@Giskokay, I'll change it during break or when I get off of work.

@gisk do you want the jist of my changes/responses to your characters/the scene to help finish setting the stage? So, if other people walk in on the scene, we won't have over talk?

@Gisk So this light you described in your post, is it the light activating the powers? Cause in that casse I should mention my powers starting to appear in my next post.

@Gisk So this light you described in your post, is it the light activating the powers? Cause in that casse I should mention my powers starting to appear in my next post.

Yeah, though you haven't posted yet, so you can have some time in the beginning before the lights.

@gisk do you want the jist of my changes/responses to your characters/the scene to help finish setting the stage? So, if other people walk in on the scene, we won't have over talk?

Yeah, I'm not sure how much change is necessary, but tell me what you did. Or I'll just read it after the edit.

Try not to make me need an edit XD

@Giskliterally just seeing Ad and snarking at the twins.

I'm going to write a post later.

Doing a collaborative post with Nightmare. Will post as soon as we're done editing. ^_^

@Gisk Also, since I initially suggested healing, I vote for healing.

Thomas and Michael Morhaime: A pair of twins, brown hair, blue eyes, square features. Michael wears his hair short, and Thomas’ comes down to his shoulders when it's not pulled up.
The freshest legacy members of the Greenbriar Rogues, and mechanics in Springer Automotive, the shop that Audrey’s grandfather owns.

Solomon and Padma Majumdar: another pair of twins, but these ones fraternal. Mixed ethnicity, with an Indian father and African American mother. Both parents work in energy technology.
The twins are pretty hippy dippy, and both very concerned with environmental sciences. Solomon surfs, but Padma is afraid of the ocean.
Both are on a fast track to a good college in California.

Anthony Finch: in the same year as most of the characters. He is the oldest sickly baby from the lights eighteen years ago. He basically lived in hospitals until he was twelve, at which point his family just bit the bullet and brought the equipment he needed home, hiring a nurse to keep him alive.
He attended school haltingly, and often had to leave in the middle of the day to rest.

Some pretty basic info on background characters who will likely play roles in future events.

@GiskI changed the order of my post, because it makes sense that mine would come after yours.

Edit: It'll need an edit when I get home.

@Gisk I should definitely get off my ass and write a relationship section, but I was thinking that Zoey doesn't care for Audrey because of her overly confrontational attitude.

Solomon and Padma Majumdar: another pair of twins, but these ones fraternal. Mixed ethnicity, with an Indian father and African American mother. Both parents work in energy technology.

This is funny because in my own RP, I have a character who's half Indian/African-American and I used the exact same name as her maternal surname.

For real? I was naming them after a Cutthroat Kitchen judge.

For real? I was naming them after a Cutthroat Kitchen judge.

I can PM you the character (Just so it doesn't seem like I'm advertising) so you can see the similarities. lol

Go ahead, I may as well see it.

I'm holding off on posting again. I want to get to my computer so I can bump the players who haven't posted/haven't voted yet. Make sure they know there's stuff to do.

Healing: 3

Anti Machine: 1

Time stop: 0

Wound Transfer: 0

Looks like healing it is. Though there's a few who haven't voted yet, so maybe one of the others will turn around.

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@Polyphemus
@Wicked Sweet

Just poking some people we haven't heard from in the IC/vote.

And I wanna say, just in general, be careful with the size and particularly the number of actions in your posts. When there's multiple characters in the same area, you can't possibly respond to everything and eventually it will become a clusterfuck of events whose timeline is impossible to objectively decide.

An example is Michael putting the bill on teh counter, and the narration in Zoey's post remarking that there wasn't anyone there. When I made the post, Ellion's post had come before it, and in it Zoey had already returned to the front counter, but because of the large number of things happening, events got confused and it stopped making sense.

This sort of thing happens a lot when posts all try to react with each other. You have to be careful to keep the order of events clear, and this is the major disadvantage of longer posts, and the reason I typically advocate smaller ones for scenes with multiple players.

Honestly, when @Ellion reposted his second post, I got confused with the order of events and winged it. lol

@Mr Allen J Sheee. I changed it because it seemed like the events of the twins sorta came before my second might of f-ed up for sure

No worries, I'm winging it too some of the time.

I'm not sure if I should post and keep this going, or wait for some of those who haven't chimed in.

I think I'll wait, at least for the mean time. I won't wait too long because I don't want people to forget what's going on and lose interest(waiting is RP death, in my experience), but at the same time I know that not everyone is as available as me or some of the rest of us, and I don't want to leave the busier players behind.