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@Lovejoy ahh, thanks.

Do I see foreshadowing? I see foreshadowing!

Out of curiosity, how do you think Ziotea and Indira would interact? Would they have anything to do with each other? Ziotea might be considered as a candidate for the Circle due to the depth of her reserves even if she is 90-95th percentile instead of 99th, and she combines the extra power of Omestrians with the combat skill of Lanostrans. She wouldn't last long if she was, though, given the nature of her power, and it might keep her from being tapped in the first place (took her long enough to master basic control and by then it was clear she wasn't the right sort, perhaps?)

But she is visibly Omestrian, even if she doesn't think of herself that way, or prefers to call herself Lanostran -- or just say that it's not anyone's business and they should shut up. I could see her having either respect or hatred for Indira, if they do have some sort of relationship. Not sure which is more likely, and not sure which would be more fun.

We should probably consider the guy Ziotea messed up, too, and what he's like. Any ideas there? I figured...maybe overconfident, maybe not, but he definitely underestimated her, and I wouldn't be surprised if he baited her -- part of why he got slammed so hard. It probably wasn't a spar, it was just an interaction in the courtyard or something. Perhaps with Rodion and Ragnar present as well? *considering*
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Oh, by the way, I hope everyone is okay with the Crucible Ceremony I came up with. It's a fairly common trope, annually pitting students against each other in combat. The exact details were irrelevant, but it was convenient for Ilya's backstory with Mother Indira and seemed perfectly fitting with the Red Seminary's mission of talent development at all costs.
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HEY IT'S DONE. well save for the relationship stuff I still need to discuss with folks. Anyhow. Shy -> bed
nini! z.z

Oh and tomorrow (today?) I find those stupid armor refs. >.< *flailing*
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oh hey guys, I just thought of this, but Rodion would have to be good at drawing. Not the same drawing as Ziotea, but good at drawing blueprints.
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Based drafting God rod
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Based drafting God rod


what? I do not understand.
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@shylarahThe vibe that I wanted Indira to give off when I wrote her profile was like, a kind of selfish but well-meaning woman who cares about her legacy and research above all else. She was an Omestrian slave, and after becoming an Inquisitor and discovering an entirely new field of magical study, the last thing she wants to do is be reminded of her really shitty and painful past. She might be a folk hero who young Varyans have raised as their great hope, but in actuality, she doesn't really care about the Omestrians who are lesser off than her, and certainly doesn't want to be the rallying point for some revolution. Doing so would only interfere with her work. She does have a love for the Omestrian culture of the past and is well-versed in their legends, but history is history. The Tainted Lord lost the battle, and so the world needed to move on. She certainly has.

When it comes to Omestrian students, she wants them not to embrace their heritage but to hide it, since this is the only way she feels they'll succeed in a largely anti-Omestrian society. For Viveca and Oren, whom she was directly responsible for, she spent many years teaching them how to fit in. But for Ziotea, a student who wasn't in her class, Indira wouldn't have paid her any mind as an Omestrian whatsoever beyond feeling sorry for her to a certain extent. She would have taken an interest in Ziotea's gift of being able to sense and draw ether (purely from an academic perspective), but when seeing how raw her abilities were, and upon talking to her and getting a sense for her closed-off and somewhat hostile personality, Indira would quickly pick up some warning signs. "This girl is certainly talented but no way in hell is she going to be my heir."

So yeah, I think Ziotea has every right to hate her, since she'd definitely pick up on this.

As for Ziotea being a part of the Circle at one point, I think this makes sense. Although, if she knew about Indira's indifference toward her, would she had applied in the first place? Or maybe she realized what kind of person Indira really was after being accepted into the Circle. Maybe Galahad and Ragnar were also in it, but all three probably flunked out early and decided to focus their efforts on other fields.

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what? I do not understand.


Drafting is mechanical drawings and sketching
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Drafting is mechanical drawings and sketching


yea, I understand what drafting is, but I don't get how it fits into Based Drafting God Rod....the entire thing as a whole makes no snse to me...
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He can sketch mechanical drawings right? It a meme
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@Mercenary Lord

Yes, he can sketch mechanical drawings....still don't understand the meme though....
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what? I do not understand.


Yeah me neither. O.o I've never encountered this meme.

@Lovejoy ah, this does make sense. I think the idea of demons would have intrigued Ziotea -- can't be worse than the people, after all. Not that she ever got much choice in those early days about her course of study. Perhaps she had to take a couple lessons from Indara simply because of her ether type and potency, and it was mistakenly believed the woman might have some insight into how to help her control it? Either that or a couple sessions of feeling her out for the Circle. Between her appearance and some sort of carelessly hostile comment shortly after they met, Ziotea is probably a painful reminder of what Indara wants to leave behind.

The girl would definitely pick up on that, and it'd lead to a rather negative relationship. ^.^

Might have to tweak Galahad if he was in/considered for the circle. Ziotea would have encountered him early on, through she might not recall his name later.
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my meme game has failed

I present this as a potential tribute to @Drakey

clyp.it/azm4oyxn

I'm not sure what feel to go for so I've started in a direction and I'll let you tell me what you think

This stuff has actually been great practice for me so thanks for that

It's not long and its not done but I'm working on it
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@Mercenary Lord

Dude, that sounds really great. Here are some ideas:

1) Introduce the music in the background earlier.

2) Make that background music louder and more noticeable.

3) Have the metal sounds (which sound really good, just make them deeper in tone) flow with the music. For the first few seconds, make them random, then start to form them to follow a rhythm. After that, transition them into the rhythm of the background music. THat's when you raise the volume of the music to make it on par with the metal sounds.

4) I like the vibe, but if you can then make it a bit darker, please.

I hope that I'm not overstepping my bounds with this stuff, but I think that you are definitely on the right track. Also, longer would be nice....
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Won't be able to work on it any more today because exam two is coming up, but I hear you and will def take it into account

A lot of that stuff was planned, so I'll work on it when I get a chance

Also if anyone else wants music I can try, though again I am but an amateur with a substantial collection of virtual sounds
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@Mercenary Lord

Actually, I just listened to it several times, don't change the music that you're using just yet.
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The theme or the feel? Right now it's got a kind of mad clockwork vibe
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@Mercenary Lord

I like the vibe, so just do evrything else that I talked about. Just don't change the music you already chose.
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@Drakey@Mercenary Lord This is pretty rad but could you guys take this convo to PM? You’re free to post finished pieces here but we’re already having issues with people not reading the OOC and missing info, so I don’t want it being filled up with conversations that aren’t too relevant. Thanks!
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Hey everyone,

I'm starting to send out the first of my info prompts for your introductory posts. Everyone should receive theirs by tomorrow.
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