I saw xD, @VKAllen. @Cubix Leo would have to acknowledge the fact that Ebenezer mistakenly drank her order. I thought it was funny
I literally had to stop and think the logistics lol. If I hadn't written that he placed the cup back down then it would be a completely different story!
Length of post doesn't really bother me, but try and be a bit more descriptive. What exactly did your character say? What attitude did he have when he contacted Liam? I know this is casual, so it's fine atm, but next time give a little more for people to work with- ok?
Raze is actually standing in line to order a drink, he's about to step up to the cash register to let loose some snide comments at Leon. Do you wanna fix your post? I'll respond after some editing for clarification
Raze is actually standing in line to order a drink, he's about to step up to the cash register to let loose some snide comments at Leon. Do you wanna fix your post? I'll respond after some editing for clarification