Hey I had a question for, well anyone that wants to answer it.
Sapphire is an example of some of my very early character design from a more inexperienced point in my writing career when many of my female leads were based on three out of five standing tropes and all had very similar personalities. As I've RPed here I think with the experience that I've gained some of the more cliche aspects of her character have either fallen away or become more developed to a point where they no longer seem flat. I was wondering what your take on her was. For those of you that have been here since the beginning have you noticed positive changes or increased development since we started and for those that are newly joined what's your impression of her from what (admittedly little as of late) that you've seen of her? If anyone has any comments on my writing style in general I'd welcome those too, though please limit it to constructive criticism that I can improve from rather the citing every little mistake I've ever made.
