@poog the pig@Vec@CycloneI'd first like to thank everyone for thier input, your feedback will go far towards helping me become a better writer.
Now I'd like to start off by saying that I never meant to come off as edgy. I applied Termite's words and chose to walk that thin line, but not cross it.
@poog the pig The thing is that you're wrong. From what I got, child sacrifice was ESSENTIAL to the plot in this case. It was BECAUSE they sacrificed children that they were able to create and enchant their weapons and armor, and in their belief, protect their tribe and people.
Even with that, and not any other justification, I'd say that there's no problem with it being in the post and ofc it belongs in the story. There would not be any story if no sacrifices were made.
I feel that
@Vec hit the nail on the head for this post. My intention was to create a tribe whose whole lives revolved around the Harvest and the Occult. While maybe a
child may have been taking it to far, I feel that it appropriately dispalyed the levels as to which mortals were willing to go in this would due to belief systems.
While I disagree with you on the fact that it had no place in the story, I can't help but see it from your point of view. To argue your view would be me basically spitting on your face when all along you set out to help me.
I will look to make less use of this style of writing, as I took, hate Young Adult Novels.
(I did enjoy the debate though, very interesting to read thru.)
