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Ight, I'mma do this for now. Feel free to ransack it for all it's flaws and general problems. This is more or less what I'm after, though I feel like I'm missing the tone of the rp. Honestly, I'm not sure if I can play the monster I created, but I love her so much. xD
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@Onarax and I are probably interested in this shebang.
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A bit of time and I'll have a sheet up. This certainly looks a good ol' time and I have always found your RPs a bit interesting, @KoL.
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I am considering it, though if I don't join, it is probably because I am already in several other rps.
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Interested to join what is looking to be the forming magical girl squad
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Definitely interesting.
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Interested to join what is looking to be the forming magical girl squad


Wait for Gerhardt to be the only responsible and/or serious one.
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@Mega Birb

she certainly looks to be the only one who has any business on a battle field. I will not be helping matters in that regard.
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I suppose I need to make a male then.
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Uh, he's a guy.
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@Hammerman
woops. there I go again, reading what I expect to see rather than what is really there. you can see how I made that mistake with that ref though?
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Welcome to foreign territory, enjoy your stay.
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I can see why, the original ref was much clearer but it was waaaay too small.
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Welcome to foreign territory, enjoy your stay.


You can ask KoL how primed the sausage is.
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You can ask KoL how primed the sausage is.


I'm scared to do this but @KoL
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@KoL

I made a magical plague doctor girl.

edit: one a scale of dumb to awesome where would adding a baseball bat as a third form lay?

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Ight, I'mma do this for now. Feel free to ransack it for all it's flaws and general problems. This is more or less what I'm after, though I feel like I'm missing the tone of the rp. Honestly, I'm not sure if I can play the monster I created, but I love her so much. xD


Well, this character really needs a few clarifications. The first is, she's really a normal human, right? Because we aren't having non-human characters for this story, given that fantastic races are nearly inexistent on this world.

Second, are those powers permanent? Because I'd like you to set a duration to them (and take away the conditions for targets to gain immunity to it), since they feel rather powerful the way they are now.

Third, what's the range? Does she need to touch the targets o mark them or can she do it from afar?

That should pretty much be it for now. The rest of the character is ok, though I advise you to not play a too much antagonistic character. That'll likely lead to more problems than any possible entertainment, for everyone.

@Onarax and I are probably interested in this shebang.


Oh, fine, that's good to hear. If you make up your mind just drop in.

A bit of time and I'll have a sheet up. This certainly looks a good ol' time and I have always found your RPs a bit interesting, @KoL.


Take your time, we aren't moving until the weekend or so. Also, thanks for the compliment, I just like to do things that I'd want to see around here more often. Also, most of what I do these days is more or less inspired by things I got from this site over the time, especially from @TheWindel. Really, all I do is be the tape that unites it. Either way thanks again.

I am considering it, though if I don't join, it is probably because I am already in several other rps.


Oh, fine. We will be here if you decide to join in. Take your time to think.

Definitely interesting.


Nice to hear. We'll wait your final say.

@TheWindel @Mega Birb

Are you beginning the lewd talk before the RP is even officially open? And you dare call me the pervert, heh!

@KoL

I made a magical plague doctor girl.

edit: one a scale of dumb to awesome where would adding a baseball bat as a third form lay?



Oh, an interesting choice of character we have here. Though, I have a few things to say about her as well, just to be sure.

First, her abilities are quite alright but perhaps a bit too broad in scope. Maybe you could add some limitations, or trim the less important effects for the time being. Everyone will have opportunities to develop as the story progresses, there's no need to try to cover too much ground at this point.

Well, regarding your question, I feel like it would be rather weird, at least at this point. But you don't need to drop the idea yet, like I said there's the possibility of evolving powers. I can clearly see that it could look interesting, the idea of delivering grenade like attack via batting.

On an unrelated note, a character based around chemical attacks that get stronger with time, uh? That certainly is a source of nightmares to the people at a very different War. Those two lewd rabbits above know it all too well. Hehehe.
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@KoL
I'd like to put my interest here but since you have a lot of applicants already I'd be fine with being a benchwarmer.
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I'd like to put my interest here but since you have a lot of applicants already I'd be fine with being a benchwarmer.


I'm not sure of the numbers yet, but I'm more or less certain that we are still under 12, which shall be the limit for PCs around the beginning of the story. It's always good to start with a decent head count since drops are nearly impossible to avoid over the course of any RP, after all. Having more players mean that the story can keep on going even if one or two quit.
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In that case I'll drum up a CS when I have some more free time, I'll get one down sometime today.
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