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See that is what I thought. I am left to assume that last part of the post was supposed to be a charachter switch.@Orlan If it wasn't meant to be please fill me in.
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I also believe graham found a way to be able to contact his ex wife so that is what is happening
Unless I read that wrong
Which is possible since I attempted to trike down a mountain then back up and now I feel like a husk of a person
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I think that is the part I am having trouble with. I wasn't aware he was still talking to her.

Besides Harriet and her family it seems like no one has any relationships of any kind in here. That is a little disconcerting even though the battle scenes are great and fun I would think a little more personal interactions between charachters would bring out more in the story. Backgrounds and history. Who was friends/lovers/arch rivals whatever. They need more ties that bind them to each other. Is this coming across well? I'm not trying to criticize. I am really enjoying this rp, I do think we could add a little more that might make it even better.

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I think that graham thought she was dead and just found out she wasn't

And I do understand that....haven't exposed a lovely little secret I have but three of my characters are interwoven in their history. Which will be exposed more in my next post

But I do understand that...if anyone wishes to interweave their characters with anyone else's feel free to do so...pm it out or do so here
Same with mine
...except the wendigo...no need to make that one more depressing
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I'm going to have to figure out what charachters I am going to add. Helo and I agreed that Benji and Willa will have a past but we haven't really nailed down exactly what it is, lol. It might just be a spur of the moment decision as to how they know each other.

There are so many charachters in here with such huge powers I get a little lost and have to reread the post to make sure I get it all, lol. We have a lot of talented writers in here.

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That should be interesting to read about. Werewolf meets witch

And yes we do have a lot of taken which is part of the resin I haven't posted yet. I feel it's only fair for me to be at top posting condition...not melted pile of goo condition.
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I like him I like him a lot

Slight side note...at that clearance he would have heard of Mr.Right..maybe not seen or interacted with just heard of...if you want to interweave a bit more
Also like the note of the wendigo

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@BlackPanther Thanks and I was going to go with heard of rumors of him but hadn't met or seen him.
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That works
Pop him in the character section then you can pop him into the story
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A great thing about this rp is it really gives you a lot of options for characters.


Yes, especially when characters all have different powers and different personalities/believes. Then the sky is the limit for both action and character development.



Besides Harriet and her family it seems like no one has any relationships of any kind in here. That is a little disconcerting even though the battle scenes are great and fun I would think a little more personal interactions between charachters would bring out more in the story. Backgrounds and history. Who was friends/lovers/arch rivals whatever. They need more ties that bind them to each other. Is this coming across well? I'm not trying to criticize. I am really enjoying this rp, I do think we could add a little more that might make it even better.


I think it's slowing down now. I also think the action went on for maybe a bit too long. But, but, but we can use this. The huge action set piece will now be something that can be referenced through the entire RP. It can be known to be the moment Supernaturals revealed themselves to the world. It can be known as a taste of the pure carnage Supernaturals can unleash. It can be known to show how far both sides are willing to go. And it is kinda an introduction between characters that have different ideologies.

For my character it also shows her how dangerous her powers really are, and that they can be used against her. She is someone who has never doubted herself, but that was before she had killed innocents (and that's something I will use further on, along with the other little plot points I have set up). She now also have a small relationship with several of the other characters.

So all in all, I think we will get a lot more story and a little less action in the future. Buuuuuuut action will no doubt serve a purpose in the future also :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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What my food poisoned mind tried to come up with was that Graham became a crueller man because his wife was supposedly killed by shapeshifters, since he saw that Harriet is still alive and helping similar supernatural beings to those she was supposedly killed by, Graham now is going to see if his wife is actually still alive, if so then help her all he can. If not then have closure.

I was hoping that the theatre battle would be recognised for it's role. I was really hoping for a lot less then what it's become, the underground will provide shelter from large scale battles and provide chances for personal interactions... I had a lot less in mind when I first started off the conflict.
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I think the big battle serves as a great inciting incident but it'll be good to have things slow down for some quieter character moments so I get what your saying and I hope the story heads in some character based stuff and maintains a good balance between quiet and action.

@Orlanfood poisoning? you have my sympathies
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I'm going to post sometime tom- *looks at time and groans as it almost hits midnight* later today

Since the vans already went out (some with occupants) they will not be seen again for awhile...especially with that conflict

So I am gearing for character building and relationship building (you know so it's more of a sucker punch when one gets captured *sips tea*)
Little mini conflicts with Peter are expected but it shouldn't turn into something huge.

I'm going to go pass out now...summer what have you done to me the days have merged together
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@BlackPanther wait wait wait...

Kidnapped?

*hides Syona*
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Missing colours, but there we are! xD
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@Zhaliora Am I gonna have to bitch slap an Angel?

Because Alaz will bitch slap an Angel.
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I'm not sure weather to have the goose chase or the Underground a bit more true to it's name.
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Writing.
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Shrewsbury.
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