Yo

Youtube comments gave me cancer.

Youtube comments gave me cancer.

They are, inheritantly cancer. Never read them. There is never anything worth reading in them, people that comment on youtube don't have two brain cells to rub together.

- goes insane -
I need to write.. I need to RP.. Its been three days since I joined this website and I have not once Roleplayed on it yet. I need to feed my Rp Hunger its needs to be fed.

- goes insane -
I need to write.. I need to RP.. Its been three days since I joined this website and I have not once Roleplayed on it yet. I need to feed my Rp Hunger its needs to be fed.

We are discussing, but it's a process because we're in three different time zones.

Name:The Insane One Shane
Age:25
Birthday: Septemmber 21
Magic: Shane has the Power to Control The Shadows in the Following Way
Shadow Ball - A Ball of Shadows that is unleashed. If it hits a object.. The object becomes Corrupted

Shadow Vines - These Vines of Shadow Trap the user. For most they are hard to break out of as they grow stronger the more a person stuggles in them

Shadow portal - This portal allows for one to travel to places they have been as well as allow lesser Shadow Demons join the battle. The portal only lasts a few seconds and then can not be re opened until the next night.

Embrace the Shadows - The Shadows Completely Surround Aidoneus and create a barrier between him and his enemies. It can only last for a Few minutes. It is only in this form that he can summon more powerful Shadow Demons. Once out of this form he is weak and needs a few hours to regain his strength

Magic Level: A
History: Shane had a good childhood. He Had everything going for him. He was a son of a Local Noble a Rich family that can trace its history back decades. He was the heir to his fathers Fortunes and went to the finest schools. He even had found love with a woman Name Sasha. Everything was perfect for him until the day of there wedding. He went to the church early to talk to the priest. All was going well until the Wedding was about to begin and The priest told him that he could not perform the Marriage because the gods forbidden it. Shane went Basaltic hearing the news that he could not marry. Not only did he kill the priest.. But he killed his future wife's family as well as his own. For you see at this time in his life he had learned about the shadows. Although he did not know how to control them just yet. The Rage bought them out and he killed everyone. He was soon locked up in a prison where he was taught how to control the shadows from a fellow Inmate. Soon he would break free and unleash his new found power on anybody that stood in his way.
Personality: Twisted from the Shadows, He sees things not in a logcial way but in a way that only makes sense to him alone. Most of the time he is Dark and Gloomy and believes the world is a place that needs to change. Randomly he will act out and do things that do not make sense like stand on top of a bar table and go back and worth while making fun of the bartender and getting into pointless fights.
Guild and guild mark location: None
Team Members: None
Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. His Anger
2 His Determination
3. His insanity
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. He is Reckless and will do things without thinking
2. Love and anything connected to it ( Like getting a hug or a kiss )
3. The Light ( He hates the light )
Greatest Love: Sasha
Motivation: To bring back his greatest Love. That is his number one Motivation..To bring her back and to have a wedding
Appearance:
Additional Details: Shane is insane because he will do anything and hurt anyone to achieve his goal. even if the things he does not make any sense to anyone else. It makes sense to him and that is what counts

Okay.

While it is a good CS, the number one rule generally known here is you do not God-mod another's character, unless you ask and come to an agreement. The shadow ball essentially does this. I do not like that move. Nor do I like the shadow vines-both moves are overpowered and do essentially god mod another's character. They leave no opportunity for escape, and a battle would be over in mere minutes.

I am also disturbed by his greatest loves name. My character is named Sasha as well. But that is my problem XD

Look, I find the CS interesting, but I can't let it pass with those two moves.

You need a two out of three approval, and I don't see you getting any approval with the way those moves are right now. You need to either change them, or give them a good weakness before I will consider approving.

I'm not trying to be mean, I am just trying to keep it fair for everyone.

Oh god I can't stop laughing, @oblivion666. He has a dragon spirit I forgot XD

Oh god I can't stop laughing, @oblivion666. He has a dragon spirit I forgot XD

Gabriel that ditz. xD

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Gabriel that ditz. xD

At least it kinda fits in with him.

He will be dumbfounded, embarrassed and mumble something about forgetting. I could always have him try and fail to summon the spirit...hm

( Fixed his powers, Did not realized someone else had Shadow Balls power, Gave them each a weakness.

Name:The Insane One Shane
Age:25
Birthday: Septemmber 21
Magic: Shane has the Power to Control The Shadows in the Following Way

Shadow Spikes - He is able to create small spikes out of the Shadows and throw them at Opponents or objects. These can easy be Dodged or blocked with weapons or objects ( Think Throwing knives ).

Shadow Vines - These Vines of Shadow Trap the user. They can easily be cut with a weapon or by simply Brute force

Shadow portal - This portal allows for one to travel to places they have been as well as allow lesser Shadow Demons join the battle. The portal only lasts a few seconds and then can not be re opened until the next night.

