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“If comrades that you trust gather around you, hope can take physical form and become visible.”
Kakashi, Naruto

This is a conceptual roleplay set in the Naruto Universe within the framework of an alternate universe.

What this means though, is that for the most part canonical characters and events are absent from this continuity. There is no Naruto Uzumaki, and as a byproduct there are no events surrounding that character and Kishimoto’s original timeline in this roleplay. This allows a fresh interpretation of the base universe, new ideas to flourish without needing to cross reference every specific fact, and of course creates a constantly building continuity as mysteries and legends unfold before our very eyes. This is a role-play that does not exist with official canon, however while this is so events have branched similarly to some effect. Core characters from aforementioned official canon have been removed from play but their clans continue to be shaped similarly.

Players will begin with an academy student in Konohagakure that is awaiting the results of the genin exams. This is, in part, due to my belief of what Naruto is about as a setting. Basically, I believe at the heart of it that Naruto is about the character's growth as a genin, the camaraderie they create with their friends, the bonds that deepen through experience, and ultimately the path they take. So all CS’s should be marked “genin” level unless you are applying for a jonin-sensei. Players are encouraged to have as many characters as they can handle, but remember quality-over-quantity as well as to be mindful of many characters. I would personally prefer players to have no more than three characters at the start.

With that said, the RP itself will be as equally plot and narrative-driven as it will be character-driven. I take influence centrally from the first Naruto series in this regard. Character development is central to a good story and at the root of it this is just another collaborative story loosely based on the Naruto setting. I will explain more when the OOC goes up in the subsequent weeks, but I wanted to get our momentum going early. If you have questions, concerns, threats, or thoughts it would be apt to voice them!



Seji Period


Konton Period


Fukugen Period





Konohagakure is one of the oldest shinobi villages in the known world and it continues to be one of the largest to this day despite the struggles it has endured throughout history.

Konohagakure has an erratic history and a storied reputation, one that has led the founding clans to strengthen their bonds and techniques as they work towards ensuring the safety and survival of the village no matter what the consequences end up being. The leading government of the village is a council led by clan elders— specifically that of the Senju, Uchiha, Sarutobi, and Hyuga being the highest on the pecking order of Konohagakure’s long list of noble shinobi clans with the greatest of influence and power. Above the council is the Hokage, whom of which serves as the face of the village though is not completely autonomous in power due to the council’s democratic weight and influence.

The council of elders is currently made up of several noteworthy individuals who have in recent seasons taken up an approach to the state of the realm as a telltale sign that reinforcement of borders, expansion of their presence, and punishment of their enemies is necessary. With the passing of the former Hokage they deem this as an opportunity to remind Konohagakure’s citizens what exactly the Will of Fire means.




















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Hyuga Tsugumi
Twenty-eight years old. Hyuga Tsugumi as we all know is the recently elected successor to Sarutobi Shinichi, who served us well as Godaime Hokage. As Rokudaime Hokage, she has a lot on her plate to take care of though I do find it odd that we would elect someone so young to lead our village even with her accomplishments during the war in mind. Beyond that there is nothing particularly suspicious about our new leader despite how much I look. I know she had an affectionate relationship with the Kagetsu migrant, but as far as I can tell his disappearance and her assignment as an ANBU operative has pretty much made any relationship to be impossible. It would’ve likely ended in tears, at any rate; the Hyuga don’t like out of clan consummation and romance.

Admittedly, my assessment may be particularly my own fault for still seeing her as a bubbly head-in-the-clouds genin— she has gotten more recognizably serious in recent years. She’s been a capable member of ANBU despite sometimes being relatively frustrating to deal with, and yes I am well aware she has access to these files. I am hopeful for the future, but I expect the worst before all else.
— Yamanaka Inotachi

Hatake Toshiro
Twenty-eight years old. Hatake Toshiro is the former “genius” of Team Atsuo—a survivor of the great war that ended eleven years ago following a devastating attack on our village by Iwagakure shinobi. Instead of continuing his path as a jonin like his comrades (Aburame Koyomi and Senju Hotsuma) he immediately shifted focus and applied for a stationary assignment as an academy instructor. His admirable dedication to the future of our village aside, it is odd that he would prefer to remain a chunin given his previous track record.

In recent years he has been promoted to Head Instructor of the Academy, apparently never faltering on educating our youths. Despite his personality being rather stoic and icy, he seems well-received as an instructor by the students and overall is attempting to create unity amongst them. I believe his expectations of the shinobi to be daunting, however, but he does get results and prepare academy students for their prospective futures quite well.
— Yamanaka Inotachi

Yamanaka Inokari
Twenty-six years old. Yamanaka Inokari is the eldest daughter of my superior and the leader of the Yamanaka Clan, Yamanaka Inotachi. Calm yet free spirited, Inokari is ranked as a chunin as of this report, Inokari is a specialist regarding archery and lightning nature ninjutsu. She has a high success rate on missions she is assigned and works well with a majority of shinobi. On a more personal nature she is in a relationship with Senju Madarame, a jonin-ranked shinobi who is six years her senior. I don’t make it my business to gossip, so that is essentially all that is relevant regarding her.
— Namikaze Ayano

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Welcome to Saisei: The Crimson Dawn (Series I)! Let's get this adventure started!
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@Jay Kalton@Kal-El

Under the pretense that we never really got anywhere with Team Haitani in Winter, I'd like to potentially extend the "recent graduates only" rule to you two if you wish to transfer over your characters, though you would have to apply just the same and make any adjustments we can to make it fit the setting. If done, our characters would be 15/16 or 16/17 and Madarame would not be dead yet as far as my current plans are.

