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And plus I did it all complicated, where my original (which is still unchanged) is in Blue's PM box, lol.

Which is funny because I chose to go the PM route in fear of me being new I'd mess up a bunch of stuff, and yet I ended up messing up anyway, lol.
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Hidden 7 yrs ago Post by BlueSky44
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To avoid anymore confusion, @Morose is now officially Co-Gm
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@LordofthePies Blue asked me to screen your CS. Here are some issues I've found:
  • It appears that you copied large amounts of text and CS info from @Blu's sheet. This needs to be changed.
    • You copied his birthday.
    • You copied his quote.
    • You copied his theme song.
    • In some parts of the CS, you're even using his color code
  • You are missing the Extras needed under anything else - please re-read the rules for what you need to include there
  • You have incorrect color coding for the personality traits, as well as two many. It should be 6 traits - three negative, three positive. The negative in red, the positive in green.
  • Please break up his personality section into two paragraphs - and throughout, he should technically be referred to as 12. He doesn't know his real name is Ronan and per what @BlueSky44 said in the OOC, you can switch to using their real name after they've learned what it is.
  • Fears need to be listed in bulleted format and you need 3.


Once you've fixed these, please resubmit and your CS will be evaluated again.
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I'll get to work on editing it.
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@LordofthePiesHobbies, Fears, Dislikes, habits, appearance and character summary are the color codes that need changing.
Edit: Psych traits as well most are Red.
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That is a lot better, however there are still a few things that need to be fixed.

1. His birth year would be 2314 if he is 20 at the beginning of the RP.

2. Still missing something else under the Extras section.
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Ha, okay, now it's finished. Is the color okay?
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That is much better, you can move him over now
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So we're waiting on @BlueSky44's and @melissahart's characters, correct? Also, what'll happen to the roles that aren't filled? Will they be NPCs or something?
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They will become background characters, until either someone dies and wants to claim one, or I might let other people create them if they feel comfortable with controlling another character.
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Shooting to start IC posts on Sunday.

@melissahart Wanted to know if you were still interested in the RP
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Hi! Yes I am! I will post my CS ASAP sorry for the delay!
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Don't worry about it, I still need to finish my CS too.
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Hey, so, unfortunately, things have come up and I'm not going to be able to join. Have fun though everyone!
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I'm still in this thing, right?
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