[OOC] Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

[twave]

<Snipped quote by Crimson Raven>

No seriously, we do need more members in Dragon Fang and Frenzy Plant. They may as well be NPC guilds at this point.

@hatakekuro

Tried to have a character join Frenzy Plant, but Lugubrious kind of vanished from the RP.

[Joshua Tamashii]

@Lugubrious pokes

[Natsume Honnaji]

@zarkun

Yeah he still needs someone lol

[twave]

@Lugubrious Spoke too soon. I don't think Cyra ever actually joined Frenzy Plant.

[baraquiel]

Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD

Soul of Purity

Name: Ikki Yamanaka, "Spirit of Purity"
Age: 18
Birthday: February 14
Magic: Arc of Life
Arc of Life is a Caster-Type Lost Magic. It allows the user to heal anyone both physically and spiritually regardless of how deep the wound is. It is a natural enemy of Curse Magic and Death Magic, allowing the caster to protect oneself from curses, diseases, and the like. The caster can also emit an aura that surrounds its allies to provide automatic healing and other support-type buffs, but of course healing and buffs are stronger when the caster applies them itself. The caster can conjure domes and spheres that act as a shield from magical and physical attacks. Using this spell can restore life back to inanimate yet alive objects like plants, but it cannot grant life to completely inanimate objects like stones, chairs, etc. Offensively, a caster can use the magic on itself to boost its fighting capabilities and help make its attacks stronger.

Drawbacks:
+ Restoring life to others requires a great deal of energy. Each time the user casts a spell using this magic, it will automatically make the user sleep an extra hour the next time it sleeps. The caster who used the magic before he slept cannot be awakened and will not wake up until the extra sleeping hour is done. A caster who didn't use the magic will have a normal sleep instead.

+ Using Arc of Life on the same target too much might cause said target to trigger Arc of Life: Supernova, a phenomena that causes the target to transform into pure energy and explode, harming anyone caught within the radius.

+ Using this magic to a target who is a demon or someone with a tainted soul will instead hurt them.

+ Most of all, it is ultimately taboo to use Arc of Life to bring the dead back to life, although it is still unknown whether this magic is capable of doing it or not.

Despite being a type of Lost Magic, the Yamanaka Clan always made sure to keep on practicing this magic and passing it to the next generation to ensure the magic won't be entirely forgotten. The Arc of Life was considered as Lost Magic not because of its power, but because of the abuse of it. Ikki's ancestors were once slaves to evil kings and other royalties, keeping them against their will, forcing them to not be able to sleep and using their magic to ensure the life longevity of the royalties while making sure they stay healthy and protected from diseases. The Yamanakas finally had enough: despite having a pacifist nature, they valiantly fought back against their superiors and fled to a faraway land so they can finally live in freedom and prosperity.

Magic Level: A

History:
Ikki is born to a clan full of life and vigor. Ever since he was young, he was taught to value life in any forms, which is why he grew up not knowing the meaning of the word "hate". What he found quite ironic though, is the tradition of his clan to practice various forms of martial art. After all, if the Yamanaka values life, why would they be doing something that could harm it? He learned the answer to his question when he was ten, where it was a tradition to tell the history of their clan once they reached the age of ten. From then on, Ikki never wondered again and made sure to attend his martial arts practice every single day, proving to be a prodigy even at a young age.

One noticeable thing about him, however, is that he's always mistaken as a girl due to his long hair and feminine-like appearance. Those who are aware of his sex might say that he's a beautiful man. He was never bullied because of his looks: instead, he has been a love interest of many. Ikki is never fazed by his looks as it doesn't actually affect him that much at all, though he gets really flustered when his friends make him change into girls' clothes and fawn over him for his beauty.

Personality:
If kindness can kill, then Ikki is a genocidal maniac. His optimistic outlook on life, his kind and loving personality, as well as his smile and eyes that are filled with happiness and sincerity earned him the nickname "Soul of Purity".

