The Poll - Rebooted!

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The Poll - Rebooted!

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Done!

So I talked to Googer, who is currently doing work in the boonies and is too busy to come here and say this himself, and basically, he says he may be rejoining when he gets back.

EDIT: He may be interested in taking a spot somewhere more south. (but he isn't sure).

@Firemaker You still have some major changes to do to that sheet.

First off the corruption is a transformative effect, one can't transform into Ulfwerenar at will unless they have years of experience and suffer from forced transformation during the full Azueal moon. They also completely lose their mind during this process and have no control or memory of what they do.

Race; This just reads badly, Meanwhile, the women of the realm are extremely beautiful and desired across the realm, some whisper that they rival the women of the Vialiphate in their beauty. first off Vailphate does not exist. Second off, all your women are beautiful?? Why? How? What possible genetic benefit would that serve out in the cold far north? Also, I hope you have not fallen into that fantasy trope rut that makes no sense in where every man in a nation is a veteran warrior. Just because you border a violent people won't make everyone in your land amazing warriors. Also, there is no good explanation of why they want to die in battle.



Seaborn raiders- These men have combined the skills of a sailor and have combined them with the one of a warrior and as such, they can reach any shore of the continent very fast and sack any coastal settlement before a government can react.

This trait does not make allot of sense given their part of a larger Empire that would severely punish any other province when they start raiding fellow provinces. An emperor would have gotten fed up at some point and appointed a southern house more inclined to keep the realm in line. Also sending off raiders into the Webwood is a good way to never see them ever again.

Captial population- and the population of all your cities honestly- is absolutely ludicrous given your total population. The sheer lake of local rural farmers would mean all those cities and people would have starved to death long ago. There is a lack of food and then there is just not having anywhere near enough to feed even half those city folk. Cut those numbers down significantly.

Despite this being a nation of raiders, the city in itself has no crime rate whatsoever. This, this has no explanation and makes less than zero sense. If I did not know any better one might think you did not want to get accepted.

Those are just some of the problems I saw and need addressing before I can even think of accepting this NS.

I'll try to get my first post done tomorrow. ^^

So I talked to Googer, who is currently doing work in the boonies and is too busy to come here and say this himself, and basically, he says he may be rejoining when he gets back.

EDIT: He may be interested in taking a spot somewhere more south. (but he isn't sure).

Well, that' good news. There are no south spots left but the eastern coast and eastern peninsula are open.

@GreivousKhan

*sigh* I'm sorry for all that(though to be honest you did accept me via PM), while I don't have time to modify all that today(or tomorrow), I'll get to modifying it as soon as time allows me.

Poll Results: (results subject to change and do not effect anything IC wise)



Total Voters: 11

The bitch is back.

The bitch is back.

But for how long?!

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But for how long?!

Shots fired!

Tiny nitpick, but it'd be lovely if everyone could spell Phoenix correctly. I’m not sure how the spelling was overlooked, but remember we do go by advanced standards here. No insult meant, but it would be nice to be able to read things proper.

I'll try to get my first post done tomorrow. ^^

I have failed... but I got off to a good start.

Tiny nitpick, but it'd be lovely if everyone could spell Phoenix correctly. I’m not sure how the spelling was overlooked, but remember we do go by advanced standards here. No insult meant, but it would be nice to be able to read things proper.

The Phoneix King offers reasonable service rates and unlimited data along with family packages though!

EDIT: Anyway, amended an old post b/c it's relevant to things going on with the Alex IV front. I'm half-awake so feel free to double check for me, Spleen.

It looks good.

amended an old post

ditto

@Firemaker Btw, be sure to post future Nation sheet submissions to the GM staff.

@Firemaker Btw, be sure to post future Nation sheet submissions to the GM staff.

You know... like it says to.

Working on next post.