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I am currently re-working it so that his kit revolves more around the Newton Control aspect, as that seem very unique to me, and does seem quite OP as a secondary ability.

I'll try to theme it as well, because I want everyone to be happy with this RP, so everyone should agree about the level of acceptability of my character :D
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Fine idea my man. I hope there is no bad blood between us because I pointed out what I thought. Can't wait to read the new CS :D
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Of course not! I love getting constructive criticism, it makes me a better writer and character creator. I actually appreciate it! Thank y'all for your input :D
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Yay for happy endings!

Also glad to see this resolved peacefully.
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So, I'm having a bit of trouble locking down what I want for my character's core ability, and was wondering if anyone here would have some suggestions or preferences. The ideas I have so far are(Note, these aren't the names the ability will be given):

Soul-The user's able to physically manifest their soul. The first side power for this would be covering themselves with it, as a form of armor, similar to the venom symbiote

Nerves-The user can manipulate the nerves in their body. They can shoot them out to connect with other things, animating them and controlling them, or attaching them to people to allow for a greatly increased efficiency in communication

Space-The user can create rooms or vast spaces, of varying sizes and shapes, and even has a large room in an alternate space they can access.

Green ARmy-The user can create plant minions, which she's freely able to design, but come with restrictions on production

Pyromancy-An oldie, and a bit of a cliche, but it hasn't been picked yet, and its kind of weird to see a super power rp taking place without at least one person using a heat based ability

Pointer-The user has a floating arrow which she's capable of manipulating the physical world with. It would be similar to the mouse on a computer screen interacting with a video/ paint editor, which is kind of OP if not done right.

Combine-The user can combine things either temporarily or permanently. Could be used for fusing individuals, animals, plants, materials, etc, etc.

Stories-The user was blessed by Anansi, the god of stories. A possible ability for this is plot armor-a defensive ability that's just a raise in a character's luck when being attacked. It is, however, one of those abilities that if not handled correctly could be OP

Mine-The ability to create markings by physical contact, which have various effects like explosions, immobilization, and repulsion

Desire-The first ability I can think up for this is taking properties from one thing to another.

Multiplication-The power to multiply things like the user or certain objects

Divide-Similar to multiplication but in reverse.

Okay. I'm going to stop there, because if not I'll keep on till it's time for work, and I want to at least have a submission posted before I go in ^.^;





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In my opinion, the soul one seems like the best mixture of being interesting and not too OP. That or the plants, actually.
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Soul, Nerve, and Multiplication all seem like really awesome powers to me, I think you could make something really cool with one of these.
Desire, Stories, Combine, and Pointer I dont really think of any useful applications for those, though im sure you have some in mind.
As you say, the classic Pyromancy is a choice to consider, albeit cliche. Maybe a back-up if something else doesn't work out, since it's so simple.
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@RoflsMazoy
Can I be Clara's loyal toady and head of the disciplinary committee?

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Related question, how would Rurik feel about being shot at every time he's late?
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@Gentlemanvaultboy he would give less than no f*cks, so go for it XD

I like that, Clara hates him and so he has a bullseye on his back that your character targets maliciously, lol.

As long as our glorious leader agrees anyway.
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@jynmi88 You could actually use several of those together, just have one at full strength and the others at weaker levels.

@Bartimaeus Other then the formatting I actually don't see many problems with your character. Maybe reduce the physical stat increases and the maximum strength of your Newtonian Control. Maybe limit it to reducing an Items weight by 50%, or increasing gravity by up to 5Gs. And don't forget the negative aspects of it either. As for the strength boost from training within the field... Muscle training doesn't work like that, so don't follow DBZ logic. You can be maybe twice as strong with that alone (using science, Because Science). It is just normal resistance training. And don't forget about reducing molecular friction to cool things down. Just my opinion of course.
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@KillamriX88@6slyboy6 Here we are! Hopefully my adjustments are satisfactory. :D


EDIT: Ya ninja'd me, @Zardoric. Sorry bout that but I already changed it up xDD
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Ah well @Bartimaeus, you really should have waited for the host opinion first... Edited my character a bit. Added a sentence actually. And a word. In addition to how he was, he is now a bit of a joker, and his Perfect Spirit allows him to make contact with such ethereal beings.
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@ZardoricI do still have the original, but I kinda like this new version better. It feels better as a whole, and matches the rest of the RP, being as his powers have a theme(the theme being manipulation of his environment via his mind).
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Boom. I'm done. Sorry for the long wait, It was hella hard to choose an image.The reason is that I collabed with Hammerman so that these two princesses are twin sisters. Understandably I had to find a similar image that was still different enough.

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Nice sheet. It'll be good to have the sister dynamic in the RP 😁
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*nudity intensifies*
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Lmao.

Btw y'all have any thoughts on my new sheet or is it good as-is?
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@Bartimaeus oh yeah, I had a long answer that I accidentally deleted.

TL;DR - I like it. It's really cool. I'm pretty sure you cannot make a punch more powerful by changing the gravity tho. Increasing gravity would just make you lose the energy that you gained from lower gravity. Other than that, I can't wait to fight him
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My idea is that it makes his fist much heavier. If that doesn't make sense, lets just say that he turns gravity sideways 😂😂😂
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All I'm gonna say at this point is wait for our glorious leader to return and give his opinion, don't write off your older version just yet, and your new version is definitely more balanced and fair.

I don't wanna go any further until we hear from him.
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