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@Wickwe had like a week of collabing together ideas and stuff, so don't worry too much about it.
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Were there relationships and enemies formed? Is there a link for the interest check so I can try to catch up?
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@Wickmmmmost of it was in the discord.

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here was the interest check, not much there but feel free to read

major thing that is revealed (IC) is that Fenros has a relationship with the princess, he was her bodyguard for six or so years beforecoming the general. Also had a romantic relationship with Ritza which was in secret really because of their positions. Other than that I don't want to reveal just yet for plot reasons. Things to remember is that Fenros and Ritza would be well known because of (Ritza being a woman in the vanguard, unheard of, and been the bodyguard to the princess for five years, also unheard of) (Fenros is well known for his kindess towards commoners and his swordsmanship/knighthood,savingtheprinces/becoming the youngest general in the vanguard)

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@LordofthePies We already discussed this some. Once we talk about those alterations some more he'll probably be accepted.

@Wick I adore that sweet little badass. Now I will say this, the King isn't actually sexist, not only did he train his daughter to be an exemplery diplomat but one of his most trusted, albeit secretly, advisors is a woman. So my advice alter it to an insult about being poor something he does discriminate against.

@pandapolio So your cs is nice. I like him loads already. I can't wait to read your writing Example! One last thing, re-read your CS and check for missing words. While I don't get super annoying about gramma while In Casual, I do like for sentences to be legible without playing fill in the blank.
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@OneStoryToMany Sorry about the grammar, I made the cs while in a rush. I will go through and fix the grammar.
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@pandapolio Thanks :)
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I hope it's ok. I changed it and moved it to the char tab. :)
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@Wick Fine with me! And to be honest, I think it actually flows a little better now. A single insult about educating your child isn't the same thing as constant insults regarding one's place in the world. She's accepted. I want you to know since your character is the only character that is removed from the current events like this, I'll have to place them in a couple tricky situations to get involved in the plot, you'll have a slower beginning than the rest of the cast.
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I think it does too. I was also thinking that being that she runs a bar that she would be up on the latest gossip and the news of what is going on from her patrons. Some of them would also be vanguard and ouroburros.
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@Wick Now I know how I'm getting you involved, at least partially, into the plot. Do you mind me running an NPC friend of yours for a bit?
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Nope I'm good with that. Do you have any idea on who you want this friend to be? I have time to make one if you want me to.
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I'm interested in joining. I'm still reading through the factions and will need some time to catch up on chat and characters but I wanted to post real quick. Is there anything major I should know that I won't get from the initial post and skimming the characters?
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@Nymerianothing really, just characters who are nobles and how they know each other. But you can pick that up quickly, Feel free to ask me any questions

Edit: Actually magic is available, yet the easier you use it the more you will be hated by the public. Its more normal for it to be super hard to use.
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I would like to make a character that is rebellious against the crown in nature, but doesn't entire fit into either the Veiled Ones or the Ouroborros. Could I make a character that has mild ties to the two rebellious factions (or just the Ouroborros if both wouldn't work) but is not necessarily a member?

Or actually...now that I'm looking at it, what if my character was a member of the vanguard but worked as an informant to the Ouroborros, but wasn't a full-fledged member? Is that feasible?
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@Nymeriaforgot to tell you, that is Feasable to me, depends on what One story really.
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@OneStoryToMany I'm really sorry, I didn't even realize that the grammar was that bad. I have been reading through it and was surprised, and I will try to not make that mistake again.
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I believe I am done with my cs. Really hoping he accepted. And I am making sure the grammar is good right now.
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Hello, I would like to join if it is still possible :) I hope I didnt make any major mistakes in the CS, if so, feel free to point them out and I will do my best to fix them.


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@pandapolio I'm fanning myself. A dashing prince this Baron is. He is now forever Baron Charming in my head. He's accepted and thank you for cleaning the grammar, it's at a satisfactory level.

I would like to make a character that is rebellious against the crown in nature, but doesn't entire fit into either the Veiled Ones or the Ouroborros. Could I make a character that has mild ties to the two rebellious factions (or just the Ouroborros if both wouldn't work) but is not necessarily a member?

Or actually...now that I'm looking at it, what if my character was a member of the vanguard but worked as an informant to the Ouroborros, but wasn't a full-fledged member? Is that feasible?


I like the feel. I do technically need this kind of character (if just to save me the NPC) should you decide this is the kind of character you want, and their CS is accepted I'll pass all the IC knowledge I can think your character will need and could have gotten.

Hello, I would like to join if it is still possible :) I hope I didnt make any major mistakes in the CS, if so, feel free to point them out and I will do my best to fix them.



A thousand times accepted! I love the way you shaped the environment as well! Dhaeva will do her job to a tee I'm certain. And I like that there'll be a second powerful female magic caster! Especially one who is the complete opposite of the Ouroboros Leader! They'll probably be enemies by the way! But I love this character!
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