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”Who would have thought that so much destruction could come from an event as innocuous as a girl falling from the sky. We call them gods out of fear of what we still don’t understand about them, but what we are certain of is that if they continue on their path of destruction, humanity is doomed. For all of our advancements in the art of killing one another, we were barely able to slow them down. But there is hope, for today marks the birth of the first of many weapons that we will use to turn the tide in this war. They may simply appear to be children right now, but in time they will grow to become our saviors, our Godslayers. I do not claim to know all of this will turn out, but I fear we will not get another chance after this.

-From the journal of Raymond Verner, head researcher of the Godslayer Project





The Story







Not too far into the future, a woman fell from the sky and landed, unharmed, in a busy street. This peculiar event was quickly covered up by the government and the strange woman was taken to a facility to be studied. Such a thing should have been lost to history as one of the many things in this world that would go unexplained. That is, until the sky opened up and creatures straight out of nightmares started leveling entire cities. Bullets and artillery quickly proved useless against this new threat and as they marched on, humanity could only think of one name for these beings that brought down perdition: Gods.

The mysterious girl that heralded this new threat would prove to be the key to the last hope humanity could cling to. Preliminary examination revealed that she was clearly not human and her catatonic state had nothing to do with her entrance to our world. And as they studied her more, it became apparent that not only was she not from our world, she seemed to defy everything we knew about science. Traces of powers and abilities that man had only been able to imagine manifested themselves in the girl from time to time. One of these incidents gave a scientist a close brush with death and a dangerous idea.

This man, Raymond Verner, theorized that this woman was not only connected to the Gods that were destroying civilization, but that she was also the answer to them. By using in vitro fertilization with one of her eggs, a new breed of weapon was born. Godslayers, as the researchers took to calling them, for their design and purpose was singular in that one regard. From birth, they were given enhancements to make them proficient at fighting humanity’s greatest foe. And as they aged, their training was nonstop as scientists worked day and night to perfect them.

It has been 15 years since the Gods first arrived. And now, the fate of what is left of humanity is in their hands. Will they be our saviors? Or is humanity simply destined to be wiped from the face of this world?




Gods and Their Slayers







Although they are referred to as Gods, the creatures that have all but annihilated the human race bear no real similarities to the mythical gods of old. Yet, the name stuck so they are given designations based on their attributes. Above is Agni, for his flames have swallowed entire cities and left not even ash in their wake. But it has been quite some time since Agni, or any god for that matter, have shown themselves. Instead, they send their Fiends, creatures that are imbued with a portion of their power and are similarly named after mythical monsters, out to end humanity. Nobody is certain where exactly the Gods are hiding, but it is theorized that if enough of a God’s Fiends are slain, the God will reveal themselves.

That’s where the Godslayers come in. Due to the impossibly durable nature of both the Gods and Fiends, modern weapons have little effect on them. But with their enhancements, abilities, and top of the line weapons, Godslayers are the one force able to effectively put these monstrosities down. Each one has a black roman numeral tattooed somewhere on their body, signifying their status as a Godslayer and to show the order they were born in. For reasons the scientists are still unable to explain, the first generation, those numbered I through IX, are stronger than the subsequent generations.

Missions come in two flavors: Scouting and Slaying. The former is only done in cases that those in command are either unsure of what threat is present or if they have never seen it before. Often, these missions are made up of small squads of Godslayers with abilities that are less combat oriented and are trained to get in and get out of an area quickly. Slaying missions are the bulk of what the Godslayers take part in and as the name implies, involves hunting down Gods and their Fiends. Since they have arrived, no country has been able to take down a God.

When not on missions, Godslayers will be housed at the project’s headquarters, which is surrounded by mountains and located so far off the grid that civilization cannot be found for miles. Slayer HQ provides a nearly uncountable number of facilities for training, but offers very little for leisure. The inside of the facility is state of the art, but not particularly inviting, but it is the only thing the Godslayer’s have had to associate with home.




The Rules





On top of the standard Guild rules, I am only asking for you folks to follow these two broad rules:

1) The Rule of Cool: This is going to be a very over the top RP, with our characters eventually taking down monstrous beings that can be equated to gods. Naturally, that means our characters are going to be doing things that throws logic out the window and enters the realm of the impossible. I am quite willing to overlook things that seem to go against what has been previously been established if it makes out end result cooler and/or more fun for everyone. With that said though, I do not want to see a story where our characters are easily toppling everything in their path in one hit, as that just sounds awfully anticlimactic. Basically, let’s all do our best to keep this RP fun and interesting.

