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@BCTheEntity Seems good.

@Pink Snorlax Depends, are they a suspected Lucumbro sympathizer? If so, who cares if they're poor! If they wear their allegiance to the Firebirds on their sleeves? Lynch the bastard who trodden on the poor!
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@Kafka Komedy Akella's in the Characters tab now. And from the sound of things, the Firebirds are actual arseholes, and probably hypocrites too I don't know.
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@MauveMarauder and @Bishop if either of you are still going to join I need you to make your characters soon. The plot won't start as soon as I make my first post, I'll let everyone do a little walking around town and the such first, but I do need confirmation that you're here, since there's someone else who can take the spot.
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The Lightmare of Lucumbro


Gender

Male
Age

37
Race

Human

Equipment

    Gridr Armour - The metal's main component is gold, from which the armour is build. The suit covers the whole body providing the ultimate protection with it's durability. Being made of gold makes it considerably heavy. The armor also has special properties, being heat and electricity resistant, to a degree, converting a certain percentage of the heat from attacks or other sources to storable energy. It also gradually repairs itself by pouring pure melted gold on the damaged spot. The gold stays in a semi-liquid state over the damaged part, slowly repairing the armour. The excess gold simply hardens and falls off.

    Midnight Cloak - A cloak with midnight black color and torn end giving the impression of a street beggar if fully covered by it.

    Multiple throwing knives are stashed in his belt.

    Satchel - Antidote vials, water canister, coins and multiple smoke bombs with a timer.


Abilities

    Death Flare - A burst of light blinding everything in a wide range, even those with their backs turned. The effect persist long after the light has faded, those in the centre are affected the most with potential permanent blindness. Uses the armor's storable energy.

    Light Beam - A beam of light shoots from the caster's eyes serving as a light source in dark places or, as it's mostly used, blind an enemy at close range by flashing a focused version of it at the target's eyes. If the focused version of it is channelled in one place, with enough time it will serve as an igniter for ignitable substances. Uses the armor's storable energy.

    Lightning Strike - It enhances a body part of the caster with lightning, an ability obtained by mastering a lightning crystal. It enhances the users speed/power and penetrattion of the hit. The requirement for this ability to be activated is achieving a high speed. It can't be activated beforehand but only mid strike or just before the blow makes contact. That short interval being the only time when the crystal can be activated. It can also be activated during running or while falling.


Talents


    Martial Artist - Has mastered the fighting style of Zoxoss'Zarash which focuses on parrying, followed by a lethal counter attack or bone breaking if the target is required alive.

    The Chosen One - As the Chosen One to revive The Empire, he is given the ability to communicate in every language or form of communication a sentient race uses. The non-verbal parts are recreated by the power of this Blessing.

    Enforcer - Knows many methods used to "convince" someone and "open their eyes" to the greatness of The Empire. Will silence anyone who can't be converted.


Personality
Decisive and with a clear goal, he will do everything in his power to achieve it. He can socialize fairly well but as soon as his goal enters the equation they are nothing to him. If you share the same goal as him consider yourself lucky. He is a powerful ally and if he sees you contributing towards your mutual quest he will grant you his protection. He sees people for what they can do, their power, not their personality and their good or bad choices. As far as romance goes..😑

Biography
Nobody knows of his past before he took on the title of Lightmare. It all started in one of his expeditions in a frozen wasteland where he happened upon a buried nonagon pyramid, only the tip seen standing out above the snow, surrounded in ice. Using a Lapi he made quick work of the giant glacier having a clear path to the pyramid's top. Getting close he studied the ancient writings on the structure's extremity immediately knowing to which culture it belonged to as he had encountered similar hieroglyphs on his travels before. Luckily he had learned some of its secrets on his past studies and knew how to activate it. The clouds were blocking the sun, a sickening darkness engulfed everything, the traits of a winter night in this part of the planet. Without using a heat Lapi he wouldn't be able to even breath the lung freezing air. He searched in his satchel, finally feeling the ancient crystal with his fingers, swiftly taking it out. A rare crystal that allowed control of weather for a short time. Used carefully it could be catastrophic as it created a butterfly effect on that region's atmosphere, extending even outside it but with reduced effects.

In ancient times it was used as a way to convince people of the God-like power that the rulers of that time possessed, making it easier to control them. A lot of sacrifices and rituals that benefited those rulers took place in order to avoid their wrath. There was a catch though, in order to use the crystal in a way that affected a wide area the user was required to give his own life, consumed by it's immense power. The other option, in order to reach the same effect, is the consumption of the crystal itself, breaking it after usage. But that option was not even considered by the ancient rulers as the life of a human was considered even less than their "royal pet". People died every time that power was used.

