Yus, the IC is up.

I shall work on postie posts in a bit.

@Holy Soldier - The project wouldn't happen to be 'Harvey', would it? In an attempt to make an invisible Godslayer...

@Holy Soldier - Petition to have you say 'Nyeeehh, What's up doc?' while indolently lounging and gnawing on a carrot.

@Sarcelle RenardWill start working on a post, but first how are we all receiving the message? Wouldn't want to whip out a flip phone, when everybody is reading a hologram projected by a bracelet

@Reijin Buru Bah, I knew I was missing something with the intro post. On the surface, the bracelets do serve as a PDA of sorts, capable of sending and receiving messages while also providing mission coordinators with important bio-rhythmic data and the location of any AG wearing them. So in short, they would have received the message on both the bracelet and on their personal terminal in their room.

Which reminds me... I have quite a bit of updating to do on the OOC post when I get back from class today, so look forward to that.

@Holy Soldier I apparently missed some of your previous posts, but I am not sure where you are getting this idea that I am going to be some kind of malevolent GM that is going to cackle gleefully and deny your character's progression or "police" you. Believe me, I want this RP to fun and interesting for everyone, yourself included, but that means that he had to be toned down a bit so that he wasn't outclassing everybody by miles from start to finish. And it's also not like I'm singling you out on this, as I've had multiple people tone down their characters for the sake of a balanced RP and I will continue to make calls on everyone in order to maintain the Rule of Cool.

Also, I am completely fine with him being above average in most physical attributes compared to other AGs to make up for how vanilla he will be at the start, that's why the only limitations I asked you to place on him was on his regeneration and the number of abilities he can learn. He will be fully capable of dealing with the fiends that he will face at the beginning of the game. Essentially, he is the wizard in a DnD campaign: limited at the beginning, but a versatile monster that few can compare to come late game.

And while there is some shred of truth to what you say about it being indirectly up to me how strong your character gets, you need to keep in mind that it is ultimately up to you to think of new ways to combine and utilize the Abilities he learns. An untested group that has never seen real combat will not be sent against the strongest, most terrifying Fiends known to man. I don't want to spoil anything, but Xiro Zean hit the nail on the head when he said that this RP will be about growth and development, so I need you to have some patience and let believe me when I say that he will be plenty powerful when it comes time to fight a God.

Alright, back from school, and ready to make my fingers bleed type out an intro post!

@Holy Soldier - Petition to have you say 'Nyeeehh, What's up doc?' while indolently lounging and gnawing on a carrot.

I sign the petition.

@Holy Soldier I apparently missed some of your previous posts, but I am not sure where you are getting this idea that I am going to be some kind of malevolent GM that is going to cackle gleefully and deny your character's progression or "police" you. Believe me, I want this RP to fun and interesting for everyone, yourself included, but that means that he had to be toned down a bit so that he wasn't outclassing everybody by miles from start to finish. And it's also not like I'm singling you out on this, as I've had multiple people tone down their characters for the sake of a balanced RP and I will continue to make calls on everyone in order to maintain the Rule of Cool.

That, after all, would be violating Rule 2.

So, I did my post :D I had the twins enter after everyone else, so when you guys are making your posts, be sure to recognize that they would not reach the meeting until it was nearly about to start. Thanks :D

@Sarcelle Renard
Did I write too much for a post? I'm still not very used to the RP Guild writing formats (Free, Casual, Advanced) and may or may not have accidentally written more than I should have :/

Also, was I too forward in placing my characters in a future where they were the last ones through the door, when my post was the 2nd in the IC?

@Xiro Zean

No such thing as too much.

Just look at my post :D

@Rune_Alchemist
Lol, I love how both of our characters spend time beating the crap out of punching bags...

Name: Salik "Cure"
Gender: Male

Age: 15

Appearance:


Salik's number is on the back of his left hand. Through his genetic code, his eyes, while conscious, glow white. His eyes glowing does not affect his sight, however his eyes do show in the dark.

