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Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Cenco
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Haha, I love Callum! And Zilla's great too. All I'll ask is that you do tone down TotS like you suggested. It's too strong for the beginning of the RP, but it can definitely get to that point eventually.

And regarding evil spirits (aka demons/monsters), appearance matters little. You can have angelic looking spirits, but if they're evil, they're a demon. Likewise, we have guardians like Reaper who's basically Death/the Grim Reaper, but is a guardian because he doesn't feel the urge to go around murdering things.

And besides, it's not exactly an impossibility that a malevolent spirit might end up as a guardian...

So your sheet's all good! Just let @Obscene Symphony give it a quick look-over and then you can move it into the characters tab.

Edit: Oop, looks like Obscene went to bed, so I'll give you the go-ahead to post it in the characters tab now. If there any issues that she finds, it won't be anything major so it'll be a quick fix.
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Whooo! :D okay, he'll start with a single tentacle, then build from there. One day, he will gain control of the innumerable amount of the shoggoth then no female light novel character is safe
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Great, thank you!

I will also mention now that the tentacle's properties do seem a little strong, what with it being able to smash steel and block tank rounds and all. I'm okay with it though, due to it's limitations (only one, when it gets damaged it drains Callum significantly, and it moves at Callum's speed, which means it isn't lightning fast) and because we've decided to trust our players not to be blatantly OP IC, which you don't seem to be going for thankfully. This is just sort of a warning that you might be asked to edit that later, but all should be fine.
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....gonna post!
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I'll be making a small addition to it in a moment, just before you write up anything. It'll basically be about dorm and class numbers, since I realized I left that out.
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okay, i was going to just have the duo go to where they are supposed to
but i can wait :)

edit: ....ish
i can waitish
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its FI NA LY out, but now I cannot write yet. I ahve a company outing now, so i'll write something tonight. make something beautifull of it XD
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There you go, sorry about that.
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its up!
yay dramatic mysterious past being hinted at
and kit being...well...kit

annnd I'm off to bed to recover from dental woo
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Haha, sounds good, have a good night.
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by RiverMaiden
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Sooo... Can I do a flash back/ intro for my little duo, or should I wait for the GM first?

Edit: Yeah... That tentacle is going to go through hell, getting blown to bits quite often until it gets a sibling, having the bad draw of dealing with a user that is more likely to study it than to actually use it XD

Also, it can only 'barely', block a tank shot if it makes it any better. By 'barely', I mean that it will literally have a giant hole in it, deep gouges, and the explosion just barely doesn't catch Callum in it's fire. Mending the tentacle after that will be extremely taxing.
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Yes, you can post. I can't see Obscene asking for any major changes (or any changes at all) that would cause issues if you post now.

And if anything does go sideways, I'll take the blame LOL.
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@Cenco we didn't have to include EVERYTHING about our chars past in the bio, right?

Also, unless someone hasn't seen, she is afraid of thunderstorms.
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Oh god no, definitely not. It's totally fine to keep things hidden to reveal IC.

The bio is actually optional, so no one had to put anything at all. But I like bios.

And I keep liking Akira more and more, haha.
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Yey mystery!

xP didnt want her to be a guy looking girl that had no girlish parts or whatever you want to call it. Oh God. You might just add a thunderstorm in the story now xP. I luv my darling~ can't wait to see new IC's tomorrow.

Goodnight all!!
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nighty! :D

@Cenco
Alrighty then! Time for some action... and to find a theme song after I'm done with my post XD
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Haha, she's definitely super interesting.

Night!

Edit:
Although if the hidden backstory is anything super earth-shattering that involves spirits/plots, you'll just need to run it by me or Obscene through PM before implementing it into the IC so we don't have anything contradictory or that doesn't fit!
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Updated Sun Wukong's abilities.

Also, I will be sending Yueliang's past in PM soon.

Now I must ask, must I turn on the context for Yueliang? If yes then I'll provide a very limited view on how he sees things when he interacts.
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@RiverMaiden 2 things!

1) As Cenco said, you gotta tone down the magic. Everyone is pretty weak at the beginning, but don't worry, we'll get stronger! So if you would, just add a little blurb about what they can do right now. Try using other sheets as a guide!

2) In order to have both darkness AND decay, your butterfly needs to be completely black. Also @Cenco wasn't there a 2 person limit on the darkness/decay and light/healing people? Obviously we can't enforce it now since we never mentioned it but I remember that being one of Inkd's rules.

Aside from that, looks good.

EDIT: After reading the OPC, I remembered something. She's a caster, correct? I'd see the tentacle being more of a combat class thing. You're allowed to mix the two classes, but doing so weakens them both. Just a heads up! (If I'm understanding this wrong, please tell me)

@PaulHaynek I'm going to forward that PM to Cenco.

@sakurasan Hates thunder eh? That's where hers and Aaron's similarities end! He loves how the vibration of thunder ripples through everything. It's the only thing he thinks he can experience the same as everyone else, judging by descriptions he's read or been told. Also, yeah. If you've got something earth shattering to plan, run it by us s'il-vous-plaitez!

i don't remember if you conjugate the 'plait' in that so yeah
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1) Is the one tentacle still too powerful? The updated ability is in the Char tab.

2) Oh alright, I'll go look for a completely black butterfly then :P

3) Well, aren't these just the abilities that the Guardian would give their partner when they Soul Link? If not, then I'll just make a new set of Abilties for Zilla. If yes, then I would think that it's a Caster Ability, since Callum has no tentacles of his own. The tentacle that the Touch of the Shoggoth grants him is connected to his shadow, not his body.
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