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nb4 post 300
Haha it's mine bitches


Sure, you can have it; real rpers worry about getting 100, 500, and 1000 :^)
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Sure, you can have it; real rpers worry about getting 100, 500, and 1000 :^)


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Migyudon I just really really like gyudon

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@Migyudon If you're open to it, I have some constructive criticism.


Lay it on me *prepares the box of tissues for crying*

Kidding. Go ahead!
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"Abi is a naive girl who, above all, is the quintessential little princess, barring some few princess-like behaviour. She's the type to face trouble with an equally challenging grin. Act now, think later. She is fond of things that shine and is covetous of unique objects.
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So this is one of the things I have the biggest issue with. I personally like personalities to be fleshed out, hopefully over the course of 3-4 paragraphs. Describing her a princess is kind of iffy as a personality trait. Go into what makes her tendencies princess like, and why she acts that way.

"Abi comes from a lineage of pure-blooded Shadow Alter Conjurers"
This is a something I have a personal issue with, just because it does some world building sans GM permission. It's not my world, so I can't say if this is right or not, but it's my personal understanding that magic isn't a bloodline thing, anybody can learn any branch if they try. Though this could be my misunderstanding.

"Abi is also part of a two-person singing group called Night N. Gail"
This is a little random, and since this is pretty out of nowhere, it feels weird and forced.
"Gender: Attack Helicopter Homosexual"
Homesexuality isn't a gender, it's a sexual orientation.

That's just off the top of my head. Just trying to be helpful, hope you understand.
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@Natsu

All of these are completely valid. I meant to put in more personality traits, but I opted to post what I had at the time to get input while I fleshed her out in the back.

As per the bloodline magic, I ran it with @TheHangedMan before posting here, and he approved it. If this is going to be a big issue, then I'm willing to change it. :)

I admit Night N. Gail is an ass pull. Not even gonna defend this one; it made more sense when she was an idol in the last RP I used her in ;;

HOWEVER, GENDER IS A SPECTRUM HOW DARE YOU I mixed it up, sorry. Gonna change it in my updated post.

...now do I repost my edited entry or I edit the one that's already there..?
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Your choice, I would repost
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I know we're already good about this all, but honestly, the whole bloodline thing doesn't seem like it would be problem from the get go. Honestly, if there's a problem with that, then Natsu, you would have to end up having a bit of a problem with apps like Pleeks, or essentially anyone who came from a rather seemingly powerful upper-class sort of deal.

However, I would like to emphasize on Pleeks a bit more since it does do a little more world building than most of ours in my opinion (no offense to anyone else I hope).

Plus, while some might disagree, backstories are a part of world building. Our characters are apart of the world after all, so no matter how big or small their impact is, there is still a bit of world building in the backstories. That's all I really felt like saying, honestly... I probably should of explained it better, but maybe another time.
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apps like Pleeks


What's Pleeks?
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roleplayerguild.com/posts/4486628

Pleek, forgot to add an apostrophe there for the s part, but they essentially are one of the users involved in this rp; they control our Chinese maiden with silk hiding snakes and other nasty critters.
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What's Pleeks?


roleplayerguild.com/posts/4486628
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Character Submission v.2

@thehangedman Could you see if I'm still not in violation of anything? QvQ



@HeroicSociopath@Savo Thanks for Clarifying! I'll give the other character sheets a read now.

Also @Rune_Alchemist I'm looking forward to how our characters will interact. This is definitely something to behold when they do ;)
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@Migyudon Welcome to the crew. I'd say to avoid the crazies, but we're all crazy here.
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Migyudon I just really really like gyudon

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@Migyudon Welcome to the crew. I'd say to avoid the crazies, but we're all crazy here.


That settles it then. Time to jump in!!

I have no clue how to jump in. Do I just assume that I was there all along or do I enter stage??

I'm new to Forum Roleplays please help me.
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@Migyudon Congratulations, you get Room 115-E

@Natsu Aren't you happy Melody?

Anyway, to jump in, just insert yourself into the current scenario. As of now, everyone's either in the mess hall or retiring to their rooms. You could likewise shoehorn an interaction with a current group, or interact with someone who's available.
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@Migyudon Kai she reached the dorms building because he went to bed sooner, you can poke him there if you want
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@Kaesus I've got a post for you soon. Meet your roommate and all that.
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AHHHH
@Migyudon We're gonna be BEST friends.
And scared of our roommate together.
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@Kaesus I believe I posted in the rules about character minimum? Really, I've been lax with said rule so far but your post is giving me very little to work with at under 500 characters.
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@Kaesus I believe I posted in the rules about character minimum? Really, I've been lax with said rule so far but your post is giving me very little to work with at under 500 characters.


Yeah, my fault, I'll fix it, no problem :)
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So, in the least spoilery way possible....
What kind of hell should we be expecting?
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