@Thecrash20 While I am unsure if Noodles wants to be the only one who can officially accept or deny characters, as Co-GM, I feel I am allowed to offer a personal opinion.

The CS seems good by me, save for one thing.

According to the Canon and likely the case here, most PvP'ers were either arrested or outright killed if they intended to kill other players. As it seems like you have hinted, then your character has killed other players for the heck of it.

Meaning that he's likely considered a criminal, and would probably be hunted to be arrested by pretty much every character here if their bios are anything to go off of.

As such, I'd like to advise either removing it, or noting that the PvP he engaged in was such things as Duels in which the opponent wasn't killed. (I don't count self defense/attacking criminal groups such as Laughing Coffin exclusively as PvP.)

Apologies if I misinterpreted anything.

@Thecrash20 Not to be rude, but,

As stated in my post, the Red Player is hidden among the orange icon players surrounding him. You wouldn't be able to notice the red player.

Furthermore, none of the enemies have charged yet. So the part about your opponent charging, and you activating the pick is invalid at the moment.

I am going to have to ask you to adjust your post.

The initiate, a heavily armed STR player, was to engage the one trying to be edgy (Enyo)

A twisted smile grew on his lips as they grew ever so closer, nobody breaking formation or giving any hint of their attack plans yet. Not until he decided that it was time,