Embrace the Shadows - The Shadows Completely Surround Aidoneus and create a barrier between him and his enemies. It can only last for a Few minutes. It is only in this form that he can summon more powerful Shadow Demons. Once out of this form he is weak and needs a few hours to regain his strength

Magic Level: A
History: Shane had a good childhood. He Had everything going for him. He was a son of a Local Noble a Rich family that can trace its history back decades. He was the heir to his fathers Fortunes and went to the finest schools. He even had found love with a woman Name Sasha. Everything was perfect for him until the day of there wedding. He went to the church early to talk to the priest. All was going well until the Wedding was about to begin and The priest told him that he could not perform the Marriage because the gods forbidden it. Shane went Basaltic hearing the news that he could not marry. Not only did he kill the priest.. But he killed his future wife's family as well as his own. For you see at this time in his life he had learned about the shadows. Although he did not know how to control them just yet. The Rage bought them out and he killed everyone. He was soon locked up in a prison where he was taught how to control the shadows from a fellow Inmate. Soon he would break free and unleash his new found power on anybody that stood in his way.
Personality: Twisted from the Shadows, He sees things not in a logcial way but in a way that only makes sense to him alone. Most of the time he is Dark and Gloomy and believes the world is a place that needs to change. Randomly he will act out and do things that do not make sense like stand on top of a bar table and go back and worth while making fun of the bartender and getting into pointless fights.
Guild and guild mark location: None
Team Members: None
Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. His Anger
2 His Determination
3. His insanity
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. He is Reckless and will do things without thinking
2. Love and anything connected to it ( Like getting a hug or a kiss )
3. The Light ( He hates the light )
Greatest Love: Sasha
Motivation: To bring back his greatest Love. That is his number one Motivation..To bring her back and to have a wedding
Appearance:
Additional Details: Shane is insane because he will do anything and hurt anyone to achieve his goal. even if the things he does not make any sense to anyone else. It makes sense to him and that is what counts

@Caits

Sasha happens to be a character of mine from my Novel. Although she is normally Paired with another char of mine and not with Shane. Since Shane is the insane one. But Eh I suppose she loves both of them Equally.

Well that sets up a story though.. If he sees your char and learns her name.. Will he think that you are her ?

Oh god I can't stop laughing, @oblivion666. He has a dragon spirit I forgot XD

Oh god XD he's just gonna go silent and shout damnit at the top of his lungs xD

@AzazelSlayer I am going to let Zarkun and Expolar have the next word in this changed CS.

Yes, that would be interesting. But Sasha already has a partner, if @yipeeXD is still around. Of course, even if he's disappeared again, we do have a story line and she would still be unavailable. Should be interesting

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Oh god XD he's just gonna go silent and shout damnit at the top of his lungs xD

I have no idea how he will react yet, but it should be fun!

@Caits but yeah I remembered he summoned it to try and get Ike and Argus to stop fighting x)

@Caits

I am not sure you really want Shane as a Partner anyway. Depending on his mood he will either love you or hate you and want to kill you. After all he was about to get married and went Berserk on the priest and then killed everyone in the room including his future wife. So you tell me. but it would be intresting if he believes she is his.. And then has flashbacks of what happened ( it helps everyone to understand the full story of what happened )

( Fixed his powers, Did not realized someone else had Shadow Balls power, Gave them each a weakness.

Name:The Insane One Shane
Age:25
Birthday: Septemmber 21
Magic: Shane has the Power to Control The Shadows in the Following Way

Shadow Spikes - He is able to create small spikes out of the Shadows and throw them at Opponents or objects. These can easy be Dodged or blocked with weapons or objects ( Think Throwing knives ).

Shadow Vines - These Vines of Shadow Trap the user. For most they are hard to break out of as they grow stronger the more a person stuggles in them. They can easily be cut with a weapon or by simply Brute force

Shadow portal - This portal allows for one to travel to places they have been as well as allow lesser Shadow Demons join the battle. The portal only lasts a few seconds and then can not be re opened until the next night.

Embrace the Shadows - The Shadows Completely Surround Aidoneus and create a barrier between him and his enemies. It can only last for a Few minutes. It is only in this form that he can summon more powerful Shadow Demons. Once out of this form he is weak and needs a few hours to regain his strength

Magic Level: A
History: Shane had a good childhood. He Had everything going for him. He was a son of a Local Noble a Rich family that can trace its history back decades. He was the heir to his fathers Fortunes and went to the finest schools. He even had found love with a woman Name Sasha. Everything was perfect for him until the day of there wedding. He went to the church early to talk to the priest. All was going well until the Wedding was about to begin and The priest told him that he could not perform the Marriage because the gods forbidden it. Shane went Basaltic hearing the news that he could not marry. Not only did he kill the priest.. But he killed his future wife's family as well as his own. For you see at this time in his life he had learned about the shadows. Although he did not know how to control them just yet. The Rage bought them out and he killed everyone. He was soon locked up in a prison where he was taught how to control the shadows from a fellow Inmate. Soon he would break free and unleash his new found power on anybody that stood in his way.
Personality: Twisted from the Shadows, He sees things not in a logcial way but in a way that only makes sense to him alone. Most of the time he is Dark and Gloomy and believes the world is a place that needs to change. Randomly he will act out and do things that do not make sense like stand on top of a bar table and go back and worth while making fun of the bartender and getting into pointless fights.
Guild and guild mark location: None
Team Members: None
Three Strengths: (Not just combat)
1. His Anger
2 His Determination
3. His insanity
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. He is Reckless and will do things without thinking
2. Love and anything connected to it ( Like getting a hug or a kiss )
3. The Light ( He hates the light )
Greatest Love: Sasha
Motivation: To bring back his greatest Love. That is his number one Motivation..To bring her back and to have a wedding
Appearance:
Additional Details: Shane is insane because he will do anything and hurt anyone to achieve his goal. even if the things he does not make any sense to anyone else. It makes sense to him and that is what counts

My two cents is that Shadow Vines second, and first in retrospect, weakness is that if they get stronger through the person trapped struggling, how would brute force break free? As for cutting them, ideally only a blade of light could cut them, but I'm more lenient on that since if we're that specific, most of this RP's characters are sprunked.

@Zarkun

Changed that and cut that part out. thanks for pointing that out to me !.
These Vines of Shadow Trap the user. They can easily be cut with a weapon or by simply Brute force ( Meaning you can break free with your own Strength )

Wait so he loves Sasha..... But killed her.... Yet still wants to marry her.

Okay then

pokes @burthstone where is mayt and am i needed for him?