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@Lemons Please, I'd much appreciate that. I was looking forward to Aven interacting with Tori myself, but I'm not sure if he works in this RP.

only good thing out of Atlas is Klein, Penny, and Tori's sweet butt. Interpret that how you will.
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Gonna have to ask you to stop trashing best Kingdom.

That said, any sort of guidelines on what you want the CSes to look like? I'm going to have a few days of a whole lot of time, and not a lot of internet connection and it'd be nice to be able to work on one.
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Room for another, possibly?
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History is difficult. Btw, what do you mean by theme? Like, mythology and stories? 'Cause I went with a Falling Star / Meteorite kinda thing and I don't know if that counts.
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@Elle Santiago

I think the theme was for what music best suited the character. Like a character song...

I think.
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*Spills interest*
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@Polaris NorthLol, I forgot that's totally a thing.
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That said, any sort of guidelines on what you want the CSes to look like? I'm going to have a few days of a whole lot of time, and not a lot of internet connection and it'd be nice to be able to work on one. Thanks for the interest!

I mean, I have the character sheet blank in the first post there. So... a lot like that.
Room for another, possibly?

Yes. Although I'm going to prioritize quality over quantity/timing.
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@Elle Santiago Format's a bit tweaked, but I guess that works. I'd say that perhaps her Semblance can do a bit too much at once, but I may be able to be persuaded. There's also the fact that Ginto reminds me a lot of two of my own Remnant characters, a bit in Semblance and Personality. (Possibly three even.)[Not necessarily a bad thing though] There's also the point that certain things don't seem to... jive well. Like, stealth doesn't seem to come from her past, and isn't really noted in her training, and isn't a quality that'd be linked to her weapon or Semblance either. Also, just want to point out that she'd kind of be a Grimm Magnet. I'm not disallowing that, I just thought I'd let you know. There's also no evidence that being related to a Huntsman/Huntress would give you more Aura.
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So I suppose I should post what I've made here too. Here 'ya go guys.


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All these skinny girls though.
Also, her Nationality should be Atlesian, and you could probably list YLOW as the team.
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All these skinny girls though.
Also, her Nationality should be Atlesian, and you could probably list YLOW as the team.


Seems like you’d want to see some MUSCLES....
Let me add that to my wip cs that I didn’t even post yet.
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Seems like you’d want to see some MUSCLES....
Let me add that to my wip cs that I didn’t even post yet.

Just an observation, and a joke. Thanks for working on a CS.
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All these skinny girls though.
Also, her Nationality should be Atlesian, and you could probably list YLOW as the team.


Heh, I wanted to try for a more childish girl.

And she was just an exchange student in Atlas for a year along with her team but she originated from Mistral and has finished her huntress training there.
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@Polaris North I get it, but Ginto is also a skinny mini.
Didn't her family move from Atlas, meaning she'd be Atlesian?
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Ah, I thought that once immigrated, they would adopt the nationality of where they are now.

But I see now, thank you for pointing it out and I shall edit accordingly.
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@Polaris North While that's perfectly logical- it could stand both ways. And I don't like to use the term "race" if I don't have to. It's kind of more the ancestry angle.
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*Gives you a cup* Welcome!
@Elle Santiago Format's a bit tweaked, but I guess that works. I'd say that perhaps her Semblance can do a bit too much at once, but I may be able to be persuaded. There's also the fact that Ginto reminds me a lot of two of my own Remnant characters, a bit in Semblance and Personality. (Possibly three even.)[Not necessarily a bad thing though] There's also the point that certain things don't seem to... jive well. Like, stealth doesn't seem to come from her past, and isn't really noted in her training, and isn't a quality that'd be linked to her weapon or Semblance either. Also, just want to point out that she'd kind of be a Grimm Magnet. I'm not disallowing that, I just thought I'd let you know. There's also no evidence that being related to a Huntsman/Huntress would give you more Aura.


I knew it! I shouldn't have edited the stealth thing, uggghh. That's what happens when you edit it nonstop and don't give it another day to tweak, lol. Also, now that you've pointed it out, there's a lot of BS in my CS, mostly with the more aura thing. That's mostly because I was reading "The Games We Play" a while back and it stuck in my mind. As for Ginto's semblance, would it be alright if those large AoE, explosion things cost a lot more? Like she'd do it when desperate. 'Cause I really like the premise of her semblance. And if not, maybe just lower the scale of her semblance's capability.

Fun fact: Stealth was supposed to be one of her main weakness because, y'know, shiny semblance doesn't translate well when you're in the dark. But in my eternal idiocy (and embarrassment), I thought, "Let's have her weakness be emotional and strengths to be combat". I'll be changing that asap! Well, if I didn't have classes later, I'd do it rn but I have to get ready.

As for the Grimm magnet, +1. She'd hate it, but she'd love it as well.

For the weapon, I'd probably have her upgrade to get some grenades, one, because it makes sense for long-range stuff, and second, it gives her a connection with her dead father. I'd probably need to flesh out her history some more and make some tweaks with her personality.
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I mean, I have the character sheet blank in the first post there. So... a lot like that.
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Yes. Although I'm going to prioritize quality over quantity/timing.
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@Elle Santiago Format's a bit tweaked, but I guess that works. I'd say that perhaps her Semblance can do a bit too much at once, but I may be able to be persuaded. There's also the fact that Ginto reminds me a lot of two of my own Remnant characters, a bit in Semblance and Personality. (Possibly three even.)[Not necessarily a bad thing though] There's also the point that certain things don't seem to... jive well. Like, stealth doesn't seem to come from her past, and isn't really noted in her training, and isn't a quality that'd be linked to her weapon or Semblance either. Also, just want to point out that she'd kind of be a Grimm Magnet. I'm not disallowing that, I just thought I'd let you know. There's also no evidence that being related to a Huntsman/Huntress would give you more Aura.


Whoops, missed that entirely. Shows how much moving prep is getting to me. I'll have a CS done before too long.
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I'm with Falcon. Looks like you have quite a lot of folks interested already, but if there ends up being room still or if a few kinda cool on it, I'm in. I've seen a lot of RWBY RP concepts in my day but this is one of the only ones that's tacked into the quite under-represented parts of professional huntsmen and huntresses, I like it.
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