Seeing as it is nearing 12AM CST (in a few hours, that is), I might as well get these out of the way.
@Raddum Issues we spoke of have already been addressed.
@ALonelyParrot
1) I need you to choose a color for your sheet, unless you intend to stick with white. Crimson and Aqua are already chosen colors. If you do choose white (or any color, that is), I will need to differentiate between text and dialogue to establish what is what.
2) Age issue. While I'm fine with someone playing a younger character than the rest of the cast, I do need to say that the age needs to be bumped up. Perhaps two years, leaving Cinder as a 12 year old.
3) When I meant remove the periods from the [.hr], I meant just the period rather than the code itself.
4) Number of typos were spotted through out the sheet, so these will have to be addressed.
@Gummy1295
1) I need you to choose a color for your sheet, unless you intend to stick with white. Crimson and Aqua are already chosen colors. If you do choose white (or any color, that is), I will need to differentiate between text and dialogue to establish what is what.
2) Please change it to where it says thirteen rather than "13 Years Old" (in the same spaced out manner).
3) Typo issues here and there that need to be fixed.
4) While I'm often lax on a short personality and biography, I do feel like you could expand more with both of them. Also, I might just be somewhat paranoid, but I feel like your character personality traits are awfully similar to the faceclaim's personality traits.
5) Technically a typo issue, but I think it warrants its own point. The reason why I labeled Character Name was so it would go, for instance, like "Character Name" was born as/to and so on.
6) Similar issue to #5. Relative #1, Relative #2 is where you should put Father, Mother, etc. Relative Name is where you should put the full name of said person.
7) More so a question rather than an issue. What is with the quote down at the bottom?
Understood. Arrangements will begin immediately.
