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Migyudon I just really really like gyudon

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@Blu Alright. I'm sifting through my characters to find the most apt one. Although I think I know which one to pitch.

Will make a CS hopefully before today ends (currently early morning here)
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Alllright, so my character is up.

Yes, they bite.

And yes, you might find them eating someone in not the fun way.
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Prescott was born in 95 and is 26 just wanted to point that out
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@DeadDrop

Shit. I forgot to change her birth date when I changed her age

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I mean. Whatever are you talking about?~
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Alright, got my character sheet done @Blu!

Now if @Cryfest does make Suzie's boyfriend and has that approved, the last couple paragraphs of my backstory would need to be in line with that character and approved by them.
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@ProPro Only issues I see are some of the special trait namely his strength and the icy chill the wendigo brings. For strength, it needs to be dialed down significantly. At peak, I would accept being able to crush and cut solid rock with relative ease and on average I would accept something along the lines of crushing thick bones and cutting through tough hide. Those would be acceptable limits. As for the chill, get rid of it as a fatal power completely. You can keep it as cold air that leaves a thin layer of frost but not enough to kill people.
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Alrighty~ Below is my super barely-barebones CS. Expect a LOT more to be added, but for now I have this to show for it-- just to give you all an idea of who I'm putting up front.







Once again, this is the barely-barebones CS. I want to hear your opinion/s on her before I get deeper into my character. :)
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@ProPro I'm down with your character background, I like that they've interacted before (even though its a negative interaction xD)

Also, Everyone is very active! I had a lot to catch up on when I got home from work! I'm really looking forward to this RP.

@Blu Let me know if anything in Quincy's CS needs expanding. I didn't change much from the interest check.


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@ProPro Only issues I see are some of the special trait namely his strength and the icy chill the wendigo brings. For strength, it needs to be dialed down significantly. At peak, I would accept being able to crush and cut solid rock with relative ease and on average I would accept something along the lines of crushing thick bones and cutting through tough hide. Those would be acceptable limits. As for the chill, get rid of it as a fatal power completely. You can keep it as cold air that leaves a thin layer of frost but not enough to kill people.


In regards to the chill, I have no idea what you're asking me to do, because that's already exactly what it is. I never said it was fatal, just that the cold doesn't become a problem for people unless they're being touched, but then they're probably already dead. As in, they've been torn to shreds by a hulking super strong monster. Never once did I state or imply the cold was lethal.

As far as your restriction on strength, I'm certainly happy to reduce it, but mathematically the examples you gave make no sense. You already approved an incubus that has 4x human strength to work with, right? I'm assuming that's 4x peak or at least very fit human, because 4x average is pointless and well attainable by most people. A highly fit human can bench press 600 lbs (again, nowhere near peak human record of over 1000 lbs.). Converting this act into force, we get slightly more than 2668 newtons of force. Now that's just a lifting act, not an actual punch, which would naturally be more as it comes at a much faster acceleration. The amount of force required to fracture the femur (the strongest bone in the human body) is about 4000 newtons, well attainable by a highly fit human. If we multiply that previous number of 600 by 4 then the lifting force becomes over 10,675 newtons (which again in an actual attack will be far greater as acceleration will be a significantly higher factor). Many animals are much stronger than this. Hell, my pet pig could crush a cow femur in his jaw. A car door is fastened by hinges and small bolts, it's not all solidly welded to the larger vehicle (or else it couldn't fulfill its purpose as a door).

I'm more than happy to alter the highest level of strength to your wishes (though just saying "rock" is really vague since that's anything from extremely brittle soft talc to the hardest materials on the planet like diamond and corundum), but the examples you've left for me make no sense.

Edit: And one last thing I just thought of. Depending on what time of year it is at start, and how long you intend the story to run, a lot of the wendigo' potential range won't mean anything.

Edit edit: Also how many times do you expect him to trigger the change? Because I figured it would be about 5% of the time, he'd make some screams, then devour some animals/hapless NPCs. Most of the time he'd be in normal human form.
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@Migyudon I see nothing wrong with it so far but I'll reserve judgment until your sheet is complete.

@Cryfest Since Quincy is just a normal human being, he wouldn't be seen as a threat more than level 1. So take off a star and you'll be good to go.

