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Created a majority of my character but left out the personality for now. I'll get to it soon.
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@Dead Cruiser

Not really what passes for casual. We just kinda went crazy on ours.
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@Sabotage Your CS looks good for now. The only 2 things are he's missing a name and Acoustikinesis is not the magic, Acoustomancy is the magic. Personal preference on keeping the terms in the correct categories.
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@OtomostheCrazy His first spell is too strong. Separate it into 3 other spells and I'll look again.
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@Gareth Move the soul collection thing from Abilities to Powers and that's the only problem I see.
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Yeesh, are these what passes for characters in Casual these days?

I'm gonna pass on this.


Low Casual is what I deal with. I can't stand how people post in the Free side of things.
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Sorry for 5 posts in a row, people, didn't realize there were multiple CSs before I started.
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What do you mean? Like 3 main spells, or three different spells that range in types of magic (offensive, defensive, healing, etc.)?
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@OtomostheCrazy Any 3 spells that do 1 specific thing, such as Fireball, Healing Hands, Chill Touch, Shocking Grasp, etc.
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@Belwicket

How's it now?
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@OtomostheCrazy Accepted. Go ahead and move him over.
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Username: Polaris North
Character Name: Leonardo "Pierrot" Vasquez
Race: Human



Personality:

Leo isn't a very serious person. He is always seen with a smile and does whatever they ask him to do, as long as it is within his power. He performs very well and he takes some pride in that. He is also a very happy-go-lucky person with no real intention with what he's doing. He only looks at the immediate picture and tends to leave the future alone, letting destiny takes its course for him. He is also known for his outworldly naivety as he is often pranked, insulted and hurt yet he is a trusting person, just like the Pierrot who lived in the fictional books. Leo has a hidden charm though, within his voice. He holds a silver tongue, they say, and can charm others into lowering their guards. Some have even fallen for the young clown. But he, himself, doesn't believe in it. After all, if he does something good, it's because he's a gentleman more than anything.

He is well known for being a jack of all trades. Because of his past, not only can he perform well but he's also a good servant, cleaner and delivery boy. Although he never did master anything else besides the art of performing and even there, he branches out from magic to being a clown.

But this Pierrot has a different face. A darker one. He is actually manipulative, making others think that he is a fool and letting their guard down whenever he's there. After all, what could a fool do to others? He has psychotic tendencies and can kill in cold blood if he so wishes, but this doesn't happen frequently. More like a chance encounter. If he sets his eyes on you, expect that he either saw you as a kind customer or his next prey. This side of him is his rational side, despite it being psychotic, and is the reason why he is still alive up to now. He also does a lot of things for money. Because of his physique, many have ordered him to steal or become an errand boy, he doesn't care though.

Alignment: Neutral

Powers:
  • Telepathy - allows him to talk to others through their minds, also allows him to communicate with any other living being
  • He has the ability to understand a new language, old or new, written or in speech, in just an instant. It transforms itself into his mother tongue/language
  • Regeneration - When he loses his limbs completely, it takes quite a while to regenerate so he's careful

Abilities:
  • Acrobatic skills
  • Parquor
  • Marksman
  • Swordsmanship
    Growing in a circus really does make you learn a lot of things

Magic: He holds a magic sword, named J'grazo, that he has obtained as a payment for a job before. It can shoot out blue energy in all forms depending on the user's wants. It has shown the capability to 'make' sentient creatures but he can only make one per battle. It exhausts all the magical capacity of the sword so he tends to avoid using it unless absolutely necessary. The sword does regain its magic power but it takes time.

However, to power the magic sword, one must sacrifice a portion of their blood to the sword. If you have not sacrificed blood, you may not use its magical properties.

Extra: He should have some extra knives, cards and his blindfold for performances. He even owns a unicycle and some balls for juggling.
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Ok I edited my C.S. @Belwicket
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@Gareth Accepted. Move him over.
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@Sabotage Your CS looks good for now. The only 2 things are he's missing a name and Acoustikinesis is not the magic, Acoustomancy is the magic. Personal preference on keeping the terms in the correct categories.


Acoustomancy falls under the manipulation of sound, i.e Acoustikinesis, but I digress.

My character is finished.
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@Sabotage He's accepted. Move him over.

Also, personally I've always seen the -kinetic and -pathic powers as scientifically explainable while -mancy has always been magic. The only exception being empathic.

For example, Geokinesis, to me, is moving the earth through the strength of your mind and can be explained scientifically. Geomancy, on the other hand, is pure magic, spiritual essence and/or other similar reasons. Make sense?
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@Sabotage He's accepted. Move him over.

Also, personally I've always seen the -kinetic and -pathic powers as scientifically explainable while -mancy has always been magic. The only exception being empathic.

For example, Geokinesis, to me, is moving the earth through the strength of your mind and can be explained scientifically. Geomancy, on the other hand, is pure magic, spiritual essence and/or other similar reasons. Make sense?


I've always found -kinesis powers to be the broad manipulation of. Kinesis is just known as a movement, or motion, whereas -mancy means "divination by means of". I've always used things like Geomancy when referring something directly to magic, but anything else I would use the kinesis suffix. They both essentially mean to take control or manipulate that substance/element/whatever it may be in some way. What you're saying makes sense honestly.

Oh well, welcome to the English language.
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Character Name: Eturund
Race: Dark Elf

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Personality: As an aspiring overlord, Eturund has an extremely hostile personality when it comes to dealing with other people, beings, etc. He focuses mainly on his varied crafts of fighting & magic to help him further his conquest. Along with becoming an all powerful overlord, he also aspires to have legions of slaves & armed forces at his command. Since this is still far from his grasp, Eturund is using most of his current efforts in obtaining the legendary Crucible for himself; (unless someone can convince him of handing it over for a worthy price). It's key to note that Eturund will not hesitate to kill you if you stand in his way of power- and there appears to be a lot in the way...
Alignment: Chaotic Evil

Powers:
Advanced Regenerative Factor
Limited Invulnerability
Superhuman Strength
Heightened Durability
Heightened Endurance

Abilities:
Melee Prowess

Magic:
Soulcrusher- a devastating punch that drains opponents health and regenerates Eturunds
Death Disc- a demonic spirit disc that Eturund emits from his fists to hack / slash as needed
Gypsy Blood- a demonic chant that allows Eturund to become invulnerable for a limited amount of time (generally a few minutes)
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I might just make Waltz female to balance the gender ratio a bit...It'll also be a bit interesting. What do you think?
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If you want, sure.
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