What do you think?
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The Legen wait for it dary! Dual Wielding, Eccentric, and Lolified-Uchiha will be coming shortly.
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@Gowi I was kinda conflicted to either start with a new character or continue with Kohaku, but if it wouldn't be a hassle (seeing as we didn't get that far in the other RP) then I would actually prefer to start anew with Kohaku. I just think there's more opportunity for development considering her would be age and current occupation.
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@Gowi I was kinda conflicted to either start with a new character or continue with Kohaku, but if it wouldn't be a hassle (seeing as we didn't get that far in the other RP) then I would actually prefer to start anew with Kohaku. I just think there's more opportunity for development considering her would be age and current occupation.

That’s perfectly fine, you do you, fam.

Also, pretty sure the Kohaku Clan exists in canon/Saisei, so keep that in mind that a given name that is the same as a clan is kinda weiiiiiiird. Just a little kink, lol.
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Huh, never knew there was a Kohaku clan xD

I'm going to be adjusting and changing things with Kohaku's CS so it's probably going to be a few days before I post her up.
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They're anime only, so not real.

#Mangaistheonetruestory

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@Gowi@RyoRyoRyoken@SlothHere's what I've got so far. Only need to work out the personal history at the moment.


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I will tell you to put it in the CHAR tab if acceptable.

Just a public note to everyone so we keep the characters tab nice and tidy, yeah?
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-Moved CS-

Just wanted to put this here. That's all I got so far. I'll be working on finishing him off later today. Feel free to comment on him already if something needs to be changed or whatever.
Actually I'm hung up with the clan relationships because it's an important part of why Nakazono is who he is. (Plus, he's going to mention his whole extended family a lot because of how closeknit the Fujioji's are and I want people to have a reference when I start going off) I have a lot of it pictured in my head but the grandparents (both sides) which are the keystones to the whole branch of their family and how they interact with the clan. Therefore I'm gonna sleep on this instead of finishing up like I thought I could tonight.
Just have the personal History and skillset to finish up. Hooray. :D


And I'm all done. Hope it meets expectations. I moved it to the post with the notifications for your convenience.
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Oh, just for semantics and people not pining over google for hours or even a few minutes— genin height should be in the ball park of 4’9”, if you want a shorter genin they’d likely be under that by only a few steps and vice versa for taller genin.
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@Player 2 I like her. No real complaints on my end, so you have my blessing. Though, one of the other two might have better insight than me.

@Raijinslayer Tropey backstory death aside, I'm mostly okay with her. Problem is, she's a little above curve power-wise. Maybe it's the combination of greater physical prowess, great chakra control and superlative Katon. 2/3 of those things on a character I can buy, but all three (as a genin, anyway) smacks of painfully outclassing the rest of your graduating class.
The stamina weakness is a good start, but it's also somewhat offset by her noted explosiveness.
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Post your CS in the OOC as per the template. The staff will review it. I will tell you to put it in the CHAR tab if acceptable. Profit.
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Okay. I do not understand why people are incidently putting sheets in the characters tab that have not been accepted— those WIP sheets in that tab are essentially GM characters to show you what is coming together. This is not a reason to do the same. You are to apply. I can understand mistakes but this is pretty normal RPG etiquette at this point.
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@Player 2


◈ I fixed spacing and formatting of the CS a bit.
◈ Her height seems reasonable enough for a tall girl of her relative age.
◈ I have zero issues with your clan history, personality, or personal history.
◈ Your family section is fine, though I find it odd to put the given name first for consistency's sake.
◈ I feel like the incorporation of weights would be more apt to see with development of their jonin-sensei's instruction, but it is fine if you wish to keep it.
◈ There have been shinobi who specialize in archery before, such as Yamanaka Inokari (NPC), so you may get to incorporate this in time. But what is your angle knowing this? Taijutsu Specialist or Archery Specialist? Prodigal conditioning aside, and all that?
◈ The custom jutsu seems feasible as long as fights are communicated, planned, and whatnot— but this goes for all jutsu and not just custom taijutsu skills, so heh. I believe the rest of the GM team sees no issue with them.
Accepted.
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@Gowi@Sloth@RyoRyoRyokenI've finished my CS. I would say do your worst but I'm not sure I could survive it. ;) I moved it here to make it easier on you guys

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