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[OOC] The Folly of a Felicitous Prince [CLOSED] Page 17

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Welp, I don't know about royal greatness, turns out it's pretty hard to figure out what a prince does during the day.

I just hope I didn't mess it up too bad xD
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Sorry it's taking me so long to post. I spend time catching up on reading others' posts and then don't have enough left to make mine.
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And posted.

Ally's such a viper.
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And posted.

Ally's such a viper.


Love your post, you are aware it says 'that mare of hers' though, right?
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<Snipped quote by AtomicNut>

Love your post, you are aware it says 'that mare of hers' though, right?


Hmm, again english late hour failure. What a day. Fixed.
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@AAB poor faylinn left alone :( XD
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@AAB poor faylinn left alone :( XD


Sorry! I wanted to get Ihana done next. I haven't forgotten about Faylinn.
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Currently where I am right now in writing is my character is sitting in a corner rocking back and forth because he doesn't know how everyone around him is thinking.
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Ok, gonna get to work on replying.

EDIT: When I reply with multiple people, I answer for one person, then I add the others onto that post with edits so if you are waiting for my reply just try refreshing the page. Starting with the king and then going onto Galeran and the maids.
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I'm bored, and with the flop of the first princess I am hesitant to make more characters, but I got a couple of bit characters when thinking on how Lucrecia might've lived. Might appear as offhand comments.

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I like the first one
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I like the first one


That much was granted (due to the title) I was just tossing ideas on what kind of misfit would serve one of the most hated queens of Hiertania. I am hesitant to do it as i have two Hiertania characters.
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I apologize for the short post. I wanted to get one in this morning so I wouldn't be holding people up, and there's a meeting this morning I still need to do some reading for.

Tsar Gatto and Sarcelle Renard have had some excellent posts and are clearly skilled roleplayers.
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Ok, gonna do a really short post for Galeran, then the maids, then reply to KiwiBaer's characters.
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I apologize for the short post. I wanted to get one in this morning so I wouldn't be holding people up, and there's a meeting this morning I still need to do some reading for.

Tsar Gatto and Sarcelle Renard have had some excellent posts and are clearly skilled roleplayers.




But seriously, I wouldn't worry too much about your post length, as the golden rule in roleplaying should always be quality over quanitity. You have been doing a damn fine job making your characters interesting to read about, so as long as you keep that up, things like length will simply come from practice and by picking up tricks from other writers.

And honestly, I feel that I still have a long way to go as I'm still struggling at naturally weaving in details about the scenery and writing engaging action sequences. I guess what I'm trying to get at is that one of the most important things you can do is to always read over your writing and find what you want to try and improve on.
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So one of my characters chivalricly sexually harasses the only girl who could probably give him a decent fight and the other is a well-intentioned airhead.
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So one of my characters chivalricly sexually harasses the only girl who could probably give him a decent fight and the other is a well-intentioned airhead.


>Tempted to chuck the sword in a well/dung/someone and make it look like an accident.
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@AtomicNut Hey man, I was halfway expecting her to 'actually' hit him, so that's good.
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So I had an endoscopy yesterday that included an IV, but they failed putting the needle in a few times so I had a hurt right hand. I'll be putting a post up soon, but it is still bothering me a little.

I hate needles Q~Q
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So I had an endoscopy yesterday that included an IV, but they failed putting the needle in a few times so I had a hurt right hand. I'll be putting a post up soon, but it is still bothering me a little.

I hate needles Q~Q


Well to be fair it only hurts until you get high as a kite with the sedative. And when it wears off.

Get well soon.
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