Number: 14th (XIV)

Rank: B

Personality: Salik wants nothing more than to fill his role, his whole reason for existing. He wants to smite the 'Gods' from the earth and create a world capable of both Humans and God Slayers to exist. He values every single life of that follows true, going from his brothers and sisters to the humans that still reside on the earth. His tactical thinking makes him ideal in most situations, always following orders to successfully complete a mission, however, will never do any action that will directly affect those close to him.

Likes -

• Protecting others
• Chess
• Problem Solving

Dislikes -

• Those around him getting hurt
• Cowards
• Failing those close to him

Enhancement(s): Salik has had two enhancements. His perception skills have been altered to allow him to read any situation faster then any human or Slayer. He is able to see any given situation faster and be able to react faster then others. This allows him to see an attack and potentially dodge it, he can change his attack in mid swing and change it, allowing to be more diverse while attack, but also, will allow him time to think in the most heated of battles. His second enhancement is to pair with his new found perception skills, his legs. His legs have been altered allowing him to move almost 10 times faster if needed, allowing him to be the perfect striker.

Weapon(s): Salik uses a Scythe. However he has an alteration. His has drilled a chain into his right forearm, the chain can extend up to 5 meters, he connects the chain to the bottom of his weapon, allowing him to be a close and medium range fighter, also without losing his weapon.

Ability: Salik has the ability to create Shock Waves, allowing him to send a pulse into the ground to come up at another point, often used to pin a target to a certain spot, but can also be used to send a shock wave of disorientation through his weapon. His shock waves shift the ground below, softening the ground and pinning the target to the ground. However, the further the target is, the more energy required, as well as how big the target is.

@Hippo AF
We already have a Number 13. I may not be a GM, but I'm sure they'd want you to change your number for the sake of continuity.

Again, not a GM, but I can already see that your Ability goes waaaaay beyond B Rank. Practically deletes everything from existence, meaning that the attack can even destroy on a subatomic level, and goes through most if not all forms of defense...yeah, Okay.

His enhancements... I'm not even going to deign that with a comment. I'll let the all-powerful Sarcelle rip that to pieces be the judge of something that "allows him to not only hit every attack, dodge every danger, but also to think of a counter plan within milliseconds."

That's not much xD I've seen people post like... Over 10,000 words at one point.@Xiro Zean

@Xiro Zean As i did mention, its not his main attack and his primarily used for defense, their are a lot of drawbacks that i forgot to add.

@Hippo AF
Then please do mention them, before a GM gets on. There is absolutely no way that the GM would allow a character that can literally one-shot every enemy he faces, along with having Godmodding literally injected into his bloodstream.

If he, who does anything to finish a mission, does not use such a powerful ability from the get go, he not only breaks character, but also openly defies what he fights for.

@Xiro Zean Better?

Changes Made -
*Rank
*Magic
*His enhancement descriptions

@Hippo AF
Yes. I'm sorry if I seemed rude, but my biggest pet peeve when it comes to creating a character is when they're a Mary Sue/ Gary Stu without good reason, and sometimes even then. Draco, when you first unveiled him, was leagues better than anyone on the force. Hell, if that was truly his B rank, then they might as well have sent him off to kill every Fiend and god with no backup after releasing all of the limiters. If I caused you any anger, please forgive my rudeness :/

@Xiro Zean Ahaha, nah it's all good, criticism is what helps make good characters, great characters. Thanks for all your help though :P

@Hippo AF

Alllright. Now, I'm just gonna give my opinion on the CS for the moment. He was a bit too OP to begin with, but now you've made him a bit under powered I think.

His speed, agility, and perception being what it is - I think that's fine, since he doesn't have brute strength to back it up. However, his ability doesn't really seem to be much of an ability, that said, perhaps I'm just not seeing what you want to do with it in the future.

How would the ability potentially get stronger/better? Character growth is going to be a big thing in the RP as far as abilities go, so I'm just curious as to what you might have planned for it.

That said, if that is indeed what you want, I don't see much of a problem with anything else at all.