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Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by BurningDaisies
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Hmmm... back to the drawing board then~

Thanks guys!
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@NightinGem You could have just stopped at "the ability's too broad and too powerful, and the character's got no drawbacks to balance it". Brevity is valuable. :p
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Ugh, doublesend. Plz remove!
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I recommend looking at some of the other characters, so you can see more or less what we're going for.

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And bear in mind that these are starting abilities. It's possible to build up to something far more powerful over time.

Hell knows how much trouble I'd be in if Noriko had her intended skill from the outset.
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Thanks for the help, guys. I always struggle with socialization and what's appropriate, and overexplaining is rather common for me. x_x Good advice, too.
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@NightinGem

I don't really think the over explaining was a problem. Not for me at least.

I can sit here and try to defend the conceptual merits of the character as I envisioned them, the I actually agree with the assessment you and @FeyBlue gave. Not all of it obviously, but enough for me to consider scrapping the character altogether. Neither of you were disrespectful when presenting your opinions, so I don't see an issue.

Thinking back to it, it was a kid in the candy store moment. "oh this sounds cool! and this seems cool! And I want that, and that, and that, and that...."
It was the sort of mindset you have when you get so caught up in your own work that you don't see the flaws. Happens~

Anyway, back to brainstorming!
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Reposting here

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@NightinGemDon't worry so much. People who can actually be constructive with their criticisms are a depressingly rare thing in this day and age, after all, so it's nice to see there are still people like that I guess.
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Your character concept is pretty cool and has a lot of potential, but I'd suggest fleshing out your ability some more, as it is somewhat ambiguous.

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@byteoflogic I would refrain from giving unsolicited commentary unless it's badly needed--i.e., outright duplication of powers.
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So um, quick note to everyone!

This RP has gotten pretty big very fast and I'm concerned about keeping up on bios and plot by myself, so I've now appointed @Raineh Daze as my co-GM!
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@byteoflogic I would refrain from giving unsolicited commentary unless it's badly needed--i.e., outright duplication of powers.


Sorry, I was only trying to help >.<
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<Snipped quote by Raineh Daze>

Sorry, I was only trying to help >.<


It's understandable, but unless someone's inviting criticism, then it's generally advisable to let the GM have the first say. xD
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I'll keep that in mind! Thanks for the tip!

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Is Akiko good to go yet?

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I'd like to know more about the basic traits of the pistols, though looking better!
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Instead of reposting, I just edited. Don't want to spam the chat ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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@byteoflogic: I think she's good now!
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