@Hippo AF@Rune_Alchemist

If I may intrude again, if there are no other ideas, I would suggest something on the scale of Guts' Berserker Armor. Maybe, as he grows stronger, he can convert the damage done to him as a bolster to his own strength, while simultaneously being unable to feel the pain? Ofcourse, this would be more down the line, but you could give him a watered down version for his B rank. Maybe gain a temporary boost of power dependant on the wound? (slight: almost no change. Crippling: Tons of damage)

Edit: I've noticed that I've been butting in alot when it comes to problems in the RP. If it gets to be annoying or bad, please tell me and I will reign myself in :/

@Xiro Zean

nah, don't worry about it. You've been pretty helpful in my opinion.

@Rune_Alchemist
I blame the RP Hype. It's infecting my mind...

@Hippo AF
I was kidding about the edginess.....
@Xiro Zean
Yeah, I know what you mean about Mary Sues. I have actually seen a serious application on this site that was a Mary Sue. The GM got too disappointed in the entire thing to actually go through what was wrong with it.

woo post up

As i am doing a test, i will alter his magic soon, i completely forgot about the Ability that i actually wanted to use in the first place, and it is Shock Wave, the ability to send a pulse into the ground to come up at another point, often used to pin a target to a certain spot, but can also be used to send a shock wave of disorientation through his weapon. A progressive state could be that of an earthquake

And Grey? Well she didn’t want to be on his bad side… again. She sighed hard and started to make a beeline towards the Auditorium. Deciding not to take the detour after all.

Smart girl. Hell hath no fury like a slacker's scorn.

@Xiro Zean Don't worry, you're golden Pony Boy. I can't imagine a situation where I would complain about a post being too long and you are free to provide constructive criticism as long as you respect Rule #2.

@Hippo AF There are a few things that I find problematic with Draco at the moment. To begin with, his ability honestly sounds more like an Enhancement to me, mostly due to the simple fact that it could be explained by science, while most other Abilities cannot. I won't make you change it if you don't want to, but I'm having a hard time imagining how he will keep up with the rest of the cast as the story progresses. As it stands, it really isn't an ability worthy of being considered a B rank, so if you do wish to keep it as is, you should probably bring his rank down to a C perhaps even D. And another thing to keep in mind, while the RP is fueled by pure Rule of Cool, I will still expect a broken arm to be treated like a broken arm. No amount of pain suppression is going to let you use that limb normally, as there will be plenty of things that will simply impossible for it to do from a mechanical standpoint.

That brings me to his personality. The will to throw his life and the lives of those around him is not really something that any of his instructors would have fostered. The Godslayers, especially the ones that are eligible to be sent on missions, are precious weapons that cannot be replicated, so I find it difficult to imagine that any tactic that involves sacrificing one for any and all missions to be something the higher ups would ever consider acceptable. So while I am not telling you to change his personality, just keep in mind that those strategies will be met with considerable, if not insurmountable, opposition.

And finally, my last real concern is, admittedly, a rather nit picky one. We already have a completely unrelated Godslayer named Drake, so having another one named Draco just seems to be needlessly redundant. Again, it's a nit picky concern, thus one I am not particularly worried about compared to the other two, but still something that I felt should be mentioned.

The main thing I would like you to focus on at the moment is his ability, or rather his lack thereof. Whatever you decide, just let us know when you are ready for us to take another look at him.

@Sarcelle Renard As i just mentioned i will replace his ability with the one above, and the other changes will be made

@Hippo AF Ah, I must have been still typing when you posted that. Anyway, due to a mishap on my end, the top 13 have actually been filled. I apologize for the inconvenience, but I have to ask you to pick a different number.

@Ashevelendar This spills over to you as well unfortunately, as the IX spot was already filled, so if you would like to keep Ashe in the top 13, she will have to take the number XI slot. Hopefully this isn't too much of an issue with you.

@Sarcelle Renard He'll be 14

@Sarcelle Renard It's ok. I was one of the first ( more or less ) that made a CS but ok...I'll take XI. I'll edit the CS once I get home.

@Ashevelendar Yeah I know, this one is completely on me. I apologize for the inconvenience, but I thank you for being such a rock star about it.

Lol she is a smart girl xD
@Sarcelle Renard

Edit - Karu doesn't want to start fights especially on a real mission or make their day bad

@Sarcelle Renard Their we go, his ability and personality have DRASTICALLY changed. Kind of happy as i'll be able write better with this way of thinking but i was trying to go for something a lil' different

@Sarcelle Renard It's ok. Funny thing is that something like this happened to me twice so you could say I have...experience xD

Sorry that I didn't post yesterday...I got home at 10:30 wrote something for my other RPs and then I fell asleep at my desk. Woke up 2 hours later , closed off the PC and went to bed. I promise I'll write today. I'll be home at (hopefully) 7PM tops. ( it's 10:07 AM atm )

Question. Do we have a rule (or guideline) about post order? I've been in multiple roleplays where you have to wait two or three posts until you can make another post.

Gimme an hour and a half or so, I'll get a post up for Virgil.

@HaltingBlooper I find two to three posts to be a pretty good rule of thumb, but given the amount of people in this madhouse I am goung to advocate the hell out of collaboration posts when interacting with other characters to keep the IC looking pretty.

titanpad.com and google docs are both fantastic for just that.

@Sarcelle Renard
Ooohhh... I seriously regret my decision of my characters appearing later on. Its already looking be be quite a cast of personalities in the Auditorium XD

Also, should we ping those who haven't been active in the OOC for confirmation of their continued existence in this RP? I know that Uber (The person who drafted Blair) has just recently walked out of the hospital, but I think we should ping so that they can know the IC is up.

@Sarcelle Renard Am I cleared? Salik, The Cure