2) The Bill and Ted Addendum: In short, this rule can be summed up as, “Be excellent to each other.” I fully expect some of our characters to butt heads in the IC, but I would hate to see that spill over into the OOC. If any problems arises between you and another player, please come to me or a Co-GM so we can sort things out peacefully. This rule also applies to be excellent to each other in character as well, so no autohitting, no godmodding, and especially no killing other player’s character without their express permission. Also, we have plenty of players, so please wait a minimum of three IC posts before going again.








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Alllright, Co-GM signing on for duty~

I must now sleep though. I have been moving things all day and am tired. Will return tomorrow to harshly critique CS's and crush the dreams of RP hopefuls~ ;D

night all!~
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Alright, went ahead and put my CS in the CHAR tab before I went to bed.

totally not because I can't sleep, nope.
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Wait do I need my CS approved or do I just post it in the CHAR Tab?
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@LokiLeo789 Everybody is going to have to re-submit their characters here, as I didn't really look at anybody's sheet with a critical eye. Plus, this is a good way to see who is still interested in doing this.
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Here is mine.




Edit: Made the changes.
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Personally, I can't find too much wrong with her, Death. Wait on our glorious GM @Sarcelle Renard for final decisions, though~
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Alrighty now, let's get some CS's reviewed.

@LokiLeo789 I'm unfortunately going to need you to scale down Barracuda's ability back a good bit. As it is now, it is simply far too powerful to be classified as a rank B and will fly right in the face of the Rule of Cool, as there would hardly be any reason for him to go on missions with anyone else. His enhancements also make him far too perfect and it also begs the question if the first Godslayer was so perfect, why are II-IX so lackluster in comparison? In short, I have to ask you to dial back each aspect of his Primal Mode a good deal (right now I would classify them as an S in overall combined power) and at minimum tone down his speed and tactician enhancements.

I apologize if this seems harsh, as I'm all for having strong and bad ass characters, but right now he would pretty much invalidate the rest of the cast. Besides, we have an entire RP for our characters to grow and become ridiculously powerful, so why not start with some room to grow?

@DeathXtheXTree I don't see anything wrong here and I believe Karu would make an excellent addition to Scouting teams. I will say, however, that she seems a bit weak for a rank C, so you certainly have some wiggle room if you want to make her a bit stronger. Since we are going up against monstrous beings, I'd say 50 lbs is a much more reasonable limit for her Telekinesis and that her Mind Manipulation can slightly influence the perceptions of her enemies (as in make them see/hear things that aren't there). I would also like to keep each character with only one ability, so I would rather have you combine the two and call it something like Psionics. That way, there is also room for her to expand upon her powers and she gets stronger.

I also don't think you need to have such a massive drawback as having her bones easily crushed for increased speed, unless you have something else in mind for her hollow bones.

@Holy Soldier I unfortunately think Superior Adaption is simply a bit too strong to be considered an enhancement. I would be more OK with him essentially being immortal if you combine his Rapid Cellular Regeneration and Adaptable Resistances into one thing and put it under his Ability tab, that way it can scale appropriately with the RP. For example, at Rank B he can regrow a limb within a few days, at SSS he can come back from a single cell. As for his Resistance, he shouldn't be able to completely be able to shrug off a God's attacks forever after being hit by it once. I also feel like the resistance should lose its effectiveness over time, just so he isn't capable of going one-on-one with anything until the end of days.
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@Sarcelle RenardI put it as enhancement because it wasn't an ability that he could turn on and off. It relies completely on what he's exposed to. I can, however, have him adapt to the abilities he's exposed to for that one battle (meaning after the battle, the abilities vanish if he's no longer exposed to them). The abilities section would have been filled with the abilities he's learned from being exposed to them. Otherwise, it would stay empty if he was never exposed to anything.

You have to understand that he is average, average as in...he's not one of those world-shatterers, Supermans, or extreme superhero-level characters. He's like I'd say a street-level in power, so he fits B perfectly. Could he adapt into that level overtime? Yes, he could.

I wasn't imagining him scaling into the higher ranks unless he learned enough abilities to have reached those ranks. I'm finding it difficult to change him to exactly what you want because I don't know exactly what you want for him. Immortality...I didn't really make him immortal because if his cells were completely incinerated, then he would be dead. However, he doesn't age beyond where he was created to be. So yeah, I'm stumped.
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Alrighty now, let's get some CS's reviewed.

@LokiLeo789 I'm unfortunately going to need you to scale down Barracuda's ability back a good bit. As it is now, it is simply far too powerful to be classified as a rank B and will fly right in the face of the Rule of Cool, as there would hardly be any reason for him to go on missions with anyone else. His enhancements also make him far too perfect and it also begs the question if the first Godslayer was so perfect, why are II-IX so lackluster in comparison? In short, I have to ask you to dial back each aspect of his Primal Mode a good deal (right now I would classify them as an S in overall combined power) and at minimum tone down his speed and tactician enhancements.

