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@Rune_Alchemist completely understandable I can see the flaws now that you told me I'll work on it again asap. Thanks
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New applicants still welcomed?
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New applicants still welcomed?


Unfortunately, the RP is closed at this time, but we can add you to a (very) short list should we need a few others.
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@Rune_Alchemist I would definitely appreciate that. Thank you. I'll start coming up with a character as soon as I can.
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Additionally, do we know when exactly we're going to kick off the IC? I'm working on a CS right now, just wanted to know what that situation was.
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Additionally, do we know when exactly we're going to kick off the IC? I'm working on a CS right now, just wanted to know what that situation was.


Unfortunately, Savo has yet to give me an estimated time that he'll get the IC up. I would say either Tuesday or Wednesday, knowing @Savo and how slow busy he can sometimes be, but don't hold me or anyone else to that.

Scratch that

Just said he'd get it up sometime next week. Probably Saturday.
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As Savo has pointed out, there were a few points in her backstory that required further explanation so I have expanded upon and her backstory a bit more. Here it is. The only changes were correcting a few (embarrassing) grammatical fallacies, and adding another paragraph explaining the dynamic of her non-super powered parents and herself to the tail end of her backstory.
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@Rice Porridge A few things I have to note. For starters, I'm going have to ask that you carefully write his power... because I've seen super reflexes (which is what it essentially is) used to essentially make a character dodge anything (and other stupidity). I trust you, but I'm gonna be careful when it comes to this character.

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and can react virtually instantly

He may also not be able to react to something if it's too fast, even if he can notice it.


lol

Physically, Sigurd is the same as any normal person. He cannot copy anything that a normal human could not do, such as feats of super strength or the supernatural.


Also, I've always been against puttings thing like this in your weakness section... since you're basically saying being human is a weakness.
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and can react virtually instantly

He may also not be able to react to something if it's too fast, even if he can notice it.

fml

anyways, warning noted
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I'll get to reviewing tomorrow, but right now I need to answer a question I forgot about.

@Duoya

You asked about clubs, right? Even a disciplinary committee I believe. Fencing, Drama, Gardening, Occult, Anime, Photography, Cooking, Art, Archery, Film, Reading, Writing, some sports groups and a couple of more groups I've forgotten. So yeah. Sorry for taking so long to answer on this.
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Oooh do Staff oversee clubs? I'm sure Margaret will love to be involved.
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Well, she's still ok in my book and as I said, I think you just need Surtr's approval.

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I'm sort of on the same boat as Surtr on these powers.

Sigurd perceives everything in slow motion; he moves with an incredible degree of precision and can react virtually instantly.

Physically, Sigurd is the same as any normal person. He cannot copy anything that a normal human could not do, such as feats of super strength or the supernatural. He may also not be able to react to something if it's too fast, even if he can notice it.


While I know this begs to warrant some annoyance to Surtr on the "saying you're a human is a weakness" deal, it does bring up some interesting questions on my hand due to the fact that I feel these two statements largely contradict each other.

Sigurd can react instantly, yet he's physically the same as a normal human, which means he should perceive himself in slow motion. Unless I'm missing the obvious, what I'm getting at is that his power is being able to perceive things as if he was in bullet time.

Could I please get an explanation on this all and some clarity on this subject? Once I get a better idea, you're accepted.

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Yeah, staff probably do oversee some of the clubs. What type of club would Margie oversee exactly?
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Hmm.. Tough question. A lot of those groups would be hilariously fun for Margie to be a part of. Drama, photography, cooking, or maybe coach of a sports club would all be fun so whichever!
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@Atroposer Sorry for the delay, I'm dealing with stuff irl and I'm dealing with more writers block. But, he's accepted.
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@Savo
Sigurd perceives everything, including himself, in slow-motion.

To better describe what I mean by 'fast-reaction, normal body', let's say there's a button. The objective is to press it as soon as it lights up. Sigurd will react immediately, before any normal human, but the time from when they start moving to when they hit the button will be the about the same.

I guess that rather than saying "he reacts instantly", it'd be clearer to say that "he has much more time to notice something". If something came at him from outside of his vision, he'd first have to recognize, "that's a bad, time to get the heck outta here" before he can move.

The time he has to notice it is extraordinary long, allowing him to start moving(react) "virtually instantly". In the case of the bullet, he won't be able to hear it coming since it's traveling faster than the speed of sound.

I hope this cleared things up
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Alright then, I'm ok with him. Just get your approval from @Rune_Alchemist and you should be good to go.
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Good to go from me, friend.
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Should I clarify it in the actual CS before I post it?
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Probably wouldn't hurt, just so no one has a similar question down the line.
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