@MonstrousMan

Shit man. Ever motherfucking. member of the mobile monitor movement can PM on this site. Sling that signal at me when you like.

@dragonmancer

Your race is accepted. I'll add that under the coalition as example races. I'll get to your character sheet in a while. I'm half asleep.

@dragonmancer

Your race is accepted. I'll add that under the coalition as example races. I'll get to your character sheet in a while. I'm half asleep.

@dragonmancer

No wait. My mistake. I just noticed. You're over your stat point provided by 1, brother. You got 3 80's for 240 year life span.

8 x 3 = 24 = 80 x 3 is 240.

all stats start at 1 for free. so 6)str(+3(hp)+4(con) = 13 then + 3 for life span = 16.

I'll accept it anyway because, like. I'm not gonna juggle your chesters for one point. It's all good. Just let me know which point you'll like deducted and I'll edit it.

Sorry to ask but is my character accepted?

@Eviledd1984

Is your name ed? Have you been evil since your birth in 1984?

Curious.

@MonstrousMan

Name is not Ed but their is a character in the movie in Fright Night called Evil Ed,And also the 1984 part is because 1984 is my favorite book.

@Eviledd1984

Nice to meet you.

@ScreenAcne Lowered constitution by 1

@Eviledd1984

Shit, brother. some things are contradicting in your equipment(The MAP for example already as inbuilt servos of construction level. Adding domestic servos is sort of impossible due to it and the paragraphs need to be separated. There are some typos in your profile but most of it is fine.

Lore wise. It's ok. Keep in mind that you're character coming from the Sol galaxy and especially Earth would have a unique disposition of actually living under a federal government. A staunchly atheist one on a planet that lead a purge of religion entirely in a massive atheist campaign a long time ago. So, any sort of spiritualism would be suppressed by social shame alone. Play on that if you want to or not.

The same with living directly under the Terran Unity. I'd like to see, just a little more on his background. What happened when he first revived. In his life even as a chef he surely would of seen alot just by space faring and being apart of a militant faction. Explore those a little in his personality and background.

The core concept is fine though.

don't forget. you can take 2 careers as a revived. Maybe as a member of the triangle society, he was trained in something else too?

Might as well use the perk while you got it.

@LordofthePies

Accepted. Motherfucking. pretty good. You're starting off with something that can easily path to character development. You're career points are +2 to hit and initiative rolls against plants, bugs and animals of natural or artificial origin.

+2 to medicine.

I decided to split the stats up because it was a bit of a niche field and it seemed, a bit. yellow in the jello to just disregard entirely as generic medicine buff only.

@dragonmancer

Mostly good, brother. I'd would like to see a little bit on how his race(and him) took to being uplifted. Does your character approve, disagree. That their culture is being wiped, reduced to servants or made stronger. As a big alien on a human dominated galaxy. Does he feel isolated or sometimes vulnerable to the coalition propaganda.

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@everyone

Motherfucking. sorry I went more silent than a saints shitter. I sort of like. Had a sudden fever again and been getting weirdly tired, sweaty and a bit weird in talking. I'm also, motherfucking. waiting on some bcode to make this sheet look less like a blind mans painting and for some reason in my dizziness I didn't just say that.

but my sister who waving the wand to make this look less depressing twisting the fingers on the keyboard of life and I'm gonna jsut go ahead and make any changes tomorrow and sort out any additional code coloring myself.

It's kind of stupid how happy being allowed to move my character made me. xD

Okay so i was thinking of making him a medic too if that is okay to put also?Also would you mind if he has been apart of some civil wars and that kinda stuff if you allow him to be a medic?

@Eviledd1984

Sure. A lot of the weapons in the market section were created during civil disputes and colony on colony, mercenary, pirate and even bigger faction wars.

The only place there wouldn't be a war is the Sol system-earth's system- simply because the Terran Unity has so much force there that any separatist faction would be crushed within a day. Most, just leave and settle on some distant planet. Or they leave and take over another, smaller colonies planet that too far for the branch to protect them.