The explorer used the crystal only to dissipate the smallest amount of clouds for a sunray to reach the pyramid's top, everything being calculated of course. Even this small act leaving him out of breath, exhausted but he had more to do. Exhausted as he was he got an ancient looking nonagon ring out of his pocket and placed it on top of the pyramid. The sooner he did this, the ring started rotating at eye dazzling speed, then the pyramid's top, then the whole thing itself! During his past explorations he had learned that each structure of this ancient civilization was like a puzzle, a ring always the key. Row after row the structure started rotating at an immense speed, the ice quickly melting everywhere around him, leaving the explorer to free fall. Mid way through the fall, the whole structure stopped in its tracks with a finally echoing *CLICK*. Mere moments later a beam of light shot up from it's top completely dissipating the clouds, cold and darkness, sun and warm light succeeding it. The explorer stopped mid air, frozen as a golden hue engulfed everything surrounding the pyramid in a wide are, including him. He was then teleported to the throne room in a kneeling position before a golden statue on a throne placed on top of a mini pyramid. The statue radiated an "Emperor" vibe as it stood out above all, literally and metaphorically. The thing was covered in a full body armor only the face, hands and feet protruding from it. The figure was carrying a strange looking staff that gave the impression of being a puzzle thing itself, many writings and lines covering it. The staff ended with 2 falcon-like heads, the explorer presumed, beside the heads 2 wings emerged from both sides creating the torso of a two headed bird creature. The armor had the same build as the staff minus the writtings. Talking about armor, to his surprise he was covered with one himself, from head to toe. Suddenly, numerous visions clouded his consciousness, visions of lifes past. He experienced centurie long battles, reincarnating again and again, the fighting seemingly never ending until it all stopped. When he woke up he was located in Lucumbro, encased in armor, knowing things and abilities he wasn't supposed to know although most of his visions were blurry whenever he tried to remember them, like trying to remember a dream you just woke from. His head was throbbing with pain along with his body which seemed...lighter? Also stronger and his movements were faster, his reflexes also enhanced. One goal was engraved in his soul, finally reemerging after such a long time. He felt more awake than ever, all seemed clear now. His soul purpose was to revive the once great Empire of Ghuul'Zashar. He was given the role of missionary with this mission and let the Sun be his witness as he achieves it!

From then on, he has been doing highly paid, considered suicide jobs for big rewards. Achieving a reputation in little time, more learned of his capabilities resulting in more demanding and also more rewarding jobs. People started calling him "The Lightmare" since he only acted during the day, a period in which is considered the safest-from-assassins time especially when you are in public. But since his tactic always involved a blinding flash before the attack, there were NO witnesses whatsoever to describe what happened, how the victim was killed or how the attacker looked. Word circulated that it was the work of GOD and not done by a creature or thing. With his not-so-small fortune he started his own organization with the main goal being the recruitment of young children and their training as ultimate blindly loyal soldiers of the upcoming Empire of Ghuul'Zashar. As a missionary he was also given the ability to re-awaken one's soul, reminding them of their past lives as loyal servants of The Ancient Empire, successfully recruiting them to his ranks.

With the war raging on between the rebels and the "fake empire" the opportunity for recruitment was slim to say the best. If only there was a way to end this war...

As the Aureate Warrior was laying unconscious on the ground, murmuring inside his helmet, a dark shadow loomed over him, quietly chuckling to himself. "Another one joins the ranks.."
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Any room for one more?
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@Bishop I'm going to have to say no to Lightmare, as much as I like the name. Every other character is just above average, the most important person on the team is a prince from a foreign land, and even he is about on the same level as other characters. A literal chosen one doesn't gel with the others. He also seems quite powerful, and this is just a personal thing but I dislike powers based on certain factors. We're going to be going into bandit hideouts and dungeons too, so half of the time those powers won't even be usable.

@pure493 Unfortunately, even if MM doesn't show up (which I don't think they are) @Otakuforreal was promised a spot. Unless Bishop declines to remake Lightmare or make a new character, I'll just have to inform you when someone drops out.
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@Kafka Komedy Do you have an estimated time for when the IC is coming out?
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@Dragonbud Well I was aiming for today, but that might not happen. If that's the case, hold me to getting it up tomorrow.
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@Kafka Komedy So, what if I just reduce the powers, still no? Just tell me what powers to remove and I shall obey. If it is about the Chosen One thing , it could easily be revealed that he is being manipulated by a certain individual with fake visions. The power that he magically gains, he already had but with magical hypnosis or whatnot he thinks he was an explorer before and after learning of his ancestry through "ancient magic induced memories of past lives" he suddenly gained this power. And the pyramid that he explored was nothing more than a cabin in the woods and all he saw were illusions. Power nature is easily changeable if you really dislike it.

