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Okay, I think I'm done! Let me know if anything needs to be worked on.

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anyone else interested? We need more people before we start.
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I had some issues with the pictures on my phone, but I do believe they are working correctly.
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@Hazard Bits Pictures do work, thanks!
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I'm still waiting for more people to join. Two or three more are perfect. If anyone is interested, please join!
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Bippidy boppidy bump!

(Also, finished my 2nd character and posted below the first one, for anyone wondering)
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Currently interested, will work on CS later
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So far, I think we need more males.

Like, a lot more males.
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My round-up of characters is already a sausage fest, I might as well whip up another dude for this rp, just not sure how I'll be able to balance posting with two characters.
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I will go over your sheets today. Note that i will probably be fairly strict with them in order to get high quality charries. Do not take this as me being against you.

Also anyone is still free to join.
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@PrideRock While your sheet does look good, I have to comment on something about the emissary part. Since she is hot-tempered and harsh-spoken, this should mean that she isn't a very good emissary other than being a good negotiator. Is that correct?

Also, humans JUST arrived at Athea... which means nothing is known about them. ^^

@Yuuta Interesting character personality, although a bit short, which isn't a problem. The history is pretty nice, short and sweet and to the point. However, like I said before, humans JUST arrived on the continent which means dragons know little to nothing about humans and vice versa.

@Vashonn Nothing much is known about Teron other than being quiet and reserved... what is his interior personality like? Is he a sweetie pie, or is he a dick? He can be basically everything with that personality cause he literally doesn't interact with many people.

What exactly are traitor dragons? Are they dragons that murdered their own House members or simply switched sides? Other than that, Teron's sheet is okay.

Now... first of all, Lucille's appearance is too "cute"; it's one of the types of pictures I didn't ask for (pics that have big eyes, too "kawaii", etc) so I would ask you to please change the picture.

Lucille's personality is interesting. ^^

@Herald I like this character-- he's basically the typical "sneaky, silver-tongued guy" that is present in a lot of RPs. Not that it's a bad thing!

Here's one thing though; you wrote: "He has traveled to many of the cities in the Nocturne-controlled territory, making friends among the merchant class as well as the “scum of society”.

Dragons don't have cities. It states it in the OP:

Even though there are specific Houses that almost all dragons classify themselves under, all dragons under one House do not live together. Instead, they live in small groups, or even alone, scattered throughout the territory. Only nobles live together, sometimes bringing in their most trusted men or women to live in their group. However, such groups do not reach more than a population or five or six, unless families are large. Even then, there are usually squabbles over small patches of territory. Dragons only come together in larger groups when they have to work together for a cause.

So yeah, it would be better if he encountered little "mini-tribes" or even nomadic groups of dragons rather than full blown cities. ^^

@Emu Interesting character as well... but a commander of troops in early 20s is way too early. Maybe make it that she was 25?

@Hazard Bits He's cute. Accepted!
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@Ambra the picture was so hard to find tho ;-;

Alrighty, I'll get to work on fixin' up what you requested in the mornin'! Any suggestions on where to find a good picture of a sailor girl without getting images of Sailor Moon?
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@Vashonn You don't have to put a picture of a girl in a sailor out. Just putting up a picture of a girl and saying she's a sailor would be enough.
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Another question, what would happen if a pure blooded noble dragon somehow went missing as a child? Would a family of common dragons even take it in? Would they be able to tell whether or not it is noble blooded?

What I meant by what would happen if it went missing is that would there be an extensive search that would last years? Would they eventually give up and assume that the child died? In this scenario when he was still a baby he was swept away by a river and raised by a family of commoners.
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@Solaris Pretty sure that the pure blooded dragons would go out of their way to find the child, and the dragons of the other Houses would find a way to return it to its proper home.
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@Ambra made my adjustments, like you asked, and tried to find a picture that didn't deviate too far from the one before in terms of what I was going for. Hopefully that works!
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@Ambra Good point. I'll adjust the age on there, then!
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@Ambra from what I can tell regular Dragons live in nomadic groups for the most part, but how does the Dragon nobility live?

I'll also be posting Character sheets either later tonight or sometime tommorow
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So being new to this site, do I need to make adjustments to my posted character sheet or are those just facts I need to be aware of?
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@PrideRock probably just a small amount of editing
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