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<Snipped quote by Crimson Raven>

No seriously, we do need more members in Dragon Fang and Frenzy Plant. They may as well be NPC guilds at this point.


Tried to have a character join Frenzy Plant, but Lugubrious kind of vanished from the RP.
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@zarkun

Yeah he still needs someone lol
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@Lugubrious Spoke too soon. I don't think Cyra ever actually joined Frenzy Plant.
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Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD


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im here...

i don't know when i'll post...

its been... a bit of a hellish few weeks...

like 100 plus hours of studying for a test...

ugh.
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im here...

i don't know when i'll post...

its been... a bit of a hellish few weeks...

like 100 plus hours of studying for a test...

ugh.


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@Lugubrious Spoke too soon. I don't think Cyra ever actually joined Frenzy Plant.


If you're referring to the promise I made, I kept it a long time ago; I said that I would 'post'. I thought your interest in the character might have petered out, but if that is not the case I'll edit in a continuation of that mini-storyline.
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Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD



I don't see too many issues with the CS and the issues I do see aren't necessarily going to be game breaking until we see them put into play. I give it my seal of approval. @Expolar@Caits Just lettin' ya see this so that you can critique it.
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@Lugubrious Ah, that may have been me misunderstanding.
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@Baraquiel

Small but rather important typo/grammatical issue, as it changes the entire meaning of and confuses the statement:

His family gave him a dagger to defend himself from hostility when he left the clan on his own. Ikki is adamanat about using the dagger to hurt other people so he currently uses it to make miniature wood carvings. He swore to only use it only in life and death situations.


Adamant is misspelled, but thats neither here nor there, the problem is the way the statement reads, its saying he is determined to use the dagger to hurt people, which conflicts with the character and the next statement.

I would also suggest explicit stating the energy/magical limits of his, as healing magic can be abused or game breaking if not set within well defined limits.
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@Baraquiel

Small but rather important typo/grammatical issue, as it changes the entire meaning of and confuses the statement:

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Adamant is misspelled, but thats neither here nor there, the problem is the way the statement reads, its saying he is determined to use the dagger to hurt people, which conflicts with the character and the next statement.

I would also suggest explicit stating the energy/magical limits of his, as healing magic can be abused or game breaking if not set within well defined limits.


You seemed to have missed the part where I said that isn't a determinable issue until they're actually writing it. We can't predict what might happen. Based on that, we can't ask them to define anything until we see how they're going to write things out.

EDIT: I know I didn't specify what wasn't a determinable issue when I passed judgement, but this was one of them. We just need to wait and see what happens before we know what the issues actually are.
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Need to look through the characters again and see if there's any other magic I need to make for Ariel.
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Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD



Currently using this time to check things online so I can't stay for too long. So to keep things short, you got my approval too.
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Thanks for all the input! I didn't have time to read the cs again once I finished it because my country was struck by TWO. FREAKING. TYPHOONS. and I hurried it up cause we were afraid we would lose power. I'll make the changes on the cs and I'll post it in the characters tab once it's done. ^u^
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I'm taking tonight off and then i'll post and stuff on the next few days
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Thanks for all the input! I didn't have time to read the cs again once I finished it because my country was struck by TWO. FREAKING. TYPHOONS. and I hurried it up cause we were afraid we would lose power. I'll make the changes on the cs and I'll post it in the characters tab once it's done. ^u^


Crimson isn't a GM, just likes to give his thoughts. You have mine and Expolar's OK, so go ahead and move it there now.
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wait... what?? Let me read the character
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Oh, cool, its an interesting character, I like it. Got a bit worried cause there was talk about it being controlling or whatever, but it's pretty cool.
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@Crimson Raven@ExpolarI didn't mention controlling, did you mention controlling?
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