ERode said
Alright, let's get this started, because 4AM is simply early morning.
Aleyn makes him sound like a girl. Shoulda made him a trap as well. That would help with his assassination. In terms of personality, I'm pretty damn sketchy about the whole 'reading patterns' thing, cause that can go into meta-gaming rather easily. Either that, or lolauto-dodging through everything because you can see thirty seconds into the future and manage everyone's MP to a single percentile.
Are the Sun Slayers magitech? If so, hell naw, because magitech can only have a SINGLE spell, not something as diverse as manipulation of the frickin electromagnetic spectrum. If they are magical artifacts, change the form into something other than a gun, and get rid of the whole 'focusing internal magical energy' thing.
For Luna, change the range into something that's actually achieveable for pleb-y Don firearms. Keep in mind that in terms of pure firearms tech, Dons are lower than modern. And 5-10 miles of sniping range is sorta like...eh...more than a little too much, considering I would imagine that being able to snipe from one mile is already pretty OP. Lightning doesn't pierce, by the way, unless you mean a lightning-infused bullet. The sound dampener will only be effective (to a degree) when using physical bullets. How far does the magical inhibitor go? If the range of Luna is really that retarded, the recoil should do something terrible to his arms as well.How big are his grenades and how many does he usually carry at once?
Prosthetic Spine invisibility is noplz.
Electromagnetic eyeballs or whatever is sorta questionable. Heck, at this point, I'm not even sure people KNOW what the electromagnetic spectrum is, so making spells from something that science peeps don't even know...eh...In terms of the physical boost though, change it so that it's a temporary burst instead of a permanent increase. His muscle structure is still that of a human's, so he'll basically be fucking over his body every time he goes and dodges something that's physically impossible for a human to dodge.The bullet richocheting thing is plausible, but just keep in mind that they'll generally be small changes in angles, or he'll be using rubber bullets in urban areas. Cause I doubt his bullets would be as powerful if he wants them to start bouncing off surfaces. And, you know, said shots won't happen sometimes depending on the terrain. Oh yea, how does he curve bullets? Note that, ultimately though, he's an assassin. He won't win any type of long fight against a warrior, and I'll expect that he's a naturally fragile person.Of course, the bigger question would be what he's doing in a battlefield against a MONSTER...And can someone confirm whether the electromagnetic spectrum actually has anything to do with lightning or raw magical energy?
The personality is not auto hit and auto dodge so..yeah...
Sun Slayers aren't magitech so to speak. Already talked to Anderial about it. They are conduits for his magic since he can't externalize it normally without them. I'm not changing them from guns. Like...even if I was to change some things, I'm not changing them. That's a compromise we'd have to agree on.
Lightning piercing? Magic. Pretty sure with that knowledge and how rail-guns work, that actually works. Though it's not a railgun but that effect should still be able to apply with magic backing it.
Ummm....Considering the amount of mystical stuff going on and someone KNOWING ABOUT TIME AND ITS PARADOXES then I should be right fully fine (Caps being just emphasis). Also Anderial also told me electromagnetic spectrum was..fine.
Didn't think the invisibility would be so nopezy considering you can hear him, smell him, and all manners of other ways of knowing he's there.
Grenades are the size of..well...a regular grenade. Keep about 5 or one of each kind that I mentioned.
Magic bullets bouncing? Sure. Makes sense. Trying to bounce them off something stupid like water or sand or mud or plastic? Doesn't make sense.
Curve bullets? I forgot to explain that but....meh on it.
He was meant to be a mid-close range fighter. Notice all the mentions of it. Except for with Luna..to which....I gave it that sexy drawback so I can't spam it whatsoever.
Raw magic energy isn't part of that. That wasn't stated to be. Pretty much simple raw magic energy. Then again if want a discussion on it if you considered magic an energy then yeah...but...uh that's not what I'm doing. lolz.
