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I am also going the way of @NightinGem, for similar reasons. Sorry, everybody. I wish you all well!
"EAT LEAD, GRAVEL MUNCHER!!"

A noise like a train crashing into an aluminum shack enveloped the surrounding area, and a seemingly regretful negari was pulverized before dissipating.

A disembodied voice questioned the... unusual choice of language, "Gravel muncher?"

From Shimura Akiko, a young girl of no more than 14 years and the unlikely source of all this calamity, came the indignant retort, "Yes. Gravel muncher. Like biting the dust."

"Whatever just... hurry up. We need to get going before people show up; the whole city probably heard your lack of self-control." replied the voice, now given form in Belladonna, a master manipulator with little interest in the wellbeing of others.

"We've been at this for months now, and we've seen what, five? six? of these things. I can at least have a bit of fun when we do find something. Besides, it's not like we're going to see anything else tonight."

A split second passed and the bullets came whizzing right back into the cylinders of Akiko's oversized revolvers. She crouched down, waited for a few seconds, and went sailing off, leaving a spiderweb crack in the ground.

A short bit later, Akiko crashed down onto a near rooftop. "The worst part *huff* *huff* is the landing."



Akiko used about half of her magical potential in that frivolous display. Bell was right.
@byteoflogic: I think she's good now!


Yay!
Instead of reposting, I just edited. Don't want to spam the chat ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Is Akiko good to go yet?

I'll keep that in mind! Thanks for the tip!

@Raineh Daze
@byteoflogic I would refrain from giving unsolicited commentary unless it's badly needed--i.e., outright duplication of powers.


Sorry, I was only trying to help >.<
Your character concept is pretty cool and has a lot of potential, but I'd suggest fleshing out your ability some more, as it is somewhat ambiguous.

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