@ProPro Regarding the chill, the description is vague so some of the things I read made it sound lethal or at least incredibly harmful upon physical contact with the wendigo. First being the title "Icy Chill of Death" and then the sentences that read "It leaves frost in its footsteps and chills everything around it, as though it were devouring the warmth of life just by existing. This usually isn't a problem for its prey unless it touches them." So you can see how I might mistake it for something being lethal or close to it once the wendigo actually touches the victim (assuming it hasn't torn them to shreds of course). But if you're saying that that's not the case and it's actually the same as what I specified I wanted, then this is a non-issue.

You make good points regarding the strength. I would still like it if it isn't tossing the car door as easily as a discus. As for the rock comment, I mean a solid slab, something not porous but of course it's safe to assume I'm not talking about diamonds here. I would still like for you to decrease the wendigo's strength. I don't want this ending up as a dick-measuring contest for power levels because, again, it's not a combat RP. In regards to the Incubus, it's a creature that's been around for centuries so I gave it some leeway. But more than that, I've talked with Old Amsterdam about my expectations for handling the Incubus' power just like I've talked with anyone that has a powered character. So rest assured, I'm not just letting one person be the strongest of the pack. So I still want you to decrease the wendigo's strength but I'll leave it at your own discretion on how to do it and I'll trust that you can keep things balance in the course of the RP.

The frequency of the change may only occur at 5%? That's surprisingly lower than I would've pegged and I'm glad. I'm reading that it triggers upon the sight and smell of human blood so there might be a high chance for it to trigger. But I guess the human side is quite cautious.
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@Blu Ok, that all sounds fair. I've no intention of being "the strongest" in any case. In fact, I usually make characters underpowered to their setting. I like that challenge more, and it reflects in Gwyn I think. It can be hard to have a proper scaling reference when there aren't many examples for this setting to work off of though. In any case, so I can have some point of reference, what's the approximate date, and how long do you intend the story to run in game?
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@ProPro The date when the RP starts will be August 21st, 2018 but I can't really give you an accurate determination of how long the story will run. I have story points in my head but, you know, things change within an RP depending on the players and how they progress. So we'll just have to see how it goes. Question: does it have to be full winter for the wendigo to become fully powered or is the presence of snowy weather enough even if it isn't naturally caused? Might have to do something like the latter if we end up not approaching winter just so I can give your character a chance to really flex their stuff.
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@Blu Good question I hadn't thought of. Since it's a spirit, things can get kind of wacky and vague. I had just been thinking actual winter, but if we need tothen it's not out of the question that we could finagle some artificial power up via making snow.
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@ProPro Alright I'll leave it up to you to decide if/when the time calls for it. Let me know once you've made the appropriate edits to your CS.
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@Blu Awesome, got it fixed and up in cs :)
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@Blu Okay... I think I actually have something... What would you say to this... A girl, kidnapped at a young age by a cult to be used in a dark ritual to presumably create some evil messiah... But since the cultists are idiots they messed the ritual up and the girl ended up bonded to a wraith entity. They can't be separated and they can't survive unless the wraith feeds off of human life force. So the cult still manages to insert the little girl into their propaganda, manipulating and brainwashing her into submission. She would eventually escape and/or be rescued and will start her non-stop struggle with the wraith's hunger and blood-lust for human life force. And ever since she has a soft spot for missing person cases and as such is drawn to Innsmouth.

If this fits with the setting I'll start fleshing her out.
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Go for it.
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@ihinka You can go ahead with the idea but I also suggest to do it in a way that will distinguish yourself from ProPro's character. His character is also possessed by a supernatural force and that force also satiates itself with the life of others. It's not the same when it comes down to the details but the concepts are still pretty similar so just make sure you do enough to distinguish your character.
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@Blu Ok, so I changed up the average strength to chucking the car door like a discuss "with significant effort." I also double checked some references and found that slate (the stone you suggested) has a hardness rating of 5.5 while steel is only one point harder at 6 to 6.5. So considering how close they are I altered it from tearing steel like paper to tearing through steel with serious effort. Do these slight alterations in word choice create an acceptable nerfing?
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@ProPro Okay, that sounds great. Accepted~
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