Edit: Also the dark golden hue is a side effect of him being manipulated, mentally influenced. Just so it fits in with the being-manipulated part.

Edit 2: And the awakening soul converting part could, instead be the corruption of weak willed individuals to join the Manipulator.
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@Bishop I like that backstory a lot better, yeah. As for making him more on par with the others strength wise, I recommend toning down his armor, removing two of his abilities, and getting rid of either Weapon Proficiency or Martial Arts, and either Chosen One or Enforcer.
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@Footman Just a random question, does Izerk like bananas?

Asking completely out of curiosity, of course.
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@Kafka Komedy enforcer- basically says that Lightmare uses torture and whatnot to weaken a person so they are more prone to corruption. Like catching a Pokemon, you weaken it first. Talent for breaking people*. Even if I remove it, it's basically his job. The whole reason he was corrupted was to corrupt more people.

I removed 2 abilities, dummed down one and added an additional one.

As for the armor, I changed it's effects a little, added throwing knifes and satchel and just to clarify, the 2 light powers have no relation with stamina but with the heat energy gathered by the armor, mostly during the day. The electric attack uses stamina.

I'll edit a small part of the story hinting at the illusionary reality he is in and hopefully I get to escape it during the Rp ;)
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@Footman Just a random question, does Izerk like bananas?

Asking completely out of curiosity, of course.


Dude... that's racist!

Haha but no seriously, um, I guess? I mean sure he's a gorilla but I like to think the national dish of Glimmerdale Forest is something like spaghetti bolognaise.

Second "Haha but no seriously": I my mind's eye, Glimmerdale Forest is an ancient woodland, as opposed to a jungle, and you'd find the kind of things you'd expect to find in an Earth forest. Ya know, nuts, berries, apples, little critters, maybe a few wolves and bears of varying natures, with some fantasy species thrown in for good measure. Then you've got the Gora just roaming around in their little communities, acting all peaceful and wise until someone pokes them with a stick.

So to answer your question finally: Yes, but they probably wouldn't be native to Glimmerdale.

Might be that I need to write up a little bit about the Gora and Glimmerdale Forest, in case the characters need to venture there or reference it.

EDIT: Here's what I got so far.

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@Bishop Well, when you removed stuff, you just added more stuff. The armor is what I have the biggest issue with. It's strong, flexible, and self repairable. That, on it's own, is probably too powerful, but Lightmare also has 2 ranged options, and neither of them require stamina. Overall I'd focus on giving him a very defined role. You could go pugilist, focus on the fist-fighting, or focus on the sunlight attacks, or maybe even the armor.

@Footman That reminds me, I really should write up Highwind city just in case Kait ever returns. Also need to make a "Locals" section in the Characters tab to go with the Important people and objectives. But for now the most important thing is the first IC post.
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@Footman@Kafka Komedy Yeah, I should probably go about describing Akella's hometown too. I'd assume that's a good plan, anyway, even if it never becomes relevant. Then again, what I've described so far seems to convey the general feel of the town well enough... I'll sleep on it.
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I'm very glad I found this OOC. I'll get to working on a character. (If there is room of course).
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@POOHEAD189 Good to see you, but you are... slightly late to the party. Considering how Bishop's sheet creation is going so far, however...
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@Kafka Komedy Sorry for being so difficult with this character and I really appreciate your patience.

So, I changed the spell *Beam of Light*. Now basically my character has a lightning attack, a flash light one and a flash bang one. And I made the armor heavy, seeing the incredibility of having a "very light" golden armor.

If there is anything that makes my character unbalanced just tell me to change it and I'll gladly oblige.

Edit: And about the instant self repair, it's not like I'm gonna have melted gold on me all the time, ready to pour it over my armour as soon as a crack appears. Basically instead of paying the blacksmith to repair my armor, I just pay him for the gold and to melt it. This being an armour with special properties after all, enchanted or whatnot, I don't think the blacksmith would have the skills to work with it.
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It's short, it sucks, but at least you all can post now.

@POOHEAD189 Unfortunately there is none, though I'll certainly keep you in mind if someone leaves.

@Bishop Assuming the "no movement constraints" is just an error you left in, I'd be willing to accept him if you chopped the instant repair. Also he needs a personality section, that too.

EDIT: Oh! So it's pretty much just a flavor thing than, no real "gameplay" type use? Then the repair stuff is fine.
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Oh and @Otakuforreal if you're still interested, MM hasn't showed up so you can take their place. If you do not wish to join any more, please inform me so I can pass the spot onto the next reserved backup.
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