turned on it's blades generate heat and become super heated which allows it cut through even heavier armor. It is made of a hardened material to combat the heat and to keep it from melting and destroying itself. It is painted Black with a blood red trim.

-A set of sisters power armor with the right arm and left leg painted blood red and the rest is painted black.

-4x krak grenade.

Notable Deeds:

-[battle of Tyranids] Ansiel has Ben in countless battles and has killed many enemies throughout them, but on one occasion the squad she had been fighting a horde of tyranadid's and her team had fallen and she was the only one left, that's when a large tyrandid attacked her. She had held it off with her bolters. And finally killed it with a shot to the head with one of her comrades plasma guns.

-[the day the field stood still] In a valley her squad and her commander were stationed in a camp surveying the area, there had been sittings in the area and they were sent to cherch it out. They were in camp when they were attacked by heretics. They had killed most of her squad, but a few managed to escape, but her commander and another soldier were shot and bleeding out, she managed to well, play dead if you will. That's when her commander gave her the bolters before he died. She put them both in hand and said "let the purging begin" as she flanked and shot the heretics down.

-[it was worth it] Anisel tended to well, flirt... With the other sisters of war which most of the time got her in trouble. Every time she did this they would up the punishment. It started run three miles and after a short while it became do 1,000 push-ups. Getting wors every time she still didn't stop, she had to much pride. She would endure rp the punishments knowing all it would do is make her stronger. And she still does it to this very day.

-[play ball] Once in the field she had Ben battling Orcs. After killing many of them and them killing many of her comrades it seemed one is f them got ahold of a crack grenade. When Anisel saw it grabbing it off of a fallen marine she pulled a metal pole out of the ground and prepared to swing. When the Orc threw the grenade she hit it back at it with a satisfying *tink* then a loud *boom* as she saw Orc giblets fly toward her. She had read about an old sport called base ball in a book once and she remembered something they said after they hit the ball with the pole. She said "Home run" making herself laugh.

-[the spoils of war Anisel was traveling with her squad over an old war zone and she spotted a long dead marine with a snow blade sticking out of his chest, Emperor knows how it got there. So when her squad moved a little further she stayed behind and recovered the sword "no point it letting it sit there" she said to herself as she pulled it out and cought up with her squad. Once back at base she almost completely redesigned it. She completely reforged the blade in a stronger alloy with realy high melting temperatures but kept the teeth for the saw part. Then she added a superheating mechanism to it to cut heavier armor, she redid the handle with decorations and straps that resembled the sisters of war and fitted a tiny metal skull as the butt and the sword turned out awesome. She liked to think of herself as handy.

Time with Inquisitor: two years

Appearance:

40K Knowledge Question: how did necrons come to be?