Then there is the Grave World Wars but that is more comparable to ww2 in scope of the horror and fighting. The Grave World faction goes into it in the factions section. If I recall correctly.

Imma wait for prices before making a CS...

Finished my editing if their is more i need to change i can do that.

@Eviledd1984@Brithwyr@LordofthePies@dragonmancer@MonstrousMan

Hey brothers. I just wanna ring the,motherfucking. bell. Let you know why this is going slower than a santa clause down a lite fireplace.

I've been sick since this whole started. I thought, like. the germs went off to grammies or something but two nights ago I woke up in a cold sweat and was moaning in pain for most of the night. I'm poking my friends to see if they can Co-GM so this can keep moving even while I'm pouring gland glactose out offline.

@ScreenAcne

Concern yourself with your own health before you think of us internet potatoes. Stay safe my friend, get well.

Get well soon, I understand that being sick for ages is awful.

Species proposal


Working on appearance and culture etc

EDIT: Flag (?)

Species proposal

Yul [+]

Concept Art [+]

Natural Organic Bonuses:
Full Spectrum eyesight (infrared/ultraviolet/colour).
Partial Exoskeleton (hard hitting and durable).
Dense nerve pocket in Thermoregulatory area.

Attributes:
Yul are mysterious and many cultures harbor superstitions towards them, in fear and awe alike, little is known so assumptions are made.
+Intimidation and deception bonus.
+Charismatic influence bonus for races with intelligence of four or less.

Yul blood is biologically sequenced to maintain liquid structure and fluidity while inside the Yul anatomy and circulation system. Once it exits the body it becomes gaseous and in most cases toxic for other organisms.
+When Yul are injured, the atmosphere around them becomes toxic. Causes nausea and internal damage to creatures with a constitution of three or less. Damages most biological structures (eyes and skin) over time, no matter the constitution score.

The muscular tail of the Yul, usually curled up beside the spine for protection, can be used to balance during many tasks and activity.
+Bonus to balance during acrobatic and athletic activities.
+Reduction in recoil when the tail can be deployed as a counterbalance.

Yul have evolved to scale uneven terrain and rocky environments, as such they cannot swim.
-Disadvantaged in aquatic environments.

Concussive impacts such as grenades and direct connection with the upper forehead disorient Yul completely as their frontal lobe is surrounded by a semi-flexible cartilage that can pressure the brain if shifted too suddenly.
-Weakness to concussive attacks.

Yul, while intelligent, do not express themselves through speech or written language, thus have no verbal capability and a very limited capacity for writing/reading.
- Disadvantage when reading languages.
- Unable to speak.
+ Can communicate through atmospheric chemicals and limited interspecies-telepathy with lifeforms from their home worlds.

Racial Stats:

Intelligence:5
Health:3
Dexterity:6
Strength:3
Natural armour:2
Constitution:2

Life expectancy:78 years

Working on appearance and culture etc

EDIT: Flag (?)

My Hider [+]

There are alot of advantages here, the overall ideas are cool but all benefits need to be counterbalanced with a negative.

No telepathy. Sorry. Aliens can't have telepathy, genetic engineering, augmented characteristics or any sort of powers. It's money and mash potatoes concept brother, to have telepathic mutes but it goes against the setting.

If you want, motherfucking. I can take a snap and try to suggest some counter balances brother.

I like the flag. The fact you got a flag is cool. I can see that becoming a political issue. You got a flag but the coalition is sort of plastered over it or its only ever used as a footnote in the coalition race log. Maybe, like. you're dudes are trying to be boost their racial identity and shit.

@ScreenAcne

Still WIP but yeah, hit me up with some negatives.

Okay, telepathy is a no go, how about the atmospheric/chemical one? Perhaps could incorporate kinetic energy into the communication too...