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So, I'm including a rough bio for one of the NPC servants I made for this RP. To give an idea of what kind of stuff you can do for a character.

The Personality and History are left blank because it's an NPC servant, but I hope you get the idea and it helps you direct your character more.

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@Reflection Believe I finished up Hildr. I still need to complete Loralie. Please let me know if anything needs adjusting on Hildr. I will probably do the finishing touches on Loralie in the morning along with any changes needed for Hildr.
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Edit. The full moon during August 1939 was on the 29. This is for Berserker's Master.
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So, quick reviews. Will probably have more depth later.

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This is more tricky.
I'm going flat no to Tan Vien Son Thanh. Mostly because Gods, except in rare cases (Chiron, but he gave up his immortality) tend not to show up for Grail Wars. Also, his power just being Earth powers doesn't really endear me to the concept of him. He's probably too powerful, and I have no doubt you'd kill your own mage in a minute with that mana drain.
As for Viktor Muller, he's better. (You didn't copy a wiki page.) But I'd need more of a history, and mages tend to only have one element, not all five. (That's kinda unheard of.) As well as his magic is kinda all over the place. The ability to shape stuff most likely wouldn't be fire related.
Since I'm guessing you're new to the series, if you need help, just ask and I'll help write down what certain aspects might help you develop your characters.


Thank you, and just forget Tan Vien, i will make a new servant and update him soon.
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@Reflection It's worth noting that whatever their elemental affinity is, magecraft is something that can be taught and not everyone learns a uniform set of things. For instance, most normal mages can craft a simple familiar from an animal corpse or raise a simple bounded field. You see mages like Kiritsugu or Shirou limited to 1 or 2 things, but people like Kirei and Kayneth have studied in all sorts of fields. (I mention these two because in the anime it's mentioned what they've studied.)
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Hey guy, I'm really really sorry to tell this, but I'm a bit busy now, so I'm out.
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@Selvariabell@Red Alice@ManyThings@YourDarkPriest@Seirei No Hai@Indra@Vertigo@Ashen One@Grape
THE OOC IS UP!

EDIT: Please, keep me up to date. If I don't hear anything from you by the 6th, I will consider you aren't interested and will invite the others who have taken up interest since the OOC dropped.
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@Reflection

Woo! Also, my Master and my Servant are ready for review.
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Is this still open for more people joining?
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Not really, even if someone drops out there are already a few people who've asked about joining.
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Ah that's fine, already guessed I was a bit late lol
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@Peace More slots seem to be appearing. Head to the OOC for a chance to play.
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Genghis Khan, beautiful.

About 1 in 200 men have confirmed genetic markers leading back to Genghis Khan. World wide.
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