I apologize if this seems harsh, as I'm all for having strong and bad ass characters, but right now he would pretty much invalidate the rest of the cast. Besides, we have an entire RP for our characters to grow and become ridiculously powerful, so why not start with some room to grow?


A few days after posting this in the IC I remember looking over it and determining that he was abit on the strong side of the spectrum. By no means were your words harsh, so worry not about that. Ill get to working on toning that down.
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@Holy Soldier Ah, it looks like we have a bit of a misunderstanding here. I'm not trying to shape him into something I want, I'm just giving suggestions to make him more balanced for the start of the RP, but I see where you are coming from as well. Starting out he would indeed be a bit on the weak side, but right now he has the potential to become grossly powerful incredibly quickly. According to his CS, his physical and mental capabilities are already "above average" and it seems like there isn't a limit to how many abilities he can learn.

And I would argue that the way you have described his Rapid Cellular Regeneration does essentially make him immortal, as burning every last cell of a person is nearly impossible, which would make the rate at which he can learn new, powerful abilities very fast and essentially risk free. But I now have a better understanding of what you are going for, so instead how about this:

He can regenerate wounds, but if his head is destroyed/decapitated, he his dead as a door nail. That way, there is still a risk associated with him learning new powers and has to be careful when he makes the attempt. I also feel like it would be a too strong if he is capable of retaining the full power of any ability he learns, so perhaps there has to be some kind of storage limit or they are reduced in effectiveness the more he learns.

Again, these are suggestions to bring him more in line with the other players. If you compare him to Karu or Aegis, he would completely invalidate the need for them in any fight as he is now. If you can come up with any tweaks that you like better that levels the playing field, than I am all for it.
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@Sarcelle RenardI'll make it so that if he's decapitated, then he will die like most would. But I'm curious if this would just be for rank B?

As for his learning, maybe if he's exposed to the ability a certain amount of times. Like 10 times? Exposure is suffering, so he'd literally have to be struck by the attack/affliction. And maybe for rank B he can learn up to 4 abilities?

Because if he has a limitation on learning abilities meaning they just vanish overtime, then he doesn't ever have any abilities and the ability section remains empty. Therefore, he might as well be rank B forever.
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@Holy Soldier - I believe one way might be to have the learnt effects fade over time to a base level dependent on overall exposure and time since last exposure. The more exposure, the slower the learnt effects fade. And maybe a delay from exposure to ability increase effect, so he's not instantly able to counter. And the more incidents, the higher the resting base level. How this would be actioned in game, I have no idea, but that would appear to sort out both issues. I'll leave this as a suggestion for @Sarcelle Renard to put some thought into.
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I'm just a lowly Co-GM, but the problem I have and our powerful all might GM, I think has, is that if he's able to keep all of these abilities, then he basically becomes unstoppable later down the road since he would be able to pretty much do everything. Even the abilities of other Godslayers if he fights them. Which is ridiculous, and makes the point of other Godslayers completely moot down the line.

Saying that he has to be exposed to a certain ability a number of times to adapt and has a limit is a good idea, I think.

Having him to have to consciously choose which abilities to keep in his 'storage' would be much more effective. Every time he learns another, then he has to throw another out and decide if its worth it or not. Plus, coming up with creative ways to use these adaptations together would be an extremely effective weapon. Obviously, at higher ranks he could have more abilities and likely be able to use them to full effectiveness.

just my two cents. Best to wait on @Sarcelle Renard for a complete answer.
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Will fix that part.

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@Holy Soldier Others have pointed out some pretty marvelous points, but I don't want to come off as dictating how your character works. So I would much prefer if you were to tweak it to your liking, instead of me tellibg you how it should be.

So once more, my concerns are twofold: 1) He is currently able to learn a great deal of abilities quickly and essentially risk free 2) The ability to indefinitely store an infinite number of full power abilities right off the bat is simply too strong.

As long as you tweak him in such a way that those two concerns are no longer a problem, than he is golden in my books

@Doltboy This is completely my opinion, but his ability seems more like an Enhancement tham a full on Ability. He's accepted and you're by all means allowed to keep him as is, but you're also welcome to expand upon his Ability if you like as well.

@DeathXtheXTree I didn't mean for it to sound like it's a problem, I was just trying to help ensure that she didn't feel underpowered. As always, it's your character so you by no means have to take my opinions as law.
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