Guild and guild mark location: Dragon Fang (if permitted) or any other guild
Team Members: whoever is in the guild he has joined; lower back

Three Strengths:
1. Skilled hand-to-hand combat
2. Can respond quickly if any of his allies need healing and support
3. Very charismatic
Three Weaknesses:
1. Too kind
2. Afraid of the dark
3. Sometimes letting his emotions get the most of himself

Greatest Love: anyone and everyone (he believes anyone is capable of kindness and love)
Motivation: his drive to live an exciting and meaningful life

Appearance: rr.img.naver.jp/mig?src=http%3A%2F%2F…

Additional Details:
+ Using Arc of Life produces flowers and petals that is unique to each caster of the magic. In Ikki's case, he produces sakura and sakura petals.

+ Despite Ikki's complaints, his family insisted on giving him a dagger to defend himself from danger. Because of his peaceful and kind nature, he swore to only use it in life and death situations.

+ Ikki, without using the magic, normally sleeps for about eight hours. Once when he was 16, he slept for a day and a half straight from using Arc of Life because he accidentally food-poisoned his family, relatives, and friends when they ate his cooking.

+ Ikki is a terrible cook.

[MarshiestMallow]

im here...

i don't know when i'll post...

its been... a bit of a hellish few weeks...

like 100 plus hours of studying for a test...

ugh.

[Joshua Tamashii]

im here...

i don't know when i'll post...

its been... a bit of a hellish few weeks...

like 100 plus hours of studying for a test...

ugh.

@Caits

sets out a plate of cookies and a giant, 12 foot tall Eevee plushie

[Lugubrious]

@Lugubrious Spoke too soon. I don't think Cyra ever actually joined Frenzy Plant.

@t2wave

If you're referring to the promise I made, I kept it a long time ago; I said that I would 'post'. I thought your interest in the character might have petered out, but if that is not the case I'll edit in a continuation of that mini-storyline.

[Zarkun]

Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD

Soul of Purity

Name: Ikki Yamanaka, "Spirit of Purity"
Age: 18
Birthday: February 14
Magic: Arc of Life
Arc of Life is a Caster-Type Lost Magic. It allows the user to heal anyone both physically and spiritually regardless of how deep the wound is. It is a natural enemy of Curse Magic and Death Magic, allowing the caster to protect oneself from curses, diseases, and the like. The caster can also emit an aura that surrounds its allies to provide automatic healing and other support-type buffs but of course healing and buffs are stronger when the caster applies them itself. The caster can conjure domes and spheres that acts as a shield from magical and physical attacks. Using this spell can restore life back to inanimate yet alive objects like plants but it cannot grant life to completely inanimate objects like stones, chairs, etc. Basically the whole purpose of this spell revolves around life. Offensively, a caster can use the magic on itself to boost its fighting capabilities and help make its attacks stronger.

Drawbacks: Using Arc of Life on the same target too much might cause said target to trigger Arc of Life: Supernova, a phenomena that causes the target to transform into pure energy and explode, harming anyone caught within the radius. Using this magic to a target who is a demon or someone with a tainted soul will instead hurt them. Most of all, it is ultimately taboo to use Arc of Life to bring the dead back to life, although it is still unknown whether this magic is capable of doing it or not.

Despite being a type of Lost Magic, the Yamanaka Clan always made sure to keep on practicing this magic and passing it to the next generation to ensure the magic won't be entirely forgotten. The Arc of Life was considered as Lost Magic not because of its power, but because of the abuse of it. Ikki's ancestors were once slaves to evil kings and other royalties, keeping them against their will and use their magic to ensure the life longevity of the royalties and making sure they stay healthy and protected from diseases. The Yamanakas finally had enough: despite the nature of their magic, they valiantly fought back against their superiors and fled to a faraway land so they can finally live in freedom and prosperity.

Magic Level: A

History:
Ikki is born to a clan full of life and vigor. Ever since he was young, he was taught to value life in any forms, which is why he grew up not knowing the meaning of the word "hate". What he found quite ironic though, is the tradition of his clan to practice various forms of martial art. After all, if the Yamanaka values life, why would they be doing something that could harm it? He learned the answer to his question when he was ten, where it was a tradition to tell the history of their clan once they reached the age of ten. From then on, Ikki never wondered again and made sure to attend his martial arts practice every single day, proving to be a prodigy even at a young age.

One noticeable thing about him, however, is that he's always mistaken as a girl due to his long hair and feminine-like appearance. Those who are aware of his sex might say that he's a beautiful man. He was never bullied because of his looks: instead, he has been a love interest of many. Ikki is never fazed by his looks as it doesn't actually affect him that much at all, though he gets really flustered when his friends make him change into girls' clothes and fawn over him for his beauty.

Personality:
If kindness can kill, then Ikki is a genocidal maniac. His optimistic outlook on life, his kind and loving personality, as well as his smile and eyes that are filled with happiness and sincerity earned him the nickname "Soul of Purity".

Guild and guild mark location: Dragon Fang (if permitted) or any other guild
Team Members: whoever is in the guild he has joined; right hip

Three Strengths:
1. Skilled hand-to-hand combat
2. Can respond quickly if any of his allies need healing and support
3. Very charismatic
Three Weaknesses:
1. Too kind
2. Afraid of the dark
3. Sometimes letting his emotions get the most of himself

Greatest Love: anyone and everyone (he believes anyone is capable of kindness and love)
Motivation: his drive to live an exciting and meaningful life

Appearance: rr.img.naver.jp/mig?src=http%3A%2F%2F…

Additional Details:
+ Using Arc of Life often produces flowers and petals that is unique to each caster of the magic. In Ikki's case, he produces sakura and sakura petals.

+ His family gave him a dagger to defend himself from hostility when he left the clan on his own. Ikki is adamanat about using the dagger to hurt other people so he currently uses it to make miniature wood carvings. He swore to only use it only in life and death situations.

@baraquiel

I don't see too many issues with the CS and the issues I do see aren't necessarily going to be game breaking until we see them put into play. I give it my seal of approval. @Expolar@Caits Just lettin' ya see this so that you can critique it.

[twave]

@Lugubrious Ah, that may have been me misunderstanding.

[Crimson Raven]

@Baraquiel

Small but rather important typo/grammatical issue, as it changes the entire meaning of and confuses the statement:

His family gave him a dagger to defend himself from hostility when he left the clan on his own. Ikki is adamanat about using the dagger to hurt other people so he currently uses it to make miniature wood carvings. He swore to only use it only in life and death situations.

Adamant is misspelled, but thats neither here nor there, the problem is the way the statement reads, its saying he is determined to use the dagger to hurt people, which conflicts with the character and the next statement.

I would also suggest explicit stating the energy/magical limits of his, as healing magic can be abused or game breaking if not set within well defined limits.

[Zarkun]

@Baraquiel

Small but rather important typo/grammatical issue, as it changes the entire meaning of and confuses the statement:

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Adamant is misspelled, but thats neither here nor there, the problem is the way the statement reads, its saying he is determined to use the dagger to hurt people, which conflicts with the character and the next statement.

I would also suggest explicit stating the energy/magical limits of his, as healing magic can be abused or game breaking if not set within well defined limits.

@Crimson Raven

You seemed to have missed the part where I said that isn't a determinable issue until they're actually writing it. We can't predict what might happen. Based on that, we can't ask them to define anything until we see how they're going to write things out.

EDIT: I know I didn't specify what wasn't a determinable issue when I passed judgement, but this was one of them. We just need to wait and see what happens before we know what the issues actually are.

[twave]

Need to look through the characters again and see if there's any other magic I need to make for Ariel.

[Expolar]

Ayo! Please do tell me if there's anything I can change about my cs. ^u^
Also want to thank you for the warm welcome xD

Soul of Purity

Name: Ikki Yamanaka, "Spirit of Purity"
Age: 18
Birthday: February 14
Magic: Arc of Life
Arc of Life is a Caster-Type Lost Magic. It allows the user to heal anyone both physically and spiritually regardless of how deep the wound is. It is a natural enemy of Curse Magic and Death Magic, allowing the caster to protect oneself from curses, diseases, and the like. The caster can also emit an aura that surrounds its allies to provide automatic healing and other support-type buffs but of course healing and buffs are stronger when the caster applies them itself. The caster can conjure domes and spheres that acts as a shield from magical and physical attacks. Using this spell can restore life back to inanimate yet alive objects like plants but it cannot grant life to completely inanimate objects like stones, chairs, etc. Basically the whole purpose of this spell revolves around life. Offensively, a caster can use the magic on itself to boost its fighting capabilities and help make its attacks stronger.

Drawbacks: Using Arc of Life on the same target too much might cause said target to trigger Arc of Life: Supernova, a phenomena that causes the target to transform into pure energy and explode, harming anyone caught within the radius. Using this magic to a target who is a demon or someone with a tainted soul will instead hurt them. Most of all, it is ultimately taboo to use Arc of Life to bring the dead back to life, although it is still unknown whether this magic is capable of doing it or not.

Despite being a type of Lost Magic, the Yamanaka Clan always made sure to keep on practicing this magic and passing it to the next generation to ensure the magic won't be entirely forgotten. The Arc of Life was considered as Lost Magic not because of its power, but because of the abuse of it. Ikki's ancestors were once slaves to evil kings and other royalties, keeping them against their will and use their magic to ensure the life longevity of the royalties and making sure they stay healthy and protected from diseases. The Yamanakas finally had enough: despite the nature of their magic, they valiantly fought back against their superiors and fled to a faraway land so they can finally live in freedom and prosperity.

Magic Level: A

History:
Ikki is born to a clan full of life and vigor. Ever since he was young, he was taught to value life in any forms, which is why he grew up not knowing the meaning of the word "hate". What he found quite ironic though, is the tradition of his clan to practice various forms of martial art. After all, if the Yamanaka values life, why would they be doing something that could harm it? He learned the answer to his question when he was ten, where it was a tradition to tell the history of their clan once they reached the age of ten. From then on, Ikki never wondered again and made sure to attend his martial arts practice every single day, proving to be a prodigy even at a young age.

One noticeable thing about him, however, is that he's always mistaken as a girl due to his long hair and feminine-like appearance. Those who are aware of his sex might say that he's a beautiful man. He was never bullied because of his looks: instead, he has been a love interest of many. Ikki is never fazed by his looks as it doesn't actually affect him that much at all, though he gets really flustered when his friends make him change into girls' clothes and fawn over him for his beauty.

Personality:
If kindness can kill, then Ikki is a genocidal maniac. His optimistic outlook on life, his kind and loving personality, as well as his smile and eyes that are filled with happiness and sincerity earned him the nickname "Soul of Purity".

Guild and guild mark location: Dragon Fang (if permitted) or any other guild
Team Members: whoever is in the guild he has joined; right hip

Three Strengths:
1. Skilled hand-to-hand combat
2. Can respond quickly if any of his allies need healing and support
3. Very charismatic
Three Weaknesses:
1. Too kind
2. Afraid of the dark
3. Sometimes letting his emotions get the most of himself

Greatest Love: anyone and everyone (he believes anyone is capable of kindness and love)
Motivation: his drive to live an exciting and meaningful life

Appearance: rr.img.naver.jp/mig?src=http%3A%2F%2F…

Additional Details:
+ Using Arc of Life often produces flowers and petals that is unique to each caster of the magic. In Ikki's case, he produces sakura and sakura petals.

+ His family gave him a dagger to defend himself from hostility when he left the clan on his own. Ikki is adamanat about using the dagger to hurt other people so he currently uses it to make miniature wood carvings. He swore to only use it only in life and death situations.

@baraquiel

Currently using this time to check things online so I can't stay for too long. So to keep things short, you got my approval too.

[baraquiel]

Thanks for all the input! I didn't have time to read the cs again once I finished it because my country was struck by TWO. FREAKING. TYPHOONS. and I hurried it up cause we were afraid we would lose power. I'll make the changes on the cs and I'll post it in the characters tab once it's done. ^u^

[MarshiestMallow]

I'm taking tonight off and then i'll post and stuff on the next few days

[Zarkun]

Thanks for all the input! I didn't have time to read the cs again once I finished it because my country was struck by TWO. FREAKING. TYPHOONS. and I hurried it up cause we were afraid we would lose power. I'll make the changes on the cs and I'll post it in the characters tab once it's done. ^u^

@baraquiel

Crimson isn't a GM, just likes to give his thoughts. You have mine and Expolar's OK, so go ahead and move it there now.

[MarshiestMallow]

wait... what?? Let me read the character

[MarshiestMallow]

Oh, cool, its an interesting character, I like it. Got a bit worried cause there was talk about it being controlling or whatever, but it's pretty cool.

[Zarkun]

@Crimson Raven@ExpolarI didn't mention controlling, did you mention controlling?