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I was thinking the cowboys were a worse fate.
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I was thinking the cowboys were a worse fate.


Did I mention they lacked personal hygiene and were fat?
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Did I mention they lacked personal hygiene and were fat?


Fan service~
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You guys lost me. How did we get onto fat cowboys?
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Reserved, quiet, passionate.
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Here is my character! Feel free to tell me if I need to adjust anything, or if I should explain something more thoroughly. I will go through it more when I don't have tired brain.

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Okay peeps! I'm hitting the hay. I'll post for Darric tomorrow. Joker will be on after work too. Night all!
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Here is my character! Feel free to tell me if I need to adjust anything, or if I should explain something more thoroughly. I will go through it more when I don't have tired brain.



Its very edgy.
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Here is my character! Feel free to tell me if I need to adjust anything, or if I should explain something more thoroughly. I will go through it more when I don't have tired brain.


The history has no connection with Lasthope, we have two people in the group from outside of the town but they were either captured in war or walked in when they were 15 - 16 years old and have a reason to care about the town and it's future because they've lived there.

A bounty Hunter would be given directions to Lasthope and sent on their way as would any travelers, Lasthope has rules of operating in the field and one is "A stranger isn't family" meaning that including a stranger could be dangerous to the Expedition. For all Jain knows she could be a plant leading them into an ambush


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Okay peeps! I'm hitting the hay. I'll post for Darric tomorrow. Joker will be on after work too. Night all!


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I'll go over my personal qualms with it.

- You have firearms. Firearms and ammo are like gold in this setting.
- quantum phycist?? Is she or is she a trooper.
- was she travelling with the army. Did Aaron have a stockpile of ammo and firearms.
- Joined a merc group that only hunts cannibals. Sounds more like a hunting group.
- hannibal the cannibal - really?
- heterochromatic eyes. I just think its edgy.
- injured and surived without medical treatment in a realistic apoc. (Shot and slashed - bleedout, infection etc). Letting her wounds heal. This is my biggest gripe.
- big drinker, survives cowboy encounter. This was a joke but who gets piss drunk and crosses the nevada. Again this is me nit picking.
- survives dehydration...
- no explination as to how she meets the last hope group. We're in oregon (?) not Cali or Neveda.
- seemingly ok health. Despite gunshot, slash, dehydration.
- no explination of how she has firearms and any ammo (if applicable)
- perfect build despite injuries and dehydration.

This is my opinion from a player perspective.

You asked for criticism.

I'm not a GM/co-GM or mod.

The actual gm and co-gms opinions may differ from mine.
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DD is our resident Carp and as a member allowed to speak on the subject just as are all accepted members though mine as Dictator is the last word

I have presented similar questions in my review though I hope more diplomatically LOL

I like her in many respects, Lockpicking is a useful specialty; smashing doors is noisy
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I'm an abused little slut and I will act like it.
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I'm an abused little slut and I will act like it.


Well you are the one we captured and made family even if you sometimes forget it
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The smooth virgin.

Not really
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I am hoping we find trading sources on our trip as we learn to be a unit and flesh out our characters so that we can return just in time to join in the Capture of Portland.

We need to do it so that we can save critical Maritime resources which Feng and his people don't give a damn about and see if the Containers his people haven't managed to open contain any critical supplies or equipment.
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The smooth virgin.

Not really


Summer's the only known Virgin in the Expedition, sure some of the girls or guys might still be such but Summer is a known one
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Portland is our friend.

Amy's friend :)
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