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@Ezekial Wolffe I'd say still just put down a CS for future reference I guess

@Eisenhorn I would say that it might just be from the wording, but it seems that knows a good deal of his past, more so than normal for a Fatefallen. Kind of gives off the vibe that he was just chucked into suspended animation and came out all as normal a few years later without any memory lost. The rest of it looks good though.

His apathy towards what is technically a prophesied duty is a neat personality quirk though.

@The Dow Dragon Same thing for you, Jakos has quite the good memory for a Fatefallen. Also the fact that your entire sheet baring three words is all a bright red is trying on the eyes. The rest looks solid.

@Damiann47 Excellent work from you as usual, I love her.

@agentmanatee Same to you, good job but I will say you get wonky with tenses, might want to fix that. I would put in a Shia Labeouf meme/joke but I don't know how to pull it off atm

@Paraffin Not going to lie, you have a hella fancy sheet of which my mind can only truly comprehend a certain amount of. Also, Ophidatl's appearance is confusing since the picture looks like a piece of modern art and the written description isn't helping much out either ^^;

@Nightrunner Simple, yes, but a decent sheet none the less, covered all the ground you needed for me atm.



As of now, the three people who have been accepted proper are Manatee, Damian and Nightrunner although I might still accept some more people in proper soon whether that be 1 person or 3 is up to my mood and confidence at said time. To the three that have been accepted properly, I would like to have you three be a part of a quick "Alpha Test" of the RP's combat system of basically you three going through a collective dream dungeon just to test it out to work out any initial kinks after which who ever else has been accepted can join in.

Note that the "Alpha Test" would be something of a little prologue and that everyone whose characters were involved will have their memories erased of it as to not affect IC too much. Anything that happens in the Alpha won't be making its way into the IC "modern" timeline.
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@ClocktowerEchos Its probably the wording, but I can certainly reword it if you want. He really knows nothing besides having been a thief and assassin of sorts. That's it really. No detail on assumed targets, his former employers, ect ect. But, like I said, I'm more than happy to rewrite it to sound better if you want.
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I'm still interested, but I won't be making a CS since everyone else got to the thread first. I'll be happy to make one though if anyone drops later on.
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@EisenhornThat would be much appriciated, other than that he's good but won't be in the Alpha.

@Mike73 If ya wanna make one then by all means go for it.
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@ClocktowerEchos Heh, I just get a "excellent work" not gonna lie but that makes me feel pretty good about myself. Anyway of course I'm up for the alpha run, guess I'll be waiting for when you kick it off.
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@ClocktowerEchos You got it, I'll let you know when it has been re written.
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@ClocktowerEchos There we go, tweaked it. Also took into account the Pendent, for my own amusement.
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I was inspired and ended up making a character anyway in case a spot did open up. If there's anything I need to change, go ahead and let me know.

EDIT: Jeez the image ended up being huge. I'm not really sure how to resize it, so I'm sorry if it's kind of obnoxious.

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Aaaaand finished! When you find room, let me know.

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Took me longer than I thought it would to make an OP >.>
Anyways, @Damiann47@agentmanatee@Nightrunner, time for you to be guinea pi-- test out the system, or at least start it. Think of it as a bit of a tutorial if you would, right now you're going into the movement and maybe basic combat system. Do as you wish within the limits of the scenarios, this is all testing.

Also, for reference, each one of you is in your own little "halls", unaware that anyone else is going under the same testing atmm as far as you know, some woman in black just appeared and something in the back of your head is forcing you follow what she says wether you will it yourself or not (think of it as a thought override).

Reminder that this is a first alpha testing so do understand there's going to be derps and such along the way as stuff gets smoothed out. Thank you ^^

Also, @All, feel free to move your sheets over to the Chars tab, I'll just put active players in a list .
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I'll post up tonight or tomorrow
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Same, although a little more likely I'll be putting something up today since I don't have anything important going on, but I'm also feeling pretty tapped out. Still pretty exciting to get this sorta on the road.
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@agentmanatee@Damiann47 Roger

Also, thinking of letting someone else take Night's place in the Alpha if he doesn't show up in two days.
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Very fitting theme, Jeopardy could have worked too.
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The jaws theme was much better, seeing as it reflects my malicious intent perfectly. I'm still waiting on Clocku to approve my character anyway.
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@Ezekial Wolffe@Mike73 Both of your CSs look good
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@ClocktowerEchos

That remix was goddamn gold. Best part was reading the comments as everyone slowly died off. It really fucked with my head though, I'll give it that.

It also fits considering what's actually going on, Sage is gonna... dunno, but she's probably not going to be all that thrilled, cause you know... its all sorta stupid. Glad there's a sense of humor though, I like it.
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