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Hidden 7 yrs ago 7 yrs ago Post by Tominas
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@Tominas, Good CS, but these parts:

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The Emperor himself isn't evil, per se, more like manipulated; even the Iron Decree came only when his eldest son and heir was murdered with shivs by noble prisoners who said son wanted to assure clemency to. Dubious circumstances, right?

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Didn't happen.


Duly noted. I will say on the first part, I wasn't going for "The Emperor is evil" so much as "Something something vague military shit to be elaborated on later." That being said, I could easily convert that to "Her father didn't think that the shivs in the night was the whole story" money. As for the second, I'll just pull that. Got a little too much WWII in there :P So no problems with having her dad be a former higher-up? I don't want anyone to know HER, just that her family name used to mean something.
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Duly noted. I will say on the first part, I wasn't going for "The Emperor is evil" so much as "Something something vague military shit to be elaborated on later." That being said, I could easily convert that to "Her father was persuaded by the rebels in the middle of the night" money. As for the second, I'll just pull that. Got a little too much WWII in there :P


1.) Vague Military Shit would do, but run it by me and @Tyki first.

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@Tominas

Also, just to put this out there, the character's backstory was ALOT too modern. think more rennaissance than ww1
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Two more CSes left before I start the IC!
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What parts specifically? Just so I know what the issues are. I know trench warfare wasn't the idea, but I was trying to think of how magic would realistically affect warfare and heavy artillery came to mind :T
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@Letter Bee@Tyki

Mind if I throw up a WIP(here in the OOC)? I'll give you a link to it and a mention when it's ready for review.
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@Letter Bee@Tyki

Mind if I throw up a WIP(here in the OOC)? I'll give you a link to it and a mention when it's ready for review.


I do not mind.
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@Letter Bee
Alright, hopefully that should cover it. If not, hit me up and I'll be happy to change it. As is, I took out the medic targeting and revised her father to sympathizing with the Separatists.

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@Tominas, Accepted; post on the Characters Tab.
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@Letter Bee Awesome, will do as soon as I get off work today. I'm just stoked to get this rp started!
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@Letter Bee Awesome, will do as soon as I get off work today. I'm just stoked to get this rp started!


It'll probably be tomorrow, as that's when I get my last two required CSes - including yours'.
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@Letter Bee

changed the Character Sheet:


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@Rex, Accepted; now post on the CS Tab?
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Originally some random Google Image I found, now Frederick Edelweiss - Imagine him as naked, okay?


Originally Kanie from Amagi Brilliant Park, now Heinrich Edelweiss - Imagine him as naked, okay?
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...I was going to buy my slave from that auction, but it looks like I'll have to work with @Tominas to find another way.
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@Overlord Thraka
Well shit, that was fast.
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...In all fairness, this is a big event for the Empire as a whole. It's a direct command from the Emperor meant to shame the rebellious nobles that as far as he is concerned, killed the shit out of his son with shivs. Additionally, a large portion of the powerful nobility from the city is present, which means a high guard-count. ...Compared to one person with a crossbow. Something tells me the event is nowhere near over.
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@Overlord Thraka
Well shit, that was fast.
@Stitches
...In all fairness, this is a big event for the Empire as a whole. It's a direct command from the Emperor meant to shame the rebellious nobles that as far as he is concerned, killed the shit out of his son with shivs. Additionally, a large portion of the powerful nobility from the city is present, which means a high guard-count. ...Compared to one person with a crossbow. Something tells me the event is nowhere near over.


Yes, you are right.
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@Letter Bee I uhm...I think you may need to rectify this situation in an IC response before anyone else posts.
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@Letter Bee I uhm...I think you may need to rectify this situation in an IC response before anyone else posts.


I usually go GM Post, then Player Posts, then GM Post again, but if this situation prevents the other players from acting, I